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Shlok was running madly to save her. Aditi too reached there in time. Niranjan and everyone who were in the house went there. Shlok saved her from killing her. Aditi took him to Swati and was spitting words at him that he was the cause of her condition. Shlok was shocked to see her in this condition. Aastha cant see him like this. Aastha "Aditi u r getting it wrong Shlok too was suffered he didn't love any one after that believe me ours was a fake marriage he didn't love me u don't know anything he hates me u r mistaken Shlok loves Swati u don't know that u r creating unnecessary situation if he had know where ahe was all these days he could have come to her." Aditi "bakvas band karo Aastha iski vaje se hi meri behan ko ye haalat hogayi aaj I wont spare him for that." Within this time Varad and other family members had arrived.

Kalindi saw Aastha and hugged her. Shlok sat beside Swati. Varad called Doctor. Shlok was apologizing her. Aastha saw him crying.She kept her arm on his shoulder and said "Shlok don't worry she will be fine we will give her treatment we will take her to our room." Police came and tried to arrest her. Aditi "chodo mujhe y r u taking me see he is the one who has to suffer cant u see bcoz of him she has to be in this condition." But police was dragging her. She was furiated at wat was going on she wants to take revenge on him but everything changed how come he knew no she wont leave him she took the gun from the police and tried to shoot her. Suddenly policeman lifted her hand and bullet missed Aastha and hit the wall. Aastha was shocked. Kalindi too. Policeman dragged her. Kalindi went to Aastha and took her into a tight embrace and cried. It was like a film for them. Doctor came and saw her condition and asked them to appoint her in hospital. Quickly they went to hospital. She was in ICU. Every one stood out. Kalindi felt low at that moment. She did the wrong thing she shouldn't have married her to Shlok. She would have died today b4 her own eyes that shook her.

She want to talk about that but knowing it was hospital she remained calm. Aastha was with Shlok. She was consoling him. He was restless. He cant do anything. Wat does he want now, he found her in this state how can he leave her. Aastha didn't know wat she should od now but she knows wat makes in happy. Doctor came out. Shlok rushed towards. Niranjan was not liking a bit wat was happening there. He went away to home. Doctor "Dekhiye Shlok kaun hain?" Shlok "main hoon." Doctor "first go and talk to her, her BP will be in control u have to be with her she is asking Shlok don't leave her otherwise her condition will worse for now she is doing good but if we find any improvement within next 2 hrs then u can take her to home note that is she improves u have to be with her." Shlok nodded and went in. Aastha waited out. She went to her Aai and rested her head on her shoulder and slowly her tears started. Kalindi saw her and said "Aastha don't worry I m here ab sab theek hoga." And she patted her cheek. She had lot running in her head. Ajju didn't understand it. Anjali too was confused. Shlok went to her and apologized again. She smiled seeing him, Shlok too smiled back and held her hand, he felt different but he managed smile. He was there beside her all the time. Doctor came after sometime and checked her again. It was better. He said "Mr Shlok she is fine but she is very weak u r the medicine for her don't ever leave her she will cure within 2 days if u r with her now u can take her to home but be her side always." And he went away. Shlok nodded.

Varad too asked him wat was her condition. Doctor said the same. Anjali didn't like it. Shlok came out and said that he will take her to home. Kalindi didn't show any expression. He saw towards Aastha. She didn't disappoint him She agreed. Anjali "nahi tum us ladki ko ghar nahi la sakti ho." Shlok "I didn't ask u and u lost the right to take decisions in my life." And he went him to bring her. Anjali was worried. Aastha saw Kalindi. She assured her now everything will be alright. Ajju didn't know wat is happening. They all went to AM. Niranjan saw her there. He was boiling with anger. Shlok took her to the guest room and made her to take rest there. He came out. Niranjan was going to his room. Kalindi stopped him. Kalindi "main aap log se kuch kahna chahthi hoon." Everyone saw her. Niranjan "Aap kya soch rahe hain main janti hoon." Kalindi "nahi Niranjan ji u don't know I m sorry to say like this but I cant let my daughter suffer here anymore."

