ISHQ UNLIMITED--FINAL PART 21 AND EPILOGUE UPDATE IN PAGE 89

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: mayabharathi
nice update

Thanks yaar😃

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: lachii
oh God your sojal is more bad mannered than the real sojal...wish i could give her a tight slap

🤣 Ohh Godd..!! Hmm..Happy to know that this Sojal casting was effective..
Thanks for commenting yaar😃

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GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Great part! Loved the basketball game and the way shlok and aasthas relation changed! Especially after the way he got hold of her wrist or waist! Pls do update soon!

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
Great part! Loved the basketball game and the way shlok and aasthas relation changed! Especially after the way he got hold of her wrist or waist! Pls do update soon!

Its waist yaar...😊

Thanks a looot for appreciating this update my dear

I will update soon😊😊

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hiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

thnks 4 d pm...
awesome update...
finally ashlok noticing & admiring each other...
continue soon..

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
thnks 4 d pm...
awesome update...
finally ashlok noticing & admiring each other...
continue soon..

Thank you my dear😃

I will continue soon

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

upload gambar

PART 7

{{RECAP: Aastha's team wins the basket ball match...Shlok and Aastha stop fighting with each other since they start to admire each other...Shlok and Aastha stare at each other after the match...After lunch, the boys go and play caroms without the girls...Sojal takes the girls to Siddharth's room where they were playing..When Jyoti ask them if they can also join the game, Varad refuses and ask them to go and do something else and not disturb them...Sojal gets angry and she upsets the whole carom board.. }}

They all had tea in the evening...Kanya joined them as they walked outside into the garden...They all walked towards the lawn and sat down forming a round

