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Posted: 14 years ago
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in reference to this topic

hi friends after reading this topic i feel like writing this
here is my First OS on ARHI



Khushi jiji please let me have some thing buaji ko nahi pata chala ga
Payal: no
Khushi:jiji you are just like buaji
Payal jao jakar phool laaao
Khushi : started walk to the stall
Payal: come fast dont take long we have to reach home in time you know buaji
Khushi: acha jiji.. she was standing at stall "yeh jiji bhi"
Anjali :chota jab aagai ho tou poja ki thali to laaao
Arnav was standing out of car and looking here and there as if he had seen Khushi.
Anjali: waved hand :hum jai kya ..she stared to walk
Arnav: nahi di mein lata hoon he started walking
Khushi was :standing at a stall think what all she has to buy?




Arnav: past her he didnot look at her




Arnav: went to stall but he forgot want his di had asked him to buy, he started walking back to ask her
Khushi : walk and talking to herself she didnot look that the mud was slippery





she passed Arnav and he was in full speed he just bang in to her




Khushi: meri thali she shouted
Arnav: without intention grab her hand and gave her support
Khuhi: looked at him "aap aap yahan bhi"


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=23rXWRRrgQo[/YOUTUBE]

Arnav:was lost he was just looking at her Rabba ve

Khushi : leave my arm daard horaha ha as his hand was on her wound .
Arnav: mujhe ko koi shoq nahi ha tum ko pakarna ka ,he just came back to life ..



he let it free "please open your eyes while walking "
He walk away but her face with red sindore was in mind
Anjail: looked at Arnav: yeh kya huwa ha
Arnav: woh pagal khuhi yahan per bhi aagai
vise verse Khushi "jiji yeh lord governor pata nai kab jaan chora ga "
Payal: chalo choro iss ko aur maanat bango
Khsuhi: hum ko acha saath da..

Anjali: saw Khushi praying she looked at Arnav who was unintentionally staring at her
Anjali: completed her prayers and walked to Payal
Payal: looked at her
Khushi: Anjali di ha
Payal: jee
Anjali: plese chota ko maaf kar da iss na jaan kar nahi kiya tha
Payal: looked at arnav : who was making face
Anjali: dekah hum bara ha hum ko inn maaf karna chaiya aaj ka di tou
Payal: acha thek ha liked her softness
Anjali:agar aap na maaf kiya tou aap aaj sham humara ghar aai pooja mein , agar aap nahi aai tou hum samjha ga ka aap na maaf nahi kiya .
Payal :looked at khushi: i think that is not need ...
Anjali: hum intazar kara ga she looked at arnav and ask him to walk
Arnav: di iss ki kya zarorat thi.
Anjali : pooja ha aana do...
Arnav: aap
Anjali chal
Arnav: again looked at her
next part at page 2
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice one,looking forward to watch the episode, Once again very nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: murphy369

Nice one,looking forward to watch the episode, Once again very nice

thx will updated the next part soon loadshedding time 😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was very, very cute😳
Well done😛 Great job👍🏼
I'm also looking forward to the episode so much!😃
Thanks for sharing😊
take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great job.👍🏼 your interpretation was really good. Eagerly waiting for the episode to air now...😍
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wow...love it. It's awesome. U hve pen down i well.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you for sharing your os. with us. I loved how you used the pics. Simply creative.
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Khushi: yeh lord governor haar waqat stare kyun karta ha she walk with Payal .

Payal: kya kara Khushi his sis is so nice

Khushi: my foot i will not go to their home.

Payal : just look at her ."lets go home "

They reached home

Buaji: yeh kya huwa ha sar sindoor ... oh ram... paused

Khushi: i will wash my face , i will not leave him .

Buaji: kis ko looked at Payal

Payal: Arnav Singh ...

buaji: oh woh kahan se aagaya maandir mein

Payal: pata nai

Buaji: but this is Good sign... she seated "aur kon tha iss ka saath"

Payal:"his sister & few more she remember she saw Akash sitting in car"

Buaji: kuch bola tou nahi

Payal: buaji his sis said we should join them in pooja

buaji: kya ?jump

Payal: pooja

Buaji: tum ko bhi bola

Payal :jee

Buaji :mind started working


Arnav: di aap jao i will clean this mess ... he walked to his room

all lost thinking a flash back Khushi pray with closed eyes image came in front of his eyes he grab towel & started cleaning

he just thought of her face . knocked at the door

Arnav: yes

Anjali: chota lavanya ko bola tum na aana ka leya

Arnav: but why?

Anjali: pooja

Arnav: di aap na bola to tha khushi ki sis ko

Anjali smiled

Arnav : why are you smiling? what have i done.?

Anjali: hum Khushi kai nai Lavanaya ki baat kar raha tha chota...

Arnav:oh i met Lavanaya. just throw the towel .walk out


At khushi home

buaji: beta jao ...

Khushi: buaji are you fine

buaji: beta pooja ha kya pata...her self thought "may be payal ka leya koi mil jai" jao tum dono

Payal where is Shayam jee

Buaji: pata nai kahan gaya...