Everyone were shocked. Aastha saw at her with teary eye. Anjali "Ye aap kya kah rahe hain Aastha iss ghar ki bahu hain." Kalindi "achchi tarah se jaanti hoon lekin jis ghar mein mere bachchi rona sikha uss ghar mein usse nahi jheene de sakti I m sorry just by this marriage she learnt to cry, he made her cry Aastha ab tak nahi royi hamare ghar mein lekin yahaan tho pata nahi kya kya sahna pada aaj tho bohut hogaya I cant let live here today she would have killed by her haan meri beti yaha ek din bhi khush nahi I don't know wat sin she made to bcome Shlok's wife ab tho usko uski pyaar bhi mili tho Aastha yaha rahne ki koi matlab nahi hain I m sorry Aastha mujhe iss ek galti ko maaf kijiye I shouldn't have let u marry him I m sorry I m failed as mother lekin ab nahi tum mere saath chelegi Shlok ne kabhi tumse pyaar anhi kiya aur ab bhi nahi I m sorry Aastha bas bohut hogaya ab I will make u happy again I will marry u to a man who love u most I m sorry Niranjan Aastha ab aur iss rishte nahi nibha sakti I m not talking about that woman I m talking about Aastha's future she cant live happy here and I cant risk my daughter's life anymore by letting her stay here." Anjali "Bas Kalindi ji bohut kuch kahdiya aapne Aastha iss ghar ki bahu hain aur marne tak Aastha yehi hi rahegi how can u think like that u didn't even think about our fame and respect." Kalindi "main achchi tarah se jaanti not only ur's even our's fame will be damaged but I m talking about my daughter's life and future she cant be alive here I cant let her live her whole life in sad I want to see her happy which is problem to Shlok I m sorry." And she was dragging her away. Aastha was shocked. Aastha "Aai rukhiye I know wat u r thinking wait a minute."

She went to Shlok and said "Khush ho jao Shlok I m going away from u ab aap mujhe jhelne ki jaroorat nahi hain all the best to ur new life I know u will be happy with her if u didn't complete ur revenge on me don't worry u have won Shlok I cant be happy without u u won Shlok kya dekh raha hoon aisa u took away my happiness but don't ever forget that my love for u is always real and now too I cant reject my Aai I m sorry be happy and marry her I know u love her so much ab aao chinta mat hoyiye ab se aap log mujhe jhelne ki koi jaroorat nahi hain I m sorry for any mistake please forgive me." And she saw that house once and for all and left away with her mother. Every one looked at Shlok. Varad shouted at him "Shlok y did u let her go ye kya ho raha hain iss ghar mein yaar." And he left angrily. Shlok was also angry. Niranjan saw towards Anjali. Shlok didn't understand wat to do. He was pacing in the room.

Anjali understood wat to do. Aastha was crying with Kalindi all the time. Once she entered her home she quickly went to her room and broke down. She cried out loudly until her tears emptied. Kalindi was worried for her. She want to go. Ajju "Kalindi let her be alone for sometime." Kalindi "Aai main ne sahi kiya kya Aastha cant deserve happiness in her life uss ghar mein hamesha Aastha shthi raha without any mistake." Ajju "Kalindi Kalindi aap ne sahi kiya isiliye Aastha tumse aayi varna who Shlok ke saath hi rahegi. Don't worry we r there na for her." After some time slowly Kalindi went to her room and she knocked. Aastha opened the door and saw her and mother she immediately threw herself into her embrace and cried out louder. Kalindi too cried for spoiling her daughter's life but rbought courage and said "Aastha ro mat pls Aastha bhoool jao usse dekho Aastha u have lot more future than him u r still 25 u have lot of life just forget him as a nightmare I said u to divorce him but u.. ok cool down now." Aastha saw her mother with tears. Aastha "Aai mujhe yaha nahi rahna Aai Baba ko promotion aagayi na ham Mumbai chelenge Aai." Kalindi "haan theek hain Aastha theek hain don't cry aaj se tum nahi rogi u will be happy from today again see I m there na u will be as u were b4 in this house I promise." Aastha hugged her tightly.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai Sai. Hey what did u do haan you separated our ashlok. It was sad . I don't want to see astha crying for shlok. But the is was super. Really u r a super writer. Ok continue writing.
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Sai I want the complete story..
Others I cant able to focus on my records plz it is a request...how you can do it to me...my astha is crying there...and shlok didn't do anything he let her go...NO NO...oh god...I am crying...
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nice..
but hw is this os if its not complete?
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Originally posted by: dazzles

Sai I want the complete story..

no way at all actually this is just a game actually i thought to post it in April but u made me post it now u wait for next part god know how long u have to and u r also not first
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Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai. Hey what did u do haan you separated our ashlok. It was sad . I don't want to see astha crying for shlok. But the is was super. Really u r a super writer. Ok continue writing.

