OS: Can I touch you... just once?part3 pg 7 updtd - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Wow!

this is beautiful

i like the way you have summed up each of their encounters in few lines

i love it!


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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
tooo goood..those scenes were too good..best one was last one,intense.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
wow!!😍 simply amazing❤️
memories!!😳..was flashing all those amazing scenario infront of my eyes! beautifully written!😳 may be khushi is thinking like this only!😍
it was surely a marvelous piece of writing!
continue soon
and thanks a bunch for the PM🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
These brought back memories of the earlier scenes :)
Loved the post!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, that was just amazing, brought it all back beautifully! Think my fave part was the dream, even tho she was unconscious she still felt his touch...😍
Thanx for the PM too🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
aawhhh lovely update as lyk be4 bless ya really nicely blending in to bless ya thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Very aptly described. Good job.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mandir

I was starving. I failed to understand the point of fasting for someone I don't even know yet. As I was climbing the stairs of the temple I felt lightheaded. The next thing I remember, I was sitting on a bench and he was gently balancing my head with his one hand and helping me drink water with the other.

I strode off angrily. I couldn't believe he broke my fast. After taking a few steps, I felt wobbly again. I was about to fall but he quickly came and supported me.

After doing the aarti, I turned to pass him the thali. During the exchange, his fingers gently brushed mine. It felt as if I was hit with a jolt of electricity. Did he do this on purpose? I looked up curiously and our eyes met.

Store room

I was determined not to speak to him and not to hear from him either. I went there to get my Devi maiyya's murti so I would get it and get out. I was told I would find my murti in the store room. I went there and saw that it was placed on top of the shelf. It was too high for me to reach so i found a stool and stood on top of it to get my murti. When my hand reached the top I lost my balance, fell from the stool and dropped my murti.

I fell on top of the bean bags. He jumped to catch the murti which I had dropped and while doing so he fell on top of me. It all happened so suddenly that it took us a while to gain composure. When we realized what happened I felt uncomfortable. When I met his eyes I saw him staring at my face intently. That made it worse. I started looking here and there but I could still sense his fixated gaze.

I wanted to get up but I couldn't. He noticed that and he quickly got up and offered his hand to help me. I was shocked.

END OF PART 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aww loved the update, i was just watching some old scenes today as well and this just added to that😊 Looking forward to the scene where she hides in his closet lolz!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjaani07

Aww loved the update, i was just watching some old scenes today as well and this just added to that😊 Looking forward to the scene where she hides in his closet lolz!!

thanks anjaani. i'll try to update soon !!

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