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Posted: 14 years ago
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it wuz nt until he sw her did he realize wut beauty cud do t him.Arnv Singh Raizada wuz a man of principlz n thoz wer d principlz he made on his own 2 suit d wurld he livd in.paind early by wut his mthr did nt knwin y she did wut Arnv learnt d 1 man his family needed had betrayed them.
whr hiz fathr iz the story dsnt tell.
y d mothr ran away v wud eventually knw.
bt d memoriez f childhood tht haunt him aint butiful 1z.
learnin 2 tk care f his sister perhapz cuz he learnt early 2 b tht man of d house Arnav adaptd early 2 d mean wurld tht taught him muney can buy evrythn almost evrythn

n thn 1 day he sw her,walk in2 hiz life unexptedly.he had closd his eyez 2 a dizastr onli 2 opn it 2 a beauty.was he charmd?wuz he pulled?but hiz heart skipped a beat n he didnt like it.wen she fell into hiz arms d protective man inside him held her firm.did he need 2 do it?No.He still did.y he did it he dint knw azwel.if he didnt care y dnt he let her fall off?he held her cuz he held hiz attentn.hr eyez had a million qns tht perhpz were directed 2wrdz him or may b nt bt he felt d need 2 ans dem.again anger.heated anger insyde him 2 nt b in a position to explain wut had js happnd.

wt wud a pwrful man do whn he cnt conquer smthng.he wantz 2 atleast destroy it.thtz y triez 2 ovrpower khushi wit his mite bt wut happns in return,wut is exchangd is only 4 d 2 f dem 2 knw n thus strts the jurney of 2 souls.she readz his eyez n seez sumthn he dnt want ans he readz herz n wnts to wrng her 2 replace qns wid fear.dus he suceed?

hws my attempt 2 write an OS?please share commnts n press lyke button if u like wut i wrote.
as 4 d title this iz wut m gona call dem 4m 2day.cuz she iz gona strike dos chords in him tht r untouched n bring a rhythm 2 his lyfe.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful!!!👏 Love the names you have given to both of them...
your OS reminded me of this song : -

"Surili akhiyon wale
Suna hai teri akhiyon se
Behti hai neendein
Aur neendon mein sapne
Kabhi to kinaro pe
Utar mere sapno se
Aaja zameen pe aur mil ja kahin pe
Mil ja kahin .."

do write more!

- Rohini
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thx 4 d complymnts.whch sng iz thz.which muvie.nt much f a music pursn u knw

Originally posted by: maaneetforeva

Beautiful!!!👏 Love the names you have given to both of them...

your OS reminded me of this song : -

"Surili akhiyon wale
Suna hai teri akhiyon se
Behti hai neendein
Aur neendon mein sapne
Kabhi to kinaro pe
Utar mere sapno se
Aaja zameen pe aur mil ja kahin pe
Mil ja kahin .."

do write more!

- Rohini

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Posted: 14 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: -vodkatiny-

thx 4 d complymnts.whch sng iz thz.which muvie.nt much f a music pursn u knw


ohh...this is from the movie Veer...Salman Khan movie...its a nice movie...do you want the link for the song...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
my mob intrnet is very slow.wud lstn smtym.thnku nywys.

Originally posted by: maaneetforeva


ohh...this is from the movie Veer...Salman Khan movie...its a nice movie...do you want the link for the song...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#6
thx😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great oneshot
i hope to see u more with oneshots and fanfics on the forum
good job
👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice OS!!!
Very thoughtful...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#10
hope 2 wrt 2 thx much much!😛

Originally posted by: ayesha_78

great oneshot

i hope to see u more with oneshots and fanfics on the forum
good job
👍🏼

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