So: Kanya vahini..We shall play dumb charades ...
K: Wow! Nice idea Soju..Boys in one team and us girls in another team..
Si: Ok vahini...
Jo:(raising her hand)We will start with you guys first... Varad daada..You come first..
Varad got up and walked towards her...
Jyoti discussed the film name with her team members..She got up and whispered "Hum dil de chuke sanam" in Varad's ear...She sat down and Varad walked and stood in the middle..
He signaled 'Hindi' with his hand
Sh: Ok Hindi...
Varad signaled 'five words' with his hand
Si: Five words..
Varad nodded..He signaled 'first word' and pointed towards himself..
Si: Ok first word, "Main..."..?
Varad shook his head and again pointed towards himself...
Sh: "Mere"..?
Si: My..?
Sh: Abey Siddharth..It's Hindi..!
Si: Ok..Ok.. Then what is it yaar Varad..?
Varad again pointed towards him and then all of them...
Sh: "Hum sab"...Ok "Hum"...?
Varad nodded'...He then signaled 'second word' and then pointed towards his heart..
Si: "Dil"...?
Sh: Hum..dil..Oh!! "Hum dil de chuke sanam"...?!
Va: (smiles)Yes!!
He walked back towards his place and Siddharth gave him a high five...They discussed the next film name..
Jo: Offo Sojal..This was easy for them!!
So: Hmm..
As: Ok we will give something difficult next time..
Sh: Aastha...Come here...
Aastha was surprised to hear Shlok calling her name and she got up...She walked towards them and Shlok also got up...She stopped in front of him and looked into his eyes smiling gently...
Shlok moved his mouth towards her ear..His breath tickled her earlobe...
Sh:(whispers) "Maine dil tujhko diya..."
As:(faces him) What.?!
Sh:(raises his brows) Film's name..(smiles naughtily)
As:(smiles)Ok..
She walked towards the middle...Shlok sat down and stared at her...
Aastha signaled 'Hindi' and signaled 'four words' with her hand...
K:Hindi..Four words...
Aastha nodded and pointed towards her...
So:"Main.."..?
Aastha nodded and signaled them to change the word a bit..
Jo:"Mere"..?
Aastha shook her head and signaled them to change the word a bit more..
K:"Maine..."..?
Aastha nodded her head and signaled 'second word'..She pointed towards her heart...
Jo:"Dil..."..?
So: "Maine dil tujhko diya"...!!
As:(happily) Yes..!!
She went back and sat in her place...She looked at Shlok and she saw him staring at her...She smiled at him...He smiled at her and kept on staring at her with a naughty smile...She also stared back at him...Sojal discussed the film name with Kanya..
So: Siddharth...
Siddharth got up and walked towards the girls..Shlok and Aastha were in their own world and were busy staring at each other...
Sojal got up and whispered 'Godzilla' in Siddharth's ear...
Si: What..?!! No No..
So:(irritated) What No No...?
Si: But..?
The girls laughed and Sojal pushed him towards the middle...Aastha was startled by the sudden noise and she broke off her stare...Shlok too came to his senses and he was surprised to see Siddharth standing in the centre...Varad noticed the tension on Siddharth's face..
Va: Don't worry Sid...You try it..
Si:(nods his head) Ok...
So: (laughs) Try..Try...
Va:(annoyed) Sojal..!! Let him try..
Siddharth signaled 'English' with his hand...And then he signaled 'one word'
Va: Ok...English...One word..
Siddharth signaled 'cut it into two portions'...and then 'First part'...
Va: Ok..First part ..?
Siddharth thought for sometime...Then he raised his both hands up (as if praying to God)...Shlok, who still hadn't fully recovered from the dazed state decided to say something...
Sh: "Upar waala"
Si:(irritated) Abey Shlok.. It's English..!!
Jo:(gets up)Siddharth..!!What's this..? You are out of the game...Don't even know the rules..!
Si: But Jyoti..!!
So:(gets up and shouts)You guys are out ...! OUT !! OUT !! Yayyy..We won!!
Va:(gets up, annoyed) This girl..!! I will show her..!!
Varad went towards Sojal and closed her mouth with his hand...
Va: Shut up... !!
So:(tries to talk through closed mouth)M...mmm...mmm...
Jo: Varad daada..!! What are you doing..?Leave her...
Varad left Sojal and Siddharth ran towards Jyoti...
Si: But, Jyoti...I am sorry..Please..One more chance..
Jo: No way..!!(shakes her head)
Shlok got up and came towards Jyoti and Siddharth..
Sh: Please Jo..Give us on chance...
Va: Yeah..Please girls..!!
So: Nooo..Means Nooo...!!
K: Hey bappa...!! What is this...?Jyoti..Sojal..Sit here...Varad, Shlok go and sit in your place..and Siddharth..You do the acting..
Jo: But vahini..
So:(whines) Vahiniii..!!
As: It's ok Soju..Vahini is right..Let's give them a chance..
Jo:(sighs)OK..!
So:(frowns)
Siddharth again raised his hands up as if he was praying...
Va: Prayer..?
Sh: God..?
Siddharth smiled and signaled that Shlok is right..
Va: Ok..Starting is 'God'...Next part..?
Siddharth scratched his head while thinking what to do next...He couldn't figure out how to enact 'zilla' which was the next part..
Va: One second...Is it Godzilla..?!
Si:(excitedly) Yes yaar...(runs to Varad and gives a high five to him)
Siddharth sat down and the boys began to discuss the next name...
Va: This time we should also give them something difficult...
Si: Yes yaar..And we will call Sojal...!!
Sh:' When Harry met Sally' ..?
Va: Great , Shlok..!!(shakes his hand)Sojal..Come...
Sojal got up and went towards them..Varad got up and whispered 'When Harry met Sally' in her ear..
So: What..? How can I do that..?
Va: That is your problem..!
So: Fine..!!
She walked towards the middle and the boys laughed giving high fives to each other...
Sojal signaled 'English' and 'Four words'
As:Ok..English..
K:Four words...
Sojal nodded and then thought deeply for some time...
Jo: First word..?
Sojal ...showed her watch and signaled 'when' with one hand
Jo: Time..?
Sojal again showed her watch and signaled 'when' with her hand...
As: At what time..?
Sojal nodded and signaled to change the word a bit and that it's a one-word...
Ka: When...?
Sojal smiled and nodded...She signaled 'second word' and then thought for some time about how she would show 'Harry'..She decided to leave it and then she signaled 'third word'
Ka: Ok..Third word..?
Sojal signaled 'met' by meeting both hands...
As: Join..?
Sojal shook her head...
Jo: Meet...
Sojal nodded her head and asked her to change the word a little bit...
As & Jo: Met..?
Sojal smiled and nodded her head..
As: When ____ met ____(thinks for some time)...Show us the Fourth word ..?
Sojal signaled that she couldn't do that...
Jo:(thinks)Oh yes...When Harry met Sally...!!
So: Yes.!!(jumps up and down excitedly)
Sojal came back and sat on her place...
As: Let's think about Next film name ...
K: You all play..I have to get ready now..Ranbir will come now to take me to a Dinner at his Colleague's home..
So: Ok Vahini..
Sh: Ok everyone..Let's stop playing then ...How about watching a movie together at home..
They all agreed to it and came inside the home theatre room..Kanya went to her room to get ready..
The girls sat down on the couch in front of the TV and Varad and Siddharth sat down on the sofas on either side of the couch...Shlok got some DVD's and came to them..
Sh: Which film..? Chennai Express, Yeh Jawani Hain Deewani, Jab we met, Band Baaja Baaraat, Aashiqui 2
Jo: I have watched Aashiqui 2 and Chennai Express..
So: Jyoti...Then let's watch Jab we met...It's my favorite..!!
As: Yes tai..I have only heard the songs of that film..They are really nice...I want to see it too..
Va: Ok Shlok..Then let's watch it...
Shlok went and put the DVD in the player and put it on..When he came back he looked for a place to sit..He saw one free space on the couch near Aastha...Jyoti and Sojal were sitting on her left side but there was space for one person on her right...While he was wondering whether to sit there or not, he didn't realize that he was standing in front of Varad...
Va: Hey Shlok..Sit somewhere..You are blocking my view...
Sh:(startled)Ok Varad..(he sat near Aastha)
Aastha shifted a little to allow Shlok some more space to sit..
As:(gently to him)Are you comfortable..?
Sh: (looks at her)Yeah..!!(smiles)
She looked back to the TV..But Shlok didn't take his eyes off her side face...He thought 'She is so beautiful..!!' and he smiled and looked down...
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Kareena's entry scene in the film:
Kareena:(to the guy who pulled her inside the running train)Andar aagayi hoon main..Ab toh mera haath chod do..Itni bhi sundar nahin hoon main...(laughs stupidly)