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Part 2

Shlok was fighting his battle with himself. He went to his room which is disoriented. He just sat on bed and caught his head in hand and again thought her words. She left him, yes she left as Swati. Then he remembered Swati and stood and went down. At the same time Anjali too was going into his room. This angered him and walked fast. Anjali and Swati had a brief look. Anjali "Sharm nahi hain tumhe aur phir kyun aaya hamare jindagi mein aapki maa baap kya sikhaya tumhe Shlok shaadi shuda hain itna bhi nahi jaanti ho tum sirf tumhari vaje se wo ghar chodke cheli gayi ab kya chahiye tumhe just get out from here b4 I do worse." Shlok was infuriated but was stopped by hearing Swati's laugh. Swati was laughing this made Anjali confused and anger. Swati "wat r u thinking haan sirf aur sirf aapki vaje se Shlok mujhse door hogaya u sent me money he didn't believe me I wont spare u now wat u will say to him this is all drama do u think he will believe u again first I made that bloody Aastha out of his life and now u will be out of this house just wait and watch wat I m going to do that was all just drama just to be with Shlok." Anjali slapped her hard. Shlok entered. Swati was shocked. Tears rolled in Shlok's eyes. Anjali cant see him like that. Swati "Shlok aap.." Now its Shlok's turn to slap her. Shlok dragged her out and shouted at her "Just go away from here." Every one gathered there. Anjali too followed him. He was fooled again. Varad "Shlok ye tum kya kar raha hain wo theek nahi hain." Anjali "Varad he was doing right that was all Drama made by her she is a bloody.." Niranjan too came into the dias. Shlok thrown her out of the house and rushed to his room. Every one saw each other. Niranjan "Varad let him be alone for some time and then u go to him once."

Aastha was as usual crying still. She remembered her old days how she was and now she was crying for a man who broke her heart this is ridiculous. He was happy there then y cant she be happy without him. Aastha "Aai main sach kah rahi hoon we will move to Mumbai I don't want to stay here I want to find job there itself." Kalindi relieved a bit. After some time Avdoot came home and was shocked to know wat happened that day. He too cried with her daughter. He said they will move the next day itself. Aastha slept with her mother. Shlok was drinking badly. Wat the hell was happening y it is happening to him. He threw the bottle away. He was angry on whom he didn't know, Swati the bitter past of him, of whom he should think now. Varad knocked the door. Shlok opened the door. Varad saw him and entered his room. He made him sit at the bed. Varad slowly placed his hand on his shoulder and said slowly "Shlok ab kya karna chahti hoon." Shlok "Dada mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha hain." Varad "Shlok Aastha ki bare mein socho she loves u so much go and bring her back Shlok she loves u a lot she can understand Shlok Aastha bohut achchi hain." Shlok "nahi Dada I don't want to listen her name again." Varad sarcastically "Yes u r right Shlok u don't need her the one who used u and the one who created all that drama u believe but who loves u truly u cant see her love u made her to do so and wat wrong did she do and no mother wants to see their daughter suffer but Aastha here only suffered bcoz of u Shlok even though she loves u that is the true love Shlok u never understand." Shlok "So y she left me if she loves me that much y she have to leave me like that." Varad "cant u see Shlok who wants to be here wen u brought Swati here she thought u will be happy with her u didn't listen her words "all the best to ur new life I know u will be happy with her" go Shlok bring her don't u want to be with her will u be without her think Shlok think wisely drinking like this and throwing all these doesn't make u happy think and take a step Shlok I will help u in bringing her back and u r saying she left u then y didn't u stop her." Shlok was numb. And he left her. Shlok was in dilemma. He slept with wine effect. Next morning Aastha and her family were moving to Mumbai. Aastha and every one saw their house one last time and left to Mumbai in a cab.

