The Way I Feel for You -- btw nice topic 😉
"Hey Devi Maiyaa, what is happening? When I'm near him then Dhak Dhak, when I go away from him even then Dhak Dhak and now that I'm remembering him, then also Dhak Dhak. Yeh disease to permanent ho gaya!" --> Acidity aru kuchbi nahin he .. the disease seems to be permanent ... to which Aranv seems to be the cure ...
"Woh...woh..woh La..Lard Governor ne." Fine. Only this was left to happen, Khushi you are feeling bad to call him a Lard Governor? Duh! --> so why nt call him Aranvji...
"Aadmi? Aadmi nehi rakshash hain rakshas woh Lard Governor." Payal mimicked the words that Khushi had probably said hundreds of times to her. Khushi made a face and gave a little push to Payal. "It's a time-waste to talk to you Jiji, you are troubling me more. Go to sleep, I'd just...I'd just come in a while." --> this coming from Kushi mouth doesnt sound good ... oh i see the sisters have inter-changed their dialogues .. nice
Idea! --> idea tho accha tha par if anyone has a say in it it will not work ... how could it they are keep getting attracted and attached to each other like magnets ...
Feeling rather pleased with her decision, Khushi opened the dabba once again and finally started to devour the food. Anjali-Jee is such a great cook. She thought as she ate and felt glad inwards that she remembered Anjali not that Lard Governor. (na na dr itz nt because she is a great cook .. itz because lard governer ..oopps sorry i mean Aranvji gave the food .. god if kushi got electicutedd just by touching the dabba ... i cannot imagine wht would have happened if he had feed her ... )It was so glorious to eat food after breaking a fast, she thought pleasantly and immediately a memory wave hit her. The memory of him holding her carefully and making her drink water, breaking her Teej fast... -- it seems tht these guys have done everything tht a married couple is suppose to do .. ok ok nt every thing ... but atleast most of the rituals have already been complete ... they seem to be married to each other without been married ... god tht statement was confusing ...
No! Khushi Kumari Gupta what did you just decide? No thoughts of him alright? -- the more u try to forget someone the more u remember so u better give up wht u still can .. and dont think tht u have to forget him .. but think tht u have to remember to remind urself tht u are suppose to forget him ... tht didnt make any sense i suppose
"That's right Khushi but what's this? You've still got that Dabba in your hand?" -- god tht z fun ... thank god he just gave a dabba .. i canot even imagine if he handed over a pot plant from his wonderful garden wht kushi would have done
"Err..Err...well there's Shyamji. He's an outsider, nah? He can steal my Dabba." Khushi replied as she settled herself down in the bed. --> cannot blame her for thinking so ... tht Sham gives me the creeps ... god i hate him
She could feel him near her. Oh no, what's he doing here in the kitchen. Lard Governor, can't you leave me alone for a while? -- how could he darling he is head over heels in love with u .. lol
Having said so she turned around and pretended to be busy. After a few moments she turned back to find the kitchen empty. Wow! The Lard Governor went away so soon today? Didn't even argue once. Good for you Khushi, no Lard Governor,no Dhak Dhak! -- she is suppose feel the Dhak Dhak when he is near , far and even close by .. so when he is not well isnt it suppose to get doubled .. why didnt it ????
god love the way u have interpreted him falling and the way she attend to him ... i think it sounds even better than wht i saw in the epi .. specially the shoulder scene ...
i hope u like my comment😉 and sorry for ruining ur plot ... i justed included stuff tht crossed my mind when reading ur OS
btw did enjoy it a lot ... magnificent ... pls include his magical laugh in ur next OS ..
see u around dr
- - badra