#5 Ashlok Dark FF-My Ransacked Hear/UPDATED/Last Chapter(Pg-34,35) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Surish

Astha was like a raging current, whisking away Shilok! The woman was in full control straddling him down!

Originally posted by: potomac

Omg ...momma...simply superb ...loved bold astha and arrogant shlok...cant wait for the next candy momma..

Originally posted by: maitydeblina

Hi mahi:) i typed long update yesterday got deleted due to ghatia net:(:(:(

oh dear! Do one thing dear, my advice is that you can write the comment in wordpad and then copy and paste it here. In the first days of my FF thread. i used to write the chapters directly. and once i lost my whole update. i cried buckets my whole hard work went into nothing, so you see that happens but don't worry wordpad hai na. 😉

Congratulation my evil witch for 5th thread...:):) yipeee...:):)

Thanks my darling princess, it's because of you fans that i am able to come a long way! 😃

Amazing update mahi:):)

Thanks a lot deblina! 😃

1St line cracked me up(LOL) asthu the master and shlok the sub(rofl)
When i first read i knew it asthu was dreaming:):)
It's ok:)

Yeah i thought of it as astha's dream, and i was laughing too while writing it. Just imagine it. But it can only happen to Astha in a dream, poor girl can't do that to Shlok in reality! 😆😆😉

asthu fully preapared and went to shlok's study:):) to lure the prey:):)
I loved everybit their boldness,stubborness...:)

Thanks dear for loving it! Astha is sure a witch and Shlok knows that that's why he was hiding a hard-on while sitting on the chair. Poor man even if he tried to be dominant it's astha who dominates him mentally! 😉

Shlok is a real devil...:) Yep a calculative and manipulative one! 😉
I'm eagerly waiting for ur next radioactive update:)

Will update soon, it will be hyper-hot, so don't combust dear then where will i find my princess! 😆😆😉

Thanks for the dark hot dose my evil witch:):)
Take care:) update soonish:):)
A big hug:)

A big hug and lots of kisses to you devil style. You are welcome dear always! Take care of yourself too! 😳

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Dear cant wait to read any new stories but I also love this dark and intense one ;D
Thanks a lot Amel, your comment means a lot to me. I took a liking to your story that's why i started my own. Thanks a lot truly dear for being one of the means for my writing! 😃 I am truly thankful to you and deeps, my devil momma! 😃

Liked the chapter Thanks dear! 😳
I knew Aastha would not give up ^^ she likes to tease her man and now she got what she wanted his defeat his passion his hot hidden love
Cant wait for the next chapter :D Mahii despite the show ending I hope you wont leave the forum or us :)

Nope dear, i won't be leaving the forum. I may write in different forums, under different couples names, but it won't matter as the story will be purely made by me. so it won't matter if i will change the name of couples! 😉

And yep Astha knows that she has defeated him atlast and has founded the hidden love that he holds for her. He loves her despite of everything that he says to her!

Originally posted by: mehare

Congratulations Mahi👏👏

Awesome update 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: vj3072

Congrats Mahi 🥳 Thanks a lot VJ! 😃

what a opening for Thread 5...so spices up...hot...sexy 👏 😳 Thanks dear, yep spicy appetizer first just to spice things up, then will come super hot and spicy main course! 😉

WHY!!! do I feel Astha going to regret her action (foreplay) with Shlok 😕 You are having devilish premonitions dear! 😉 Well good my devil buddy your innocent mind is turning into a devilish one! 😆😉 She may regret or may not it all depends on her! 😉

waiting for next chapter bcs I know the Writer "Ms Mahi" very well 😆 ..it's going be a Hiroshima Bomb You are right my dear get ready for combustion and for radioactive after effects! You won't be able to breath i promise😆😆 It will be the darkest seduction and the darkest dose uptill now! 😉

Originally posted by: sarithac

Wonderful story congrats for new thread your story is different and too good feeling sad serial ended don't stop writing stories on ashlok after this story write another stories on ashlok pls pls don't give up waiting for your updates and more stories in future

Originally posted by: chubzy

Wow amazing ff. Loved reading it and your skill in story telling is perfect.

Originally posted by: jhumjhum

First of all heartiest congratulation my dear EQ Mahi 😈for your 5th thread 🥳. Extremely sorry for my super late comment 😔.

Aww dearu don't be sorry thank you so so much for your wishes and comments! 😃




Coming to update dark dose of hotness aay hai ☺️. Super hot update abh kiya hotness se marne ka irada hai 😉. Bold Astha n beast Shlok make it darkest passionate dhamaka 😳.

You are right dear this devil wants to kill you slowly and slowly by combustion and then next will be the bomb blast as VJ said! 😉 get ready to become radioactive meal. the most darkest seduction of my ff! 😉

Now who actually win i still feel Shlok win as Astha can't say no to him come on EQ make Astha win sometime be fair 😛😉. They both are predators dear, no prey between them. So i can only say they both will be winning and loosing at the same time. believe in astha's ability she can turn the most darkest and scarier situation to her benefit! 😉

Full hottest update abhi baki hai so waiting for next part 😊. Thanks for PM take care update soon & plzzz keep on writing i will love to read your brilliant writing baar baar phir 🤗.

Thanks a lot jhumi gal, will keep on writing! 😉 You too take care of urself and a big bear hug to you from your devil! 😃 Will update soonish! 😳

Originally posted by: ss1609

👏CONGRATS DEAR ON THE NEW THREAD🤗

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