Sojal began to laugh when Kareena started her funny dialogues...She beat Jyoti's arm while laughing
Jo:Uff Sojal...!! It hurts...
So: Oops...Sorry yaar...(laughs)
Jyoti smiled and all the same she moved a little away from Sojal..(Not that there was wide space for her to move, with four people occupying the couch)
Jyoti and Aastha also started to laugh watching Kareena's scene..Shlok looked sideways and smiled seeing her happiness...He thought that she looked more pretty while laughing...She noticed him staring at her and so turned towards him...
As: What happened, Shlok..?(smiles)
Sh: Err..Nothing...(smiles and turns back to watch the film)
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The Scene after Kareena meets Shahid in the film:
Ka:Kya Boss..!!Chakkar kya hain..Drug-shugs li hain kya..?
Sh:(stares at her unbelievably)
Ka:Dekho..Life mein aisi koi problem hain na..Toh tum mujhe bataa sakte ho..I don't mind...Bataa do..Bade saare dosth mere mujhe apne saare problems bataate hain..Aur main unhe solve kar deti hoon..Pata hain..Main aisi type ki ladki hoon..Agony aunts hoti hain na..Magazines mein articles aati hain..Waisi..Baat kya hain bataao..Bataao kya problem hain..Bataao bataao..Sharmaao nahin...Bolon naa..Problem kya hain bataao yaar..
Sh:(shouts)TUM ho meri problem..!!Bolti hi jaa rahi ho bolti hi jaa rahi ho..Tumhe samjh mein nahin aa raha ki main tumse baat karne mein interested nahin hoon...Main nahin karna chahta tumse baat..Main nahin jaan na chahta ki tum Bhatinda jaa rahi ho ya Benaras...