Khushi: buaji aik bar fir soch la ..hum jaai

Buaji pooja ha iss leya kaha ha jao...warna hum nahi bolta

Payal: chal khushi ,Anjali ka leya i will be with you i will see how that Arnav come close to you.

Buaji: yeh loo hum ko kya mila she brought the bag which Shayam had , lagta ha he bought that for you wear it

Khushi: yeh buaji she looked at a red sari

Buaji: ha .. i will get something for payal..

Khushi: looked at sari buaji bhi na... she dress up.

At Arnav place

Lavanya : walk in sari

nani who called her ?

Anjali: hum

nani why?

Anjali: nani... please aaj...jana da... woh aata hoga...

nani because of Daamad jee i am leaving her.

Maami jee: "Anjali phone karo "

Shayam: kis ko ...

Anjali smiled & be came happy...

Shayam: sorry hum aap ka gift bhool gai..

Anjali aap aagai kafi ha .

nani pooja sharo karo

Anjali: nani please wait Khushi aati hogai

Shayam : felt something stuck in his throat...

Lavanya : made bad Face "Arnav you called her too"

Arnav: di woh nai aai gi ..

Khushi: hum aagai ... she walk in ...

Shayam: just hide himself ..

Arnav: turn back & looked at her he just stood still as if some he had seen some thing out of this world Rabba ve echo...

Khushi: walk in

Anjali: welcome her "thanks for coming"

Khushi: :sirf aap kaliya aai ha...

Anjali: aao ...

nani smiled come & stand with me

she passed Arnav he just didnot move

Lanavany: Arnav why she is given so special treatment.

Arnav: came back to life ... ...hmmm

nani asked Khushi to lighten diya ...

Khushi: obeyed & she looked at Arnav he was just looking at her.Khuhi standed with a diya in her hand.


pooja started ... Khushi & Payal sat on one side away from rest of the guest...

Shayam stay away from their sight

Arnav : cell rang he just walk out...

Khushi : didi ghar chala

Payal: why?

Khushi :didi humari tabiyat theek nahi ha ...

Payal bus khushi

nani looked at her kya huwa

Khushi: aaj hum na bhi vart rakha ha ..

nani: beta bus thori dara .. jao wahan jakar beto she asked her to go & sit in lounge ... as it was crowed ...

Khushi: walk there she feel sick ... ram kaka where is washroom...

ram kaka: beta wahan.. she walk to washroom she felt like she will throw up ... she ran ..

Khushi : splash water at her face it was all because of empty stomach...she walk out Arnav was going back to hall .he thought he saw Khushi ... just shake his head ...

Khushi : suna please di ko bola da she said in weak voice .. she did not look who he was she ran to washroom

Arnav: heard her throwing up he just grab glass of water .walk toward the corridor

everyone was busy ... Payal was searching for Khushi & Lavanay for Arnav.

Khushi: walk out felt weak grab the table

Arnav: yeh lo he brought glass in front of her face

Khushi : just look at him

Arnav: peeo i haven't put poison .

Khushi: just hold over his hand.

Arnav :stared at her...as she took sip

Payal & Lavanay looked at them with open mouths

Arnav: why you fast when you are not feeling well? yesterday you...paused looked at her

Khushi: for the first time saw something else in his eyes ... she just stared.

Arnav: took the glass away from her hand , "you go & sit their he pointed towards his room, i will call Dr "

Khushi: looked at him

Arnav: why you kept Vart when you are not well ...jao room mein .. he was on call he just saw her walking to room

Payal; walk to them ,"let her go she will be fine"

Arnav: that day i listened you as i was at your home ,you didnot let me call Dr , today she is at mine home i will call Dr.. shouted Ramu kaka bring food

LAvanya : boiled Arnav why are you so concern

Arnav: looked at her he just have no answer...

Ram kaka told nani about Khushi illness... she walk towards Arnav room.

Arnav to Lavanya you too have something or because of Vart you will too

Lavanya : off the record i did not fast...

nani : heard it ... she just look at Arnav ..

Arnav ignore as he saw Dr coming .. he walk to the dr & walk in room

Khushi: to payal "please ji ji lajao hum ko

Arnav :heard he just look at her "Dr she fainted yesterday too "he looked at Khushi & she at him .

Dr: examine "are you fasting"

Khushi: Jee

Dr "what you had in morning?"

Khushi: nothing.. i woke up late

Dr: please give her something to eat.

Arnav just look at her ...

nani : she admire Khushi ,"kis kaleya raka vart beta "

Khushi: nahi pata nani

nani: passed a plate to Arnav "do iss ko"

Arnav: passed to her

Khushi: nahi dil nahi charah... please

Arnav : he just seated near her look at her took a piece from plate & brought next to her lips he just stared ...

Khushi: just took a bit ..RABBA Ve

nani smiled at Payal & Anjali who had just enter room & was stun to see Arnav making Khushi eat.

Lavanya just bang her feet & left.

Anjali to Payal lets go leave them .

All one by one walk out

Khushi: bus she looked at Arnav

Arnav: just came back to life he look around no one was there...

both look at each other they just smiled ...


The end...

Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Awesome , loved it, Seriously fabulous, what else, can anyone supply more words to describe this:-):-)
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omg !!superb story !!loved d ending !!!
beautiful story !!

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