Precap OS : And there was someone for me|Part Two|

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Now I tried hard not to write one since I still hadn't done my homework, but , here it is, unfortunately🤣 I hope you like it!


And there was someone for me


'I hope he will be alright.' Shyam signed.

I actually hope not.

Tears threatened to fall from her eyes. No, I have to be strong, I have to, for Amma, Bauji, Jiji, Buaji, they will break down to see me like this, I have to be strong.

'See babuji, I made some chai for you, weren't you wanting to have some yesterday. Here, you will get better and I will make some jalebis for you. Bauji, I am not going to leave you alone. I promise,' and she hed his hand tight and squeezed it tight to assure him that she will be always be there for him, no matter what happens. She will be there for him to support him all through this, to make him feel that his daughters were no less than sons.

Sashi laid there, eyes closed but aware of all the actions happening in the moment in the ICU, but unable to react. He could also sense that the pervert was near, giving his family assurance. He urged to squeeze Khusi back and reach out to her and tell the truth. But his body didn't favor this time. He was too weak to respond to her.

Payal stood there , close to Amma, seeing Khusi trying hard to control her tears. She wanted to tell her sister that she was there with her, but she failed. The fear of loosing Bauji overpowered.

'It's all my fault, I shouldn't have gone there. I shouldn't have left him, in the time when he needed him. He was always there when I used to fell sick, stayed up whole night along with Amma.' She remembered Bauji's eyes when she was sick . The fear was evident and he had rushed from the shop as soon as he heard that Khusi was sick. 'Bauji, you were always there for me when I needed you, this time I will be there for you and nothing will happen to you. It's a daughter's promise.'

There was something in his eyes, which managed to keep me calm sometimes. I would have blabbered and prattled a lot to keep my tears blocked, but they were threatening to fell. He must have felt the same thing when his parents died.

'Bauji, I will have a word with the doctor, see, I am sure he is gonna say this' : she tried to imitate the doctor, 'Mam, your Bauji is absolutely fine, there's nothing to worry , he needs dome sufficient rest and that's it.' 'Don't you think so Jiji,' she said beaming with a smile, and blinking here eyes often to make sure they dried before her tears dropped.

Sashi wanted to smile at his daughter's innocence. She always managed to keep her bubbly self and cheered up. He wanted to get up and hug her and say that he was perfectly fine, he wished he could.

''''..

She had a word with the doctor. The condition was critical. He should have been admitted then only, but it took time. The words were ringing in her head. His condition was critical. This can't be, her head screamed. This will be the second time, and she will not be able to take it. The time her parents passed was when she was too small, and thought that her parents had gone somewhere, maybe they will return soon. And she could always see them when she peeped through the window of the orphanage. The aunt there told her that they had gone to meet God to seek her blessings, and she can always see them in the night sky. She imagined of meeting them one day.

Tears clouded her eyes. This time she will know where he will go. No, she can't, she can't let that happen! She rubbed her eyes and wore a beaming smile and went inside the ICU. 'I talked to the doctor, he will be alright.' The tears would fall any moment.

..:|:..

He sat on the bed, eyes fixed on the laptop, trying to read the document. Since the meeting was cancelled, Aman had sent him a document which he needed to review and send him back as soon as possible. But nothing seemed right. He felt restless. Why did anger always won over him? What on earth made him do that? There was no answer.

Om Prakash was trying to tell him something since he arrived. He finally gathered courage and went inside.

'Sir.'

'What happened Om Prakash, I told you do not ---'

'Sir, but listen to me. Khusi's sister had called, her father's condition is very critical, they were searching for her. I wanted to tell you that where is she?'

His hands fell from the laptop. Her face came in front of him, telling how she had lost her parents.

He grabbed his car keys and rushed outside leaving Om Prakash confused.

..:|:..

She saw her Bauji's breathing become irregular and his face was becoming tense. She felt her breathing would stop any moment. Her mother's and sister's eyes were clouded with tears too, only they had the freedom to let them fall free. The doctors rushed inside.

She couldn't take it anymore. She rushed outside.

She saw him standing there, and without thinking a second time, she rushed and wrapped her arms tight. He was the only one who could now understand her, relate the situation and support her.

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At the first he felt odd at her behavior . Then Om Prakahs's words came to his mind.. he wrapped his arms around her, and whispered, 'Am there for you Khusi, he will be alright.'

Khusi, without lifting her head and burying her face let those drops fall. 'And there was someone for me.'

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yyho6BYNQtc[/YOUTUBE]



Part two, check the last page for the link to my gallery (original thread)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res :D

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Wow Sancho...that was amazing...😳
the setting was superb and so was the description...šŸ‘
u described everything so amazingly...šŸ‘šŸ¼
amazing workšŸ‘...keep it upšŸ‘šŸ¼ and keep writing..!!!

Luv
FatzšŸ¤—
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me second me second

hey sancho so swt dear...šŸ‘

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Murphy šŸ¤— This was superb! Loved how Arnav rushed out as soon as he got to know and how Khushi felt he was the only one she could relate to =) Loved it <3
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nice...i think mostly it will be this way...
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Hii...Sancho😊😊😊
Thats great Sancho I just hope it happens on Monday.
I terribly want him to Hug her back I want an Intense Hug...
oh how cute he will look while saying
'Am there for you Khusi, he will be alright.'

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Hi yaršŸ¤—..it was so dam niceā¤ļø..the way u portrayed khushi's pain it made me cry almost...and when arnav said i am there for u..ahhhšŸ˜i wish..šŸ˜
Aini..😳
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reading this os has made me more impatient!!!
wonderful writing sancho
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loevd it dear , the song you added is really beautiful it is going with your Os... it is really amazing...do write its next part please eagles hotel California right
Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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omg this is sooo nice and tv realistic...if you get my drift, lol
awesome stuff
xxx

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