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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
heyy can i get pmed plzz... and if u cant update can u atleast give us a promo..like asap cuz im dying to find out what he saw...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Great update Mina!!

Love Arnav's super hot personality...😍
Hope Khushi's not going to be in any trouble...suspicious about the camping trip!! Lets see how it goes for her. I reckon Arnav will get away from the group with Khushi to be alone with her...😉
Thanks for the PM angel...update soon!!!
😊

thanks for liking the update! 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sirani

hey, really nice FF and a great chapter!!! also can you please add me to ur pm list :)

i have added you😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: blueopal

hey interesting yaar...
khushi made friendship with arnav n he planned to go champing...interesting...
looking fwd...

thanks yaar 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Jassi_preety

UPDATE SOON...PM ME AS WELL

i have added you to the pm list 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: happy17

Hey plz add me to ur PM list I liked your PM list post so you can check that if u forget 😛

Your fanfic is amazing!!

thanks fo rliking it!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

PART 4

Recap: In the building upstairs, Arnav couldn't believe what he saw… he was shocked, he felt like as if he didn't breathe for a second….

He saw her, ready with her packed bag; he couldn't believe she was ready (lolzzz did I ruin your guyz expections?? You dirty mind people thought she would be naked or something ahahahahahaaa sorry guyz to burst your bubble but that part will come too, but not soon till then keep reading and liking and commenting love you all)!!!

Arnav: I didn't think you would be all ready and set to go, and I was really looking forward into kidnapping you

Khushi gets a flashback, where she still is still at work… arguing with herself to go or not… she is scared and nervous, anxious, happy, sad… with a mixed type of emotions , but somewhere deep down she did want to go with him, so she went home and started packing, she didn't tell at work that she will not be coming for the next few days, she felt really free, really excited, "Arnav is a nice guy" Khushi smiled and got done with the packing

Present time

Khushi: ummm, actually I did get really scared when you said you will kidnap me so I decided to go… my choice and not yours

Arnav just smiled and picked her bags up for her, while she locked the door

Khushi: thanks for the bag

Arnav: you are welcome…

Khushi and Arnav are walking towards his jeep limo

Jacob: I knew it, check her out dude she is HAWT

Ronnie: hell yea, Arnav is a lucky dog

AJ: maybe after Arnav I will get the chance

Sam: gosh you guyz are so sick

Monica: I knew it she was going to be a low class case, look at her clothes

Michelle: totz agree with ya

Lily: stop it guyz she looks nice

AJ: nice and hot!

Sam: AJ please not again

Arhi in the car, did their introduction with everyone

AJ was sitting next to Khushi

AJ: it is a pleasure to met you

Khushi: yes same here, in fact it is really nice to met all of you

Khushi starts to get uncomfortable with AJ sitting close to her so moves out, but AJ again comes closer and Arnav is looking at this and he gets mad

Arnav: oye AJ move out dude let me sit with Khushi

AJ: why

Arnav in an angry tone: because she is mine friend, and I invited her

AJ: chill dude, why are you getting mad… I will move

Khushi quietly say 'thanks' to Arnav, and he just gives a proud type of smile

Arnav thinks 'why am I feeling so proud, maybe because it is for the first time I actually helped a girl, but why was I feeling this sort of feeling while AJ was sitting next to her, like what kind of feeling was that?'

Lost in his thoughts he doesn't even realize that the camp place is here, they all get of ready to camp!

Monica: oh my god we are going to climb this thing

Ronnie: well I am pretty sure this is how you camp…

Khushi: it is quiet high

AJ: don't worry Khushi I will carry you up

Arnav: dude your pick up lines are really stupid, and don't worry Khushi I now it looks high but onces you start climbing it is fine… trust me

Khushi smiled and felt so cared for, for the first time

Lily: yea Khushi don't worry come let's go

They all start to climb

Monica: ahhh Arnav I think I broke my nail

Arnav laughs: soo what can I do about that?

Michele: don't be mean to her

Arnav: whatever

AJ: your fine..

Khushi: yea I am fine

Lily: and is she won't be she won't tell you… so buzz of AJ

AJ: chill lily I wasn't talking to you

Sam: AJ can you stay with me, I need your help

AJ: ask Ronnie I am busy

Arnav: Sam I will help you

Suddenly Khushi misses her step and is about to fall when she feels a familiar touch, and familiar smell, a familiar voice asking her if she is aright

'are you alright…'

Khushi opened her eyes to see Arnav

Khushi: yea I am fine, I am sorry

Arnav: why are you sorry?

