OS: A Father's Instinct

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Bristy

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Posted: 14 years ago

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mimi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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it ws superb!!!!

i jst lovd it!!!!

damn it...yaar!!!!!!

hw cn u write so beautifully!!!!

amazing ideas u hv mst say!!!!

i hope smthng like this happens in the show!!!!!

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arshia

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@rain..that was a very sweet OS.I really wish the equation of Shashi & Arnav would be just perfect...as much as you have potrayed the silent appreciation and understanding.

Awesome OS👏

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SillyPepper

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Heya! dat was really wonderful!

I want Arnav and Khushi's father to share a gud rapport in the show too!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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wonderfully executed...looking forward to read more from you...loved each and every scene...specially one with KHUSHI and ARNAV...hope same thing happens too...good day

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Sanchari

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Posted: 14 years ago

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That was so good Bristy!!!

I loved how you described a fathers' feeling towards her daughter, lovely...
Seriously yaar Gupta family is a sample

payal who is useless

Buaji who is busy praising a jerk

Amma does nothing but to cry

I loved it

FF...you have updated that ages before

I would have loved to bug you...but then I remembered you must be having exam preparation these days...so update that when you get time!

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kamarunnisa

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Rain... that was a nice read.. loved it.. lately i have been watching it.. not a regular, but i do at times... well written...

kamy

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shivahari

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Posted: 14 years ago

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That was a wonderful OS. You are absolutely stunning.

I wish Shashiji and Arnav share the same understanding.

Yeh buaji bhi na. Kisi ko teek se nahi pehchanta😆. Shyam toh mahan aur Arnav rakshas?

And about the other OS. Ab mood aane keliye hume kya karna padega?😊

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Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

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lovely title and scene. thank you

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Chinu5

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Posted: 14 years ago

WONDERFUL

looking forward to read more updates from you ..

Thanks for the PM

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