SS: Second Chance- A Veneer of Hope... (Completed) - Page 60

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tanvi.Alison


I would have PMd you if u had liked the INDEX post of this thread Lachii... Im so sorry, i did not know u were being missed out on PM's... will PM you next update onwards...

Thanks a lot... glad you liked it 😳


oh i did nt know...sorry...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bombshell???? 🤣 Oh my godd..That part was sooo hilarious..And that too our Kavya asking..It was damn cute..😉
Our Shlok is really nice knowing his limits of getting intimate with Aastha..I know that takes real determination from his part..😳 Loving his caring and protective attitude..

The saree pleating part was really romantic

and Mrs.Muller is also back..I love her..😊

Now the main hurdle is Anjali's opinion regarding Aastha after knowing the truth.. I am waiting to read that..Plzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lachii


oh i did nt know...sorry...😛


hehe its oki 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anunilmini

Hi! tanvi...I'm a big fan of your fictions. Got hooked on with His Secret Desire. Well I've read all,of your writings but may not have commented on other than in in Your FF.

Love this SS as well needless to say. You're an amazing winter with such amazing skills. You're updates leave me wanting for more. Love the way you describe emotions. You can't help but feel them as you read along. I'm sure you've heard all these so many times over. Thank you once again taking us along for the ride. Experiencing all the ups and downs...the bumps along the way. Thank you for sharing your amazing creations with us.

Will be waiting for the next update as always, and hope his mother won't create any obstacles for them. BTW this does remind me so much of the movie Sleeping with the Enemy. I have a very bad feeling Abhay is going to make his presence felt.


Annu, i love long comments, so thank you for that 😃
Thank you so much for the appreciation sweetie ... M glad that you enjoyed reading it 😊
Not watched the movie, but will make it a point to go through the story...
and about Abhay, yes, he is going to make his presence felt... but in what way, we'll have to wait and read ...

Thanks a lot for the feedback 😳 You've made my day 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Bombshell???? 🤣 Oh my godd..That part was sooo hilarious..And that too our Kavya asking..It was damn cute..😉
Our Shlok is really nice knowing his limits of getting intimate with Aastha..I know that takes real determination from his part..😳 Loving his caring and protective attitude..

The saree pleating part was really romantic

and Mrs.Muller is also back..I love her..😊

Now the main hurdle is Anjali's opinion regarding Aastha after knowing the truth.. I am waiting to read that..Plzz continue soon


@bold: You know what? You're the only person who caught on that! And yes, her opinion is definitely going to change. But will it affect Aashlok? Let's see 😃

Thanks a lot sweetie 😊 Glad to know that you liked the update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update Tanvi...
Cute Kavya played her part well...So cute...
Poor Shlok was struck...not able to answer to clever kavya...
Varad was happy for his brother and on the same time worried abt abhay and anjali...
Shlok has cleared all his doubt abt abhay...Shlok is really a caring person...
Sojal is so happy that she is going to get some one to shop together...oh sojal...she will never change...
Mrs.Muller is back...Happy that her prayed has been answer...
Loved the conversation between Anjali and shlok...Anjali is a lovely mom...
At first sight Astha manage to impress Anjali...Hope she will win Anjali's heart...
Waiting to know what going to happen next as shlok...he is also so excited ...
Thanks for the wonderful treat...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update Tan TAN
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Wonderful update Tanvi...

Cute Kavya played her part well...So cute...
Poor Shlok was struck...not able to answer to clever kavya...
Varad was happy for his brother and on the same time worried abt abhay and anjali...
Shlok has cleared all his doubt abt abhay...Shlok is really a caring person...
Sojal is so happy that she is going to get some one to shop together...oh sojal...she will never change...
Mrs.Muller is back...Happy that her prayed has been answer...
Loved the conversation between Anjali and shlok...Anjali is a lovely mom...
At first sight Astha manage to impress Anjali...Hope she will win Anjali's heart...
Waiting to know what going to happen next as shlok...he is also so excited ...
Thanks for the wonderful treat...


Awwwh thank you so much Sathya 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Very nice update Tan TAN


Thanks a lot Deepa 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Tanvi,
I read all parts of this tale at one go. Just loved it. Felt like I was reading one of those M & B novels that I used to devour. The abusive husband, stern yet loving mom, loving brother, cute kid are all perfectly etched. Loved that Shlok is a doctor n the fact that he has a housekeepr.

The bombshell so innocently posed by kavya was so entertaining. Now, how will anjali receive her and will her attitude change on knowing Aastha's marital status. Abhay has to return and that chapter has to be closed.

Awaiting your next chapter. 👏

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