Khushi: I mean thanks

Arnav: yea no problem

Khushi: I thought you were helping Sam

Arnav: no she was alright, and AJ felt from here because of Monica's short shirt

Khushi gives a smile

Arnav: come let's go, it is going to be night soon, before dark we need to put our tents up

Khushi: yea

Arnav and Khushi start their way up, they two are last one climbing together, the others have already have their tents up

Lily: I wonder where Arnav and Khushi are like we all were together, but I wonder where they are

All of their friends worry for them…

Arnav is two steps ahead of Khushi

Arnav: Khushi hurry up

Khushi: yea I am coming

Arnav extends his hand forward so Khushi can come infornt of him

Khushi puts her hand in his hand, and feels a warm feeling inside of her for Arnav, as soon as their hands touch, Arnav pulls her towards him quickly so she standing in infornt him with her back to his chest… Arnav has his hands on her waist and slowly starts to walk, they walk as if they were glued to one another, and each step Arnav would take Khushi would automatically move her leg. Khushi shut her eyes in his warmth, it felt like she knew him for the longest time, and really trusted him a lot with her soul. Arnav was confused he was thinking 'I have probably done this with a thousand girls, but why does it feel so different with Khushi '

They hear noises of their friends, and Khushi moves away from Arnav with a jerk…

Khushi: thanks

Arnav: anytime

AJ: where were you Khushi we all were waiting for you

Monica: and you Arnav….

Arnav: yea we just got slow…

It is late night time and the gang is playing spin the bottle, for truth or dare.

Arnav: ahahaaa so Miss Khushi truth or dare?

Khushi: ummm

AJ: wait a minute I get to ask her the question… and bottles end is pointing at me

Arnav: fine whatever

AJ: okay so Khushi truth or dare

Khushi: truths

AJ: okay, what in one thing in your life that you totally hate?

Khushi without thinking twice says: I hate men

All of them stare at Khushi as if she is crazy or something…

Arnav: she is joking, right?

Khushi: umm yea I actually hate living alone, and sadly I am staying alone

Lily: awww

AJ: don't worry Khushi you can stay with me…

Arnav: I don't think so

Monica: spin again

This time the bottle stops at Arnav

Arnav: oh great, so Khushi you will be asking me… huh?

Khushi: yea truth or dare?

Arnav: DAREE

Khushi: umm let's see

Monica: if you can't think of something, I will suggest, how about a dare that will involve kissing??

Khushi: what no…

Monica: not you stupid me and Arnav

Arnav: hell no Monica, this is not seven minutes in haven game… Khushi you say… only you

Lilly says something in Khushi's ears to which Khushi gets a wide smile

Arnav: not fair, Khushi only you're giving me the dare…

Lilly: oh shut up

Khushi: okay so the dare is, you have to sing Britney spears song… any song

Arnav: damm you Lilly, gosh I hate Britney

Khushi: are you scared?

Arnav: Arnav Singh Razada can never be scared… fine

Arnav starts to sing in his really really bad voice

'Think I did it again. I made you believe
we're more than just friends.
Oh, baby;
It might seem like a crush,
But it doesn't mean
That I'm serious.
'Cause to lose all my senses...
That is just so typically me.
Oh, baby; baby.

Arnav moves towards Khushi and grabs her hand and makes her dance with him

Oops!
... I did it again.
I played with your heart.
Got lost in the game.
Oh, baby; baby.
Oops!
... You think I'm in love.
That I'm sent from above...
I'm not that innocent.

He twirls her around and then makes her dip in this strong arms

AJ: the dare was to sing not sing and dance

Lilly: well don't Arnav

Khushi: I am tried I am going to sleep

Khushi leaves the place and goes and lays down on her sleeping bed and thinks 'in the past two days my life as changed so much, I am actually starting to like this new change, the whole world is different it has gone beautiful, Arnav is really nice, maybe my mother's last words were true she said all men are not alike, if you have gone through a bad experience, it doesn't mean that all of your life experiences will be bad

Khushi got a wide smile on her lips and remembered all of her past times with Arnav

Arnav comes into her tent and sees her smiling for the first Arnav thinks 'her smile is so lovely' Arnav goes near Khushi

Arnav: thinking about me

Khushi without thinking twice says 'yes' suddenly she gets out of her dream land 'I mean no, what are you doing here'

Arnav: nothing I just came to check on you

Khushi: oh where are the other people

Arnav: they are still playing truth and dare…

Khushi: you're not playing with them

Arnav: I got bored without you

Khushi gives a shy smile: really?

Arnav: really

Precap: Khushi: good puppy, nice puppy, go away puppy…!

Hope you guyz liked the update, sorry for being soo late was busy with another ff on geet, anyways please do comment and hit the like button I have onces again updated my pm list please look for your name… THANK YEW love you all MHAWZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Hey Mina!!
Where have you been????
Great update dear. Loved the way Arnav is protective of Khushi..looking forward to more ArHi scenes. Precap sounds funny...😆
Thanks for the PM angel...update soon!!!
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
all parts fabulous
love it core
waiting for more
congrats new FF
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Ahahaha lol again khushi wins dnt mess wiv her lol bless ya thanks for the pm an link loved it thanks again can't wait to read more

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