ISHQ UNLIMITED--FINAL PART 21 AND EPILOGUE UPDATE IN PAGE 89

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

NAINA ,

DREAM SEQUNCE..

AMMA ... LONG TIME HAVENT READ..

THANKS FOR GETTING ALL THE MEMORIES BACK.. DARLING..

BFUL UPDATE..

WAITING FOR NEXT..

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: deepavasudev
NAINA ,

DREAM SEQUNCE..

AMMA ... LONG TIME HAVENT READ..

THANKS FOR GETTING ALL THE MEMORIES BACK.. DARLING..

BFUL UPDATE..

WAITING FOR NEXT..

Thank you sooo much dear Deepa...😊
Glad that you loved the dream sequence..😃
I will update soon..
Plzzz keep reading😊

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Lovely update! Dey r falling fr each other? Aww, n Shlok dreamt abt her... So cute!

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: .Natasha.
Lovely update! Dey r falling fr each other? Aww, n Shlok dreamt abt her... So cute!

Thanks a looot yaar Natasha...😃
Keep reading

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: .logs
cute update...

Thank you my dear😃

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

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PART 9

{{Recap: After watching the film, Shlok and Aastha have a short conversation on the terrace. Shlok rescues Aastha from falling down from the steps. They start developing some feelings towards each other. Shlok has a romantic dream about Aastha and just then Varad disturbs his sleep and they go out for jogging.}}

That morning and Siddharth was sitting in the garden on a bench with a paper in his hand. As usual he was trying to complete his poem. Just then Jyoti and Sojal came there with steaming cups of coffee in their hands. They noticed Siddharth and walked towards him. Jyoti and Sojal sat down beside him on the bench and began to drink their coffee.

Jo: What are you writing Sid..?
Si: It's a poem..(smiling gently and writing more lines on the paper)
So: Jo, Siddharth always write wonderful poems..
Jo: Oh..That's nice..(smiles)
Just then Sojal said..
So: Hey..I just forgot to show you that magazine Jyoti..I will get it now..You guys wait here..
Sojal left by leaving both of them sitting there.
Si:(looking at Jyoti) I just finished it..Do you want to read..?
Jo:(smiling widely) Of course..I would love to..Show me..
Siddharth handed her the paper and gazed at her as she was looking into the paper. Suddenly she looked back at him and gulped, saying..
Jo: Sorry Sid..I don't know how to read Hindi..(smiled at him helplessly)
Si: (smiling) Oh..I didn't think about that..I am so sorry..I will read it to you..(takes the paper from her hands)
Jo: So sweet of you Sid..Ok then..
Siddharth recited the poem..It was like this

Iss dharthi ke seene mein palthe ho tum
Insaan ke jeevan mein khilte ho tum
Ek khushi bankar aarzuon ko mitaathe ho tum
Dil ke iraadon ko mehkaate ho tum

Gulaab hain naam tumhaara
Laal hain rang tumhaara
Bante ho tum har dil ka sahara
kyun ki, tum ho pyaar ka ishaara

