Jalebis drowning in Sugar free syrup!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hola girlies!

There are amazing analysts, poets, poetic analysts, intellects,brilliant writers, all-in-one etc etc'..here in this forum'..So I really had to garner courage to post this

I don't know what made me to write this, I wrote from Khushi's POV'..

Errr...I have not categorized it...If it resembles any particular category...
its purely coincidentalšŸ˜†

Sorry for a stupid title...was not able to think of anything else!

You insulted me , it created the first slit

You misbehaved with me, a hard hit

You defamed me, the cruelest cut

You called me cheap, hated my very sight


You challenged me, I surprised you with my wit

You cared for me, My opinion changed for a bit

You were in pain, I could not bear it but

The doors of your heart were shut


I was happy, like a flower

You embraced me as a sunshower

Its your proximity that makes me shiver

Day and night your memories hover

Though your words are filled with wrath

I find unexplainable solace in your warmth

You always hurt me deep down to the core

But the realization that it was you, agonized me more

You never wanted to listen my explanation

Have you ever realized the effect of your detonation

I believed you to be an eclipse for my happiness'..

Wrong was I, you extracted it adding to my loneliness


Leaving it only in my name

In your eyes I see the raising flame

It's always me whom you tend to blame

Heartless you are, as you claim


Is apologizing such a shame

Finally you did, when it was high time

Is there still exists a ball game

My heart is no more tame

Is it me or do u also feel the same?!


P.S - People who want 2 throw tomatoes are welcome to do so at DaShing_ Girl and sbanik , cos they r the culprits who asked me to post this😃

Thanks for reading my rant

This may be exaggerated, insane, lunatic...Share your verdict!




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Posted: 13 years ago
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sugar free tomatoe pies at u baby doll 🤣

heyyy partner šŸ¤— i just logged in and this is da first post im reading on this beautiful sunday! i think kushi would give u a jalebish jappi for writing this cuz i enjoyed it!!

much love to miss granger & sneha for nagging u to post this šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hai shari šŸ¤— a good one.
i will throw jalebis 😳 for a sweet poem to a sweet cute girl
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Nadzy - Awww! thanx hun! šŸ¤— Glad dat u liked it!

It took me more than a week to post this... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lwfw

hai shari šŸ¤— a good one.
i will throw jalebis 😳 for a sweet poem to a sweet cute girl



Hiya Sharu šŸ¤—

Thankooo.. jalebis?! I love them...

is this a poem? r u sure?!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I luvd it:-)..luvd d title too..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Cute ..enjoyed reading it..great you did post it and thanks to those girls who encouraged you to do so..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome poem with an awesome title!!
loved it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cindrella255



Hiya Sharu šŸ¤—

Thankooo.. jalebis?! I love them...

is this a poem? r u sure?!


yes dear for me with my left brain😭 you are too better šŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lwfw


yes dear for me with my left brain😭 you are too better šŸ‘



Awww! Thanks Sharu...U r such a sweet heart😳

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