OS: One Small Little Secret

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Inn dono stubborn idiots Ko kya naam doon ?...

Shhh... It's a secret!😆

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Zahra

@Minnie.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

hahaha hahaha hahahah hahaa jokka nice one soo kwl wht a awesome thing to do i rate u man bless ya keep it up love ya muwah

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Hey,

Just came across this one and it was great... Typically, ASR to do what he did - trying to make Khushi jealous.. when he himself is bitten by hurt and rage.. I love the way you've w

If I didn't have the time, darling..
I'd make it up,
if only, you'd have it in your heart,
to spill the little secret
and leave it to me to deal with the tears and the smile..

Love,
Dee

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reflektions

@reflektions

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

aaah..arnav babu, ghusse main liye hue faisle aksar ghalat saabit hote hai.

That said, You did a great job in portraying the pain that must have passed through both their hearts. Would love to see a follow-up wherein what is in their hearts come out through some incident in such a way that no one can deny they love each other, not even themselves.

loved the OS 😊

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Saba Sheikh

@shona_123

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Thx for the pm dear... lovely OS u are reall an amazin writer...
waiting for sum more...

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Sexy Sobti

@--BSI-FaNaTic--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

well written i loved it...

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Writer42

@Writer42

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

That was great. Loved reading it.

KF

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

how much did I miss, you wrote so much while I was gone *hmph*

Anyways, sad ending?? Awesomest...I wish it had happened like this, but know what my greedy mind says, I want another oart to it.😛

Fantastic job ;🤗

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

this was written before that episode? oh wow. either you are seriously psychic or you are part of the CVs.

brilliant writing. almost all the emotions.. that happened in the episodes.. almost exactly.. far better in prose than in video.

you're an amazing writer.👏👏👏👏👏