Jalebis drowning in Sugar free syrup! - Page 7

Originally posted by: neloufer_IPKKND

ek mindblowing poem and 100's of comments ...toh agar do ho toh?? ya fir aur???

start a poem gallery for urselves!!

OMG! here pure spamming going on!

gallery?! mere bas ki baat nahi hain😊

OMG this is just awesome and I totally loved it =]

Originally posted by: cindrella255

@ Zain Arrey I know Zain... ainvayi post kiya 😆

@ laali Don miss Zain's new post
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1890089

Originally posted by: current

CInders...🤗🤗 you are the sweetest..

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Accha Zain...my eyes r drooping! had a gr8 time here...Catch after sum time...ciao

@ laali ... catch u l8r babe...ciao

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Originally posted by: cindrella255

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Accha Zain...my eyes r drooping! had a gr8 time here...Catch after sum time...ciao

@ laali ... catch u l8r babe...ciao

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cute poem! loved it!:)thx 4 d pm !enjoyed reading it!:)

jelebies drowning in suger free syrup?! yup that kinda sums up ArHi's lovestory! lool!😆

Originally posted by: taanu112

cute poem! loved it!:)thx 4 d pm !enjoyed reading it!:)

Thanx Madi...Glad u enjoyed it

Originally posted by: subtlesapphire

jelebies drowning in suger free syrup?! yup that kinda sums up ArHi's lovestory! lool!😆

Thanx subtlesapphire!😃

Awesome i loved it soo much!!! very well written and what u were hesitant to post this?! it was great and i also liked the title of the post very much!

Originally posted by: cindrella255

Hola girlies!

There are amazing analysts, poets, poetic analysts, intellects,brilliant writers, all-in-one etc etc'..here in this forum'..So I really had to garner courage to post this

I don't know what made me to write this, I wrote from Khushi's POV'..

Errr...I have not categorized it...If it resembles any particular category...
its purely coincidental😆

Sorry for a stupid title...was not able to think of anything else!

You insulted me , it created the first slit

You misbehaved with me, a hard hit

You defamed me, the cruelest cut

You called me cheap, hated my very sight

You challenged me, I surprised you with my wit

You cared for me, My opinion changed for a bit

You were in pain, I could not bear it but

The doors of your heart were shut

I was happy, like a flower

You embraced me as a sunshower

Its your proximity that makes me shiver

Day and night your memories hover

Though your words are filled with wrath

I find unexplainable solace in your warmth

You always hurt me deep down to the core

But the realization that it was you, agonized me more

You never wanted to listen my explanation

Have you ever realized the effect of your detonation

I believed you to be an eclipse for my happiness'..

Wrong was I, you extracted it adding to my loneliness

Leaving it only in my name

In your eyes I see the raising flame

It's always me whom you tend to blame

Heartless you are, as you claim

Is apologizing such a shame

Finally you did, when it was high time

Is there still exists a ball game

My heart is no more tame

Is it me or do u also feel the same?!

P.S - People who want 2 throw tomatoes are welcome to do so at DaShing_ Girl and sbanik , cos they r the culprits who asked me to post this😃

Thanks for reading my rant

This may be exaggerated, insane, lunatic...Share your verdict!

Firstly, Sorry, Hazaar baar Sorry 🤗 coz I am replying so late.. Kya karoon?🤔 Caught up with Durga Puja yesterday..😃

The title of this thread is very creative and depicts our beloved couple's story perfectly.👏 Tumne toh title se hi dil jeet liya hai yaar..😃

@Bold...😆 That comment shows daily shows se kitni affect ho gayee hai tu Sharmi..😆

As I had told you in the PM, your poem is awesome..😃 Thank god you posted it. See the repsonse you got...10 pages already..👏

BTW, Mujhe aur Sindy ko akkha duniya mein world-phamous bananeki kya zaroorat thi?😆 Ainvayi Humein itna important bana dala..😳 Anyway, tomatoes aate toh bhi We had no problems, we would have utilized them very well..😳😆 But I knew your poem would not garner anything less than thundering applause.👏

And girls 🤗who are glad that we nagged Sharmi to post this brilliant work of hers, we would continue to do so in near future...Chhodenge nahin Sharmi ko..Yeh vada raha..😃😳