Morning in AM Shlok woke up with catching his head in his hand. Shlok "Aastha Aastha haan kaha rah gayi ye ladki.." Suddenly Sita came in with coffee. Shlok "Sita Aastha ko bulao." Sita was confused. Sita "Wo bhauji wo Aastha vahini kal..." Shlok came back to reality she was no where seen that means she really went away. Oh God y didn't he stop her wat a foolish he was. Sita went away. He looked towards ground. He went to shower and came back and saw his bed still disoriented. He want her back. He slowly went to hall. He didn't eat dinner too. He sat there lifeless. Only he knows wat he was going through. He tortured her and now it back fired him y cant he live without her a small tear born in his eye for Aastha. Every one gathered there. Niranjan ordered Anjali to go to Aastha's home and bring her back. Anjali "Ye ladki aise kaise chali gayi ye sabuss Aditi ki vaje se hua nahi wo yaha aati aur ham Aastha pe vishwas bhi nahi kiya Sahab aap chinta mat kijiye I will bring her home." Shlok "aap jaane ki koi jaroorat nahi hain Aastha meri Biwi hain I will bring her." Anjali "ye sab tumhari vaje se hua hain tum naahi Uss ladki le aati yaha naahi Aastha chali jaati iss ghar se ab jaa tu hi laana hain usse." Shlok nodded and said he will bring her and he was leaving. Varad went to him and said "Shlok don't create scene again like b4 those all will not work this time Kalindi kaki is more determined handle her carefully show ur kindness show ur love she might understand ek kaam karti hoon main bhi aati hoon tumhare saath." Shlok nodded. They both went to bring Aastha.

But they already left house. In cab Aastha rested her head on her shoulder and was remembering her days with him. How could she leave him, how did he let her go. Again tears started. Kalindi saw her and wiped tears and said "nahi Aastha u will not think of him again just think of ur future." Aastha "mera sab kuch Shlok hi tho hain main kaise bhool sakta hoon aai mujhse nahi hoga." Kalindi "nahi Aastha u should not say like that ham hain na tumhara saath don't cry Aastha he is no more in ur life this is the time to be happy he is not there anymore to torture u." Shlok and Varad went to their home.It was locked. Shlok was shocked. Both saw each other. He called her. Aastha saw her mobile ringing. It was Shlok. She excitedly took it but Kalindi snatched away and cut it. Kalindi "nahi Aastha u will not talk to him from now this is not going to work u should forget him." She cut the call wat does it mean.

Aastha looked out she was shocked. She asked driver to stop. She got down and saw Jyoti was running on road. Aastha got out and saw her. Both were shocked. Jyoti pleaded to save her. Aastha made her sit first and asked her to explain and she gave her water. She explained everything about Abhay and how he tried to kill her. Kalindi took Aastha away and asked her not to interfere. Aastha "lekin Aai uski haalat tho dekh kaise hain wo we have to help her." Kalindi was convinced by seeing her. Kalindi "lekin Jyoti y r u going away u can go to ur house na." She said she doesn't want to go there at last she will be sent to that hell by Anjali. They pitied her. They took her to Mumbai. Jyoti "Vahini aap yaha kya kar raha hain." Aastha doesn't know wat to say. Kalindi said "Wo jyoti u know na there is divorce case they had it so Aastha said she cant live in Pune anymore so we r moving to Mumbai." Jyoti "Vahini lekin kya hua kyun diye divorce bhai ne kuch kaha hain kya." Kalindi "Jyoti pls don't remind all that she is just now recovering from all that now don't ask her anything pls." Jyoti remained calm and was shedding tears. Aastha hugged her and cried a lot. She consoled her. Shlok and Varad again tried to call her. Jyoti was thinking ye kya ho raha hain. Shlok tried her several times. But it came switched off. He just sat on steps and was thinking about her how he said her to go away and how he said her it won't affect him at all.

A lone tear started at his corner of the eye. Varad too sat beside him. Varad "Hmmm Shlok tum Aastha se itna pyaar karti hain to fir kyon nahi ruka tumne." Shlok "pagal hoon main I thought she won't leave me she loved me Dada mujhe Aastha chahiye Dada." Varad patted his shoulder and said "Hmm atleast u recognised it now don't worry Shlok we will find her." Varad tried to call Avdoot but he too cut the call. They went out and tried from public booth but Avdoot said it clear that they doesn't want anyone to interfere them again and they will receive divorce papers soon. This shivered him how can he be without her. Same here for Aastha she came from that house easily but how could Shlok go away from her heart. They reached Mumbai and had a flat in apartment. One part of her saying to go to him but she was thinking about Swati he might want to be with her that's y he didn't stop her but y did he call then wat does he want still. They went to home. They were settling the things. Aastha said she will bring the needs. She also took Jyoti with her. Shlok didn't know wat to do. He wants to see her face from yesterday he didn't see her how could he be without her all the life. Suddenly his phone rang an anonymous call. He lifted and said Hello. No response from other side. Shlok "Hello hello.." He didn't hear anything after few seconds he heard "vahini aap kisse baat kar rahe hain." That's it he remembered that is Jyoti Tai ki aawaz hain iska matlab Aastha uske saath hain. Shlok "Hello Aastha." She immediately cut the call. Aastha cant stand his voice omg wat did she do how can she leave him she just collapsed there. Jyoti was worried "Vahini kya hua dont cry pls stop crying." Aastha hugged her and said "I cant live without him." Jyoti didn't understand then y she divorced she wanted to ask but kept silent.

