IPKKND: Relief - Page 3

Muahahahahaaa! In your face snake! :DD See, you are nothing, NOTHING in front of the 'mighty' ASR.

Amazingly written, as always. :) Who'd have thought that it might actually be possible to enjoy an OS on this character of all in the show, but there you go, your writing is so good, it even makes Shyam bearable. To an extent of course - he is Shyamu after all. -_-

Originally posted by: renee27

nicely written...but shyam will take a lifetym 2 realise his mistake...moron he is...but u hv written it vry beautifully

So glad you liked it! I don't think Shyam on the show can ever truly reform. He's too far gone for that.

Originally posted by: sarach

superb..amazing

Thanks.

Originally posted by: the_rain

Oh My God! Nayika, what have you done? 😲

This was unbelievably good. Those who know me knows how difficult it is to render me speechless, but you've just actually made me speechless. I was looking at the screen in awe.

Thanks, thanks for writing this. I've been longing for so long to write something from Shyam's POV but never got enough courage as I knew I'd hate to think as the creep. And you've done it so wonderfully, I can't say how much I like it...

Aww thank you so much! I'm so glad I could make you speechless :P

Haha, actually thinking like Shyam wasn't that hard but mostly because the Shyam here is a bit different (mentally imbalanced I would suggest) to the creep on the show.

Originally posted by: angel_eyez123

OMG! I freaking love this OS...it's so different to the usual FF's we see where Shyam loves Khushi due to her looks...here we see him thinking of ASR as competition...I really really hope CV's gain some inspiration from this OS.

Thank you! Yeah I really don't understand Shyam on the show. I don't get why he would want to possibly ruin what he has with Anjali (lots of money and lots of free time) going after Khushi. And if it is just a lust/attraction thing, why has he never attempted to kiss Khushi or anything?

Originally posted by: -Gautami

WOW..superb..luvd it!!👍🏼
So beautifully written..u r an excellent writer👏
Keep up d gud work..n tanx 4 pm😃

Glad you liked it and thank you so much!

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Wow yaar

Totally new perspective and I just loved the fact coz I seriously feel that Shyam is here to stay...

or else it is more than enough time and opportunities for his exit sooo if he is still here then it's simple that he is staying till a very long time... (though I secretly his part ends quick)

Thanks so much! :D

Yeah I feel like Shyam will still be there 6 months from now :(

wow!! I never thought anyone could write something on shyam's POV so well. Amazingly amazing. This was so different to read. Felt awesome after reading it.

Originally posted by: sushi-la

this is nice new perspective it is interesting and i love how you say that shyam only wants khushi because he wants to share a conversation with someone about how much he hates arnav singh raizada. and why does he hate him? because arnav looks down upon shyam for his lack of success. arnav is a successful business tycoon while shyam is still working to make his name in his life..i love this insecurity of his..

wonderfully written! brava!!

Thank you so much.

Yeah I don't like what they're showing on screen where Shyam doesn't really have any motivation for wanting to marry Khushi so I thought I'd give him some :) Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

wonderful dear:)

Thank you.

Originally posted by: sruthirishi

amazinggg...👏

totally a new prospective!!!!

thx for d pm😊

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: smithasrk

😆loved it. thanks yaar really needed it

Thank you.

Originally posted by: krazzy4ArHi

superb nayikaa man u gave da shyman thingy da whole new perspective loved it n waitin eagerly eager fr ur next update n thnks fr da pm <3

x

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

fabulous...

Thanks.

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Nayika, this is absolutely brilliant! You've captured Shyam's state of mind so utterly perfectly, that I didn't hate him! Not for a moment! Fabulously done! :)

xoxo

Aanya

Thanks so much!! I can't believe I managed to make you not hate him! :O I'm shocked1

Originally posted by: tina_1234

amazin dear..very well description of shyam's pov..i loved d endin..khushi kissin arnav's knuckles

Thanks! Yeah I had to have a little Arhi action in there :P

Originally posted by: smitar

Shyam defeated by Arnav n Khushi. And that too because they love each other! Wah!

Love defeating Hatred! Just superb!

Originally posted by: immayurfan

Nice os

Originally posted by: bhavnah

it was a grt update

thnxx for the pm

Originally posted by: soni4eva

wow supers os luvd it

fanx 4 da pm x

Thank you all so much! :D

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

that was BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!! at first when i read that it's a Shyam OS i nearly skipped it but then since it was you who was writing it i HAD to read it and im glad i did! it was very very very mind blowingly amazing!

Thank you so much!

I should stop saying things like 'This is a Shyam OS' or 'This OS has no Khushi' it always has people not wanting to read it! :P

Glad you liked it in the end though!

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

wow, totally different...loved how you wrote it...hope Shyam gets some sense into his brain in the show, but we all know the chances of that...anyways it was great...thanks for the pm

Thank you! Don't think he ever will on the show though :P

Originally posted by: soho19

I am absolutely stunned at your ability to read through situations, and then potray them in you own way so clearly, that we start thinking along those lines as well 👍🏼 Absolutely wonderful new perspective, beautiful writing as always, and lovely OS. Will be waiting for more, love. and thanks for the PM 🤗

Thank you so much! :D That is so sweet!! Glad you liked it! Hope you like all my future work too!

Originally posted by: egle

👏👏👏That was so bloody fantastic! I am practically chortling in glee at being able to read somthing of this nature!! You know, a majority of fanfics and one shots are about arnav-Khushi being all lovey-dovey. It takes a pretty awesome writer to create such stunning work on a character so disliked by all!

👏👏👏

I am so happy I get PM'd! It would be a crime to miss out on something like this! 😊

Thank you so much! :D

I do actually like Arnav/Khushi lovey dovey fics but I'm not too great at the romantic/sexy stories so I prefer more introspective ones like this,

II'm so glad you liked it and thank you so much for calling me an awesome writer!