He finished reading the poem and looked at Jyoti. She was looking at him really happily..
Jo: Woww..Sid..You are amazing..It's so simple and beautiful..
Si: (excitedly)Is it Jyoti..? Thank you so much..
Just then Sojal called Jyoti from the front door..
So: Jo..Come here..I have got it..I want to show you something..
Jo: I am coming Sojal..
Jyoti got up from the bench and turned to Siddharth. She looked at him affectionately, extended her hand and ruffled his hair.
Jo: Keep writing Sid..I just loved it..
She walked away and Sid smiled and touched his hair absent mindedly looking at her. He felt something in his heart at that moment. It was for the first time that he enjoyed some moments spent with a girl.
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Aastha was in the kitchen with Kanya and she was helping her prepare the breakfast for all of them. Aastha noticed that Kanya was not in her usual self. She was not able to do any work properly.
As: Are you alright, Kanya vahini..?
K: Err..What..? oh..yes..I am alright Aastha..Just a small head ache..
As: (moving closer) Hmm..I can see that..small head ache huh..?!
K: It's ok Aastha..I can manage..
As: Vahini..Today I will do everything..You take rest..Go go go..(pushes Kanya out of the kitchen)
K:(smiling through her pain) Ok baba..I am going..Happy now..?
As: Hmm..That's like a good girl..
Aastha thought that she will make some sandwiches for everyone. She decided to cut some vegetables and turned and walked towards the refrigerator.
Meanwhile, Shlok and Varad came back from jogging. Varad stopped in the drawing room to talk with Jyoti who was sitting and reading the magazine, which Sojal had given to her. Shlok was feeling very thirsty.
Sh: Varad..I am going to the kitchen to drink some water.
Shlok came into the kitchen and he went straight and collided into Aastha just in front of the refrigerator. He hugged around her waist to stop her falling backwards and Aastha's hands were clinging on to his t shirt. For a moment they couldn't understand anything.
Sh: Ooops..Sorry..(sees that it was Aastha)
As: Huhhh..(looks into Shlok's eyes)
Shlok was lost by looking into her honey colored eyes and Aastha could inhale the mixed smell of his sweat and the natural smell of his masculine body. It turned her on for a second and she parted her lips as a sudden response. Shlok stared at her parted lips and then looked back into her eyes which were searching for something in his eyes. Suddenly they heard Varad's voice calling "Shlok" and both of them came into their senses. They moved apart and Aastha turned away from him and opened the refrigerator. She knelt down and was fumbling along the vegetables tray nervously. Shlok looked at her for a second and then took out the water bottle from the inside door rack of the fridge. Just then Varad arrived into the kitchen. He noticed Aastha who was now standing by holding some vegetables in her hand.
Va: Aastha..What are you doing inside the kitchen..?
As:(fumbling for words) Ohh...Daada..I thought that I will prepare breakfast for all of us..Kanya vahini is having a head ache and so I asked her to take some rest..
Shlok stood there and was drinking cold water from the bottle. When he heard Aastha's words he suddenly felt a lot of affection for her. He lowered the bottle and kept on staring at her. Varad moved towards her and patted her arm.
Va: Aww..That is so thoughtful of you Aasthu..I will send Jyoti and Sojal to help you if you want..
As: No..It's ok daada..I will manage..
Va: (smiles) Ok..Aasthu..Come on Shlok..Let's go and change.
Aastha didn't dare to look at Shlok again as she was afraid that she might lose her heart to him. She took the vegetables towards the kitchen platform and placed them there as Shlok and Varad left the kitchen. They walked upstairs and came into Shlok's room. Shlok took his things and turned to Varad.
Sh: Varad I will go to Sid's room and use the washroom there. You use this washroom ok..
Va: Ok then..
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Meanwhile Sojal was in her room and was searching for some more magazines which she wanted to show to Jyoti..After sometime she couldn't find the one which she was searching for..
So: Oh..I guess it's in Shlok's room..I will go and check..
Sojal walked into Shlok's room and she began to check inside his draws and cabinets. She didn't notice Varad who was coming out of the washroom wearing only a towel. Even he didn't see Sojal. He was toweling his hair with another towel with his eyes closed and suddenly Sojal got up, turned and bumped into him. Sojal was so shocked that she opened her mouth to scream. Only that no sound came out of her mouth because Varad had pressed her mouth with his strong hand. Sojal blinked at him with her wide eyes and stared into his face which was contorted with confusion and shock. Then his expression softened as he suddenly realized how beautiful her eyes were. A gentle smiled appeared on his lips and he gazed into her eyes with love filled eyes. His hand's grip loosened and she felt his weakness. She pushed him away with her both hands and he fell backwards. Sojal was so flushed with embarrassment and she ran back into her own room, closed the door and stood with her back leaning onto it. She was panting hard and she thought about the expression in his eyes. The momentary closeness with his bare upper body was disturbing her badly.
So: Uff..That moron..!! Why was he looking at me like that..?Oh god..!!
Meanwhile Varad was sitting on the bed and was thinking about the same thing.
Va: What made me to stare at her like that..?
So: Sheee..And he was shirtless too..And we were so close..
Va: What will she think about me..? I didn't do it purposefully..
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Everyone was sitting at the breakfast table and started to have the grilled veg. sandwiches made by Aastha. Shlok and Aastha were trying to avoid each other's eyes but failed to do so. However they tried, their eyes met again and again. But Varad and Sojal were successfully avoiding each other. Siddharth couldn't help staring at Jyoti though. He was silently admiring her elegant personality and graceful behavior.
Rb: Aastha..It was so nice of you to help Kanya...(smiles)
As: Thank you Ranbir daada..But I was just..
Si: (munching the sandwich) Woooww..It's really nice Aastha..
As:(smiling) Thank you Sid..
Jo: Sid..Aastha's cooking is too good..Cooking is one of her interests..
Si: Oh..Is it..? (took his chance to stare at Jyoti again)
Jo: Hmm..(smiles at Aastha)
So: Really Aastha..It's too good..Trust me..Isn't it Shlok..
Sh: (with a start) Wha..Ohh..Yes Aastha..(looks at her nervously) It's good..
Aastha smiled nervously and Sojal was studying Shlok carefully..
So: Shlok..What happened..? Are you ok..?
Sh: (shrugs his shoulders) I am ok Sojal..(then returned his gaze to his plate)
In order to excuse herself from the scene, Aastha said suddenly..
As: Oops I forgot..Let me get some breakfast to Kanya vahini to her room..
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How was this part..?
By the way the poem was written by me on the spot..so no chappals plzz..😛
Plzzz share your views with me through your comments..😊
Love,
Naina

Edited by hp_2006 - 11 years ago

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seeheeryou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Three couples❤️

Three love stories❤️

All in progress in this cutie single update 😉

Its so lovely...

But the poem is the highlight👏

Pakshe ente hindi vocabulary valare weak ayatu kond cc il varampol oru targima tarane🤣

And on a final note, I'm eagerly waiting for all the three to fall in love..

It will be superb

Edited by anu123. - 11 years ago

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Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

so jyoti-sid and varad-sojal stories are starting...love astha and shlok failing to avoid each other

lovely update...like this story more and more😃

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Serviana
so jyoti-sid and varad-sojal stories are starting...love astha and shlok failing to avoid each other
lovely update...like this story more and more😃

Thank you soo much Yasna..🤗

Yes the other Love stories also will evolve gradually..Plzz keep reading😃