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rechus

@rechus

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Excllnt work.. Aftr read this i felt i saw an episd.. Thanks..

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Heya Bristy!!!

I'm so glad you've written something. Your writing is always a pleasure to read.

This was a fab OS. I really enjoyed it.

I do hope you pen the other ideas you have. I'm sure they'll be great reads too.

I really liked the way Arnav helped Babuji. It was very instinctive. I also liked the way he introduced himself as just Arnav.

The apology and thank you was very sweet. It was a perfect moment.

Fab piece of work sugar!!!

😊

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

so u feeling better?

Loved the interaction b/w future pa/son in-laws...pls make it into a SS!

-Sona

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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

wow bristy! mwahh! i luved it!

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Zuzana

@Zuzana

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

loved every bit of it👏..hope this really happens

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Priya_128

@Priya_128

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

very nicely written...it was a fab read :) surely makes up for not having an episode tonight :) 👏👏

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Marci

@Marci

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

U write beautifully!!! I love reading your work!!! Awesome OS dear...hopefully Arnav and Babuji have a good rapport on the show!!!

Love how u portrayed every conflict..whether it was internal or external!!!

Do continue to write more!!!

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nabeela.

@nabeela.

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

That was brilliant! Really enjoyed it.

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incandescent

@incandescent

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

great. enjoyed it a lot. I am actually waiting to shashi-arnav encounter in the show.

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Very nice. I liked that KKG's dad is very sensible and hope Shyam doesnt do him any harm in the show.

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