Shlok was confident now she want to be with him, she is the one called him lekin Jyoti Tai uske paas kyun hain. He said everything to Varad. They were confused but thought to go to Jyoti's house. They rushed to her house. He asked Abhay where is she but he was shocked to see him there. He didn't get wat to say. Shlok didn't understand wat was he hiding. Varad "Abhay Tai kaha hain." He put an act. Abhay worriedly "Dada I m sorry she was missed I was going to say u didn't know where she left wen I woke up today morning she was disappeared just like that I tried to find out but I didn't find her I was worried so much I thought she went to her friend's home but everyone said Jyoti didn't come pls Dada aap hi kuch kijiye." They were shocked to know that. Shlok bet him black and blue. He asked to forgive him but told him to find her first. Shlok immediately called back to the tele booth. He came to know it was Mumbai. He said Varad and they both rushed to Mumbai. Shlok wants to see her wat were they doing in Mumbai. They went to the place where booth is present. Now they cant go anywhere. They must be here. He called Aastha. She saw her mobile and didn't know wat to do y is he calling now. She wants to know did he miss her and wat is left for him now. She lifted the call this time.

Shlok "Aastha Aastha pls phone mat cut karo kaha ho tum Aastha main Mumbai main hoon Aastha pls mere paas aajao koi apni pati ke saath aisa karta hain kya tum mujhse bhaag gayi dekho meri haalat kya hua pls Aastha mujhe tum chahiye. Aastha Aastha pls speak smthng yaar." Aastha was shocked the words she just heard she was crying literally. He listened her sobs. Shlok "Aastha kaha ho tum main tumhe lene aayi hoon." She shouted in her cries "Shlok" Shlok "Aastha main yaha hoon where u called me from tele botth." Aastha stood quickly and cut the phone and literally from there. She went to the booth. There she saw him omg how did she leave him. She literally ran to him and hugged him from behind and cried out loudly. Shlok was shocked and turned and saw her. She didn't move away she buried her head in his chest and hugged him tighter if that even possible and cried more. Shlok hugged her back. Shlok "Aastha Aastha mat ro mat ro main aagayi hoo na." Varad "dekha Shlok I said na Aastha tumse bohut pyaar karti hain pagli." And he just hit her on head. She still didn't stop her sobs. She broke away and was hitting in chest and continuously saying "Kyun nahi ruka mujhe y didn't u stop me haan u r very bad Shlok how can u let ur wife leave like that kyun Shlok Swati milgayi tumko aur main burden hua tumko kyon nahi ruka mujhe." Shlok held her head in his hands "Aastha I m sorry I m really sorry tum bhi to kuch kam nahi mujhse itna pyaar karti aur aise kaise chod gayi mujhe haan." Aastha "haan tho aap mujhe rukhna hain galti aapki hain aapki vaje se hi ye sab hua." Shlok was thinking nautanki gayi ke. Shlok "achcha teek hain meri galti I m sorry I wont leave u again I promise again." Suddenly she remembered Swati and broke hug and saw him confused. Shlok saw her confused and asked "Kya hua." Aastha "Wo Swati kaise hain aap us se pyaar karti ho na mere paas kyon bhaag ke aaya aapne." Shlok "aisa kabhi mat kahna mujhe sirf tum chahiye don't ever take her name infront of me never ever go away from me like that haan." Varad "Shlok ab aap dono ki baate khatam hui tho ham chele kalindi kaki ko manana hain ye tho bohut mushkil hain lekin u have to bear all this." And both of them went to her home to find Jyoti and to bring Aastha back to him.

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Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai Sai I really liked. From two updates u showed ashloks pyaar and swati's bad intentions and Anjali's love for her children's and jyothis situations everything. Thanks for giving us a wonderful Sunday treat. Keep it up...
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nice update..
but bhai so convert it to ss na..
as u r gonna gives small parts to it...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sai is this story complete ...anyway thanku...

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