Ashlok SS-Made For Each Other(Epilogue-pg104)8/1/2015

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Bobbie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Superb update...now how will Shlok convince her that he loves her.

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Jhuma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

HAPPY NEW YEAR MEERAB

Thank u for this double treat dear wow what an excellent update so much ups n downs of emotions Shlok finally understand his love for Astha but try to give in many names even he accuse Astha fpr all his feelings what he is growing for her day by day. Astha as a innocent soul in her all fun n playing fall for Shlok. Finally Ashlok become one what a steamy SR yaar what a description 😉. But after all this Astha is happy to have her hubby but sad thinking that their relation will end very soon. Hope Shlok clear all her doubt n saw her what she meant to him. Thanks for PM n eating for next update 😃. Love u Meera 🤗 have a happy n blessed year.

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potomac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Am speechless BUd...😳What an UPDATE...U have just loved it aand written it...SO ROmantic and sensual😊...HATs off to your writing TALENT👏...I hope Shlok doesnt hurt her ..they are meant to be together☺️...Nowwaiting fo rur next update

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Meeru

I am speechless and blushing!

It was so sensual and sweet and just pure natural love

They gave in and I hope aastha doesn't regret it

I HOPE they decide to talk to each other freely and that shlok won't let her go

i feel pity for aastha she thinks men just satisfy their needs and then leave the bed

What kind of sick woman was her mother?

Loved that shlok took care of her and wanted her to wait before they would do it again

And when he washed the blood away and said: I took your virginity and she simply replied with a smile: yes you did

I somehow got all emotional

Because I think losing your virginity is a very important step for every girl esp. A girl like aastha that believed that men were monsters

Thanks for the double update

It was trully a blessig

Pls let then stay together

Don't let them get divorced

Aastha needs to speak to him openly

Pls continue soon

I am so in live with this unique couple *-*

Truly meeru the best of your stories for me

The rest is amazing as well but i simply adore this one the most

👏

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Sumayya Ejaz

@Sumayya_Ejaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

OMG that was super hot update yar still blushing 😳 you wrote it perfectly 😉 but why now astha is thinking of leaving shlok 😔 thank you so much for the PM and w8 for the next update 😊

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Thankyoou soo much for the 2 amazing updaten dear thnx for the pm

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#547

Wow! Hot, erotic, shades of grey excerpts! hope they get darker in the next chapter!

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256748

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Posted: 10 years ago

#548

What a update

Wow they are together

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priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#549

Meerab ...updating this one in jet speed...though am not complaining but daily reading ur updates and not commenting becomes my routine 😳 🤣

But totally gripping and sexy concept 😉 and ur writing style is so different.making this FF more cozy!!
And totally enjoying ur wicked sense of humour 😆shlok's groans.. frustration... and his thought process... too good to read 👍🏼

And what's wrong with asthu's mom😕 in stead of educating her why she scared the wits out of asthu 😳😆

Astha is totally scared abt the whole concept but our shlokie is irresistible na ...so she herself asked him to do what Hus & wife do☺️🤣 she's so naive but tempting hubby unintentionally 😉anyways finally they did the deed 🤪
Now what's next... waiting for ur next update tonight

Edited by Priya_ShrAvi - 10 years ago