ArHi - We Both are Empty Shells - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Magical like always Sadaf !! Soo beautiful.
Specially these lines :
My unmoved Emotions are not free like everyone else
My Questions to Life are distinct with their looms
But, when you came closer to me,
Something has been taken from deep inside
The secret that i once kept locked the doors from all is now out in the open.
You make me futile every time.

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Beautiful words as always Sadaf!! i really really liked the way you depicted Arnav's feelings!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
A Beautiful post👏,Thanks😃

From you smile and laughter,
To your gentle touch,
I never thought I could,
Miss someone so much.

I know we are very different,
And worlds apart,
But I guess in a way,
That''s how you stole my heart.

Now my heart is but an
Empty shell.
For it only wants,
Your love to dwell.
Posted: 14 years ago
#14
Sadaf!!! 👏Once again you've nailed it!! Those were beautiful words you've used!! You've explained their feeling fantastically!! Loved it x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
oh godd dii!! did u write it YOURSELF..omg! its so cool!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
Sadaf that is absolutely, mindblowingly, STUNNING :| <3

I loved it! The emotions were expressed so well! Keep up the awesome work :)

xoxo
Aanya

P.S - Thanks for the PM :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Hi sadaf...reallly so so swt yaar..

thanks for the PM...

congrats keep going...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
thanks for the pm
i love this and great job
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
Amazing😍...gosh u are a amazing writer😲...
u describe their feelings so amazing, superb work👏...
loved reading it❤️...keep writing!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
aww..sadaf wa t a beautiful poem! loved it<3 thx 4 d pm !:)

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