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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS -Your acidic tears!


All you did was run towards me like an angel and hugged me with so much tenderness and love wrapping her arms around my back...That moment there was no one in between us but for our hearts meeting..."Why, I Wondered? Why would you come to me...Why would you pour your heart out to a monster like me?."...

I have never seen her like this before...completely shattered and distraught...and all I wanted to to is hold you close to me and comfort you and in return that would comfort me...

All I wanted to do is embrace you and wipe your tears...but you just took a step back from me...I looked at you wanting to know, "Why Khushi...Why did you hug me?"...and then take a step back...

You gave me the world and took it away instantly...crushing my heart... I wanted to come closer and pull you towards me and never let you go...

But you just ran away...and my heart just kept longing...wanting to say so many things to you, but I couldn't..

I came home so restless...Why couldn't I think of things to say to you...I never wanted to upset you in any kind of way Khushi... "I am so sorry for not being there, I know you thought I never cared, I never want you to feel that way, I never knew of what to do or say. All I want to do is be at your side and not see u hurt yourself with all the pain you tried to cover up and hide..."

Your tears didn't stain my shirt...it burnt my heart as if someone had poured acid on my heart...your acidic and heartrenchingly stinging tears burn through my heart torturing me physically and mentally...

There you were standing in front of me yet again...in dire need of money... but all I wanted is for you to come back running to me and hug me just one more time...I went to ease your pain but yet again you thought I was selfish...I am so sorry that you looked at it that way, hopefully the truth will come out someday...

Please let me come back to you just one more time, so that I can hold you really tight until your pain subsides and wipe your acidic tears from your eyes...


I hope you liked it...Thanks for reading and do comment...😛



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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww brill pov from arnav! i love the way he sees why she stepped away and sees that she thinks he doesnt care for her
really nice os :)

xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zbegum

aww brill pov from arnav! i love the way he sees why she stepped away and sees that she thinks he doesnt care for her

really nice os :)

xxx


Thanks darling...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's really beautifully poignant!!!!!
Please write some more...you have an amazing talent!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Juicee_Sushie

It's really beautifully poignant!!!!!

Please write some more...you have an amazing talent!!!!!


Will surely do...this ASR brings out my emotions...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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too good yaar too good!!!!
hats off fr such shots!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb introspection of Arnav's thoughts dear!!... Her tears like acid dripping onto his heart... what a thought awesome!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahi0809

Superb introspection of Arnav's thoughts dear!!... Her tears like acid dripping onto his heart... what a thought awesome!!


Thank you so much...their scene burnt my heart...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful!...That was very touching!!😊 Thanks for the PM! xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Nice OS. Do Write More. I Love Your Work.

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