SS: Second Chance- A Veneer of Hope... (Completed) - Page 79

Originally posted by: tinkylove

Hello tan tan di..!!

Im back with my comment..!!🤣

Hehe..!!

sooo

For the update chap 13:

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This is very very less for ur HOTTT HOTT HOTT update..!!!!! ☺️☺️ I m gonna faint sooonnn..!!! JUST TOOO SENSUAL...!!!!

Really I cant stop blushing reading ur terrifically ausome update di...!!!!

U R DAMN GOOD OF A WRITER...!!!!

I BOW DOWN..!!!

TO U ..!!

TAKE A BOW TAKE HATTS OFF AND WHAT MORE U WANT U CAN ASK AS I HAVE GIVEN EVERYTHING U DESERVE FOR UR UPDATE..!!!!

BRAVO..!!

I cant say anything abt sensual part Truly i cant..!!😳

Thank you so much Saumya... I'm glad that you liked the update 😃

For chappy 14:

Mashaallah...!!

subhanallah...!!!

Oh shlok bhi na bilkul hi pagal hai apni wifey ke peeche...!!!!!😳😳😳

Subah Subah shuru ho gayi Kamina panti..!😆😆

Ufff Dono..!!!😳😳

Ek mahine se bechaara door reh raha tha... ab jab chance mil raha hai toh kamina panti pe toh utar aayega hi na 😆 😆 😆

Scene betwenn Anjali and astha WAs excellent..!!

How she scolded her..!!😭😭

Great dialogues..!!

She also has a point that Shloks life will be in danger Due to abhay..!! Afterall she is mother of Shlok..!!

Mothers heart is only for Her children..!! First she thinks for them than for herself..!!😭😭

Very true... she just wants her son to be on the safer side 😊

Great twist...!!! Abhay is back..!!

Pooor astha ..!!!😭😭

She loves Shlok but dont know What to do to save his life...!!!😭😭

I loved ur twist very much its different its interesting..!!

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But di atleast honeymoon tak toh ruk jat euske baad Villan ko enter krwate...!!🤣🤣

Ashlok Moment was ☺️☺️☺️
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Just loved the whole chappy very very much...!!!!

I wanted to finish off this story as soon as possible Saumya... That's why I'm hurrying a bit... Thanks you so much for liking it...

Now words for u:

R U REALLY A NORMAL PERSON OR A STORY WRITER..??

I mean More than A story writer u are...!!⭐️⭐️

Thank you so much 😳 Means a lot to me when you say that 😳

Di apko na movie likhni chahiye...!!

Usmein heroine main hongi okk.!!😆😆

Haha 😆 okay 😆

But di truly...!!

HATTSS OFF , MIND BLOWING, WOW, NO WORDS , SPEECHLESS, GREAT , INCREDIBLE...!!!

LOVE U TO THE CORE DI...!!!

Love you too Tinky 😃

Di can u pm me this story wen u update..?

iF POSSIBLE..!!

NAHI TOH I see ur subject heading changed and get to read it..!!!

Can you do one thing? Please like the index post on the first page of this thread... i send PM's only to those who have liked the index post.. It is easier for me...

LOve , HUGS ,

SAUMYA😳😳