Aashlok SS: Love With Flaws, part 5 and note post updated pg no. 16

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Jhuma

@jhumjhum

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Amazing update Vijji but I want more 😊 😉.
So Anjali n Avdhoot know each-other that's for sure but how that's the question u keep me hanging now u have to update soon samazla 😉! What Astha's mother do for her education???? So many question yet to be answered eagerly waiting for next part n thanks for PM dear 🤗.

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Viji..marvelous..

The society ,people,caste,religion..

Really writing and reading and relating in real life very very painful..

U hv very good command over language..

Keep it up..

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Subhashini Chowdary

@Subhashiniiiii

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Good update

U explored middle class experiences ,desire ..syruggle very well

keep it up

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Part 1:

wonderful start dear...

arrogant shlok felt in love with a girl whom he didnt saw before...

when he saw her with clutches he was so upset...

and behaviour so rudely...

without even knowing the truth that because of him only she is in this state...

people forget to learn general manners...

how can he say said words to a person who is affected physically...

thanks for the super update...

will read and comment on the rest part soon...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Part 2:

Another awesome update dear...

what wrong with shlok ...not only with shlok but the whole society...

why they have to tried her like that...

she only meet with accident and not a broken handicapped...

instead of encouraging her why the society have to discourage her...

poor girl is so broken down...

hope shlok will realise his mistake soon...

waiting to read hw avdhoot is going to relieve the truth to shlok...

thanks for the wonderful treat dear...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Part 3...

another awesome update...

like mom like son...shlok is also stubborn like anjali...

well written abt middle class and the caste...

when it come to love...all this thing comes into picture...

when she knew sid and jyo in love she disapproved it and made jyothi house arrest...

but when it come to his son...she takes the help of the same sid...

what a selfish lady she is...

loved sid character a lot...

thanks for the wonderful treat dear...

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Part 4:

another beautiful update...

u have brought out the struggling of the middle class family very well...

and rich spoiler mother character...

rich people think that middle class people can do anything for money...

really hate those people..

so what happened to kalindi...

she sacrifices her life for astha's studies...

anjali and adhvoot had meet earlier...what happened in between them...

waiting for the next update...

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

awesome update...
shlok's mom so rude insulting avdoot...
but wait is there sum past...
waiting 4 d next part..
thnks 4 d pm...

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archanarajan96

@archanarajan96

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Awesme update dr..so much cnfusin on the relatn bw anji n avdoot..hw r they both cnctd?..any way nce update dr.cntinue writng,n thnks 4 pm me 😃

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deblina

@maitydeblina

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Thanks for pm:)
Viji:) that was a ausum update:)
So true temple is only place u can get peace:) for me it works:)
Come to updatee i hate anjali:( but i think she has its own side of story????
So avdhoot and annjali know each other
What kkalindi didd for astha's happiness???little bit scared of ur this revelation
waiting for ur next update:) update soon:)
Thanks for update:)
A big hug:)

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