Va:(laughs)Shlok..Just look at her expression...
Sh:(who was already laughing) Yeah dude...See now she will start again...

Shahid: So just please...PLEASE LEAVE ME ALONE...ALRIGHT...?!!
Ka:Mujhe pata hain..!!Really tum maha upset ho..Isiliye tum mujhpe bhi upset hogaye aur bakwaas karne lage...Magar its ok haan..(giggles)Mujhe bura nahin lag raha hain...Actually aaj kal mujhe kisi baat ka bura nahin lag raha hain..Pata hain...

And she started her bakwaas dialogues again making Shahid wonder why he was sitting with her hearing all this bakwaas...

Sojal again started her laughing loudly since she couldn't control it..

Va:(annoyed) Sojal...We can't listen to the dialogues...
So: (irritated) Then increase the T.V volume, alright..Don't you shout at me..
Va:(tries to get up angrily)...I will just...
Sh:(catches his hand)Leave it Varad...I will increase the volume..
As: Yes Daada...Don't start fighting now...Please...

Shlok increased the volume and he leaned back to the seat and stretched his arm on the couch's back...Without knowing this Aastha leaned back and placed her head on his arm...Shlok loved the touch of her soft silky hair...She felt his arm and she sat straight...
As:(turns to him and smiles)Oops sorry...
Sh: No..It's ok...You can lean if you want to...
As: Sure you have no problem..?(smiles)
Sh: No..No..
Aastha leaned back and rested her head on his arm...He smiled to himself and turned to the TV...
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Second half of the film-The scene in which Kareena cries and Shahid consoles her

Jyoti and Aastha were at the verge of crying...Sojal was sniffing aloud and her eyes were overflowing...The boys too were feeling bad for Kareena but they didn't cry...Shlok heard a faint sniff from Aastha...He looked at her and found her nose and cheeks all red and her eyes ready to spill tears...
Sh:(laughs)Aastha you too..?!!
As:(emotionally)What do you mean by 'you too'..?(punches his chest)And why are you laughing haan..?
Jo:(sniffing)Shlok...!!How can you be so insensitive..?!
Sh:(laughs)Jyoti..You too..unbelievable..!!
Va: Shlok..Look at that Sojal..(laughs)
So:(shivering voice, yet angry) Shut up you ...(sniffs and sobs)
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Last scene of the movie in which Kareena runs back to Shahid leaving her stupid boyfriend Anshuman behind:

Aastha and Jyoti were sitting on the edge of the couch their eyes not even blinking...Their heartbeats were racing and they wanted her to go and tell Shahid about her love for him..

Kareena finally reaches near Shahid and he faces her all surprised...She is panting hard...
Sh: Kya hua..?!!Kya hua Geet..?
Ka:Woh aa raha hain..?
Sh:Kaun..?!
Ka:Anshuman..Aa raha hain kya..?
Sh:Haan..
KaIdhar dekh raha hain...?
Sh:Haan dekh raha hain...
Ka:(emotionally hugs him)

Jyoti closed her mouth with both hands with happiness...Sojal was all excited and clapped her hands and Aastha's eyes were filled with tears of happiness, she dug her finger nails on the couch...

Ka:(looks at Shahid)Tumhara ek ehsaan rahega mujhpar..Sirf ek..ke tum Anshuman ko waapas le aaye..Warna main kabhi samajh nahin paati ki main kya chaahti hoon...Ab main apni dil ki baat sun ne waali hoon Aditya...Phir sab teek ho jaayega...(looks into his eyes for sometime and kisses his lips)
The embarrassed face of Anshuman is shown...
Shahid kisses her back with all his love...And they hug each other happily...

Jyoti couldn't control her happiness and she hugged Sojal...Aastha was all excited and she absent mindedly put her arms around Shlok's neck and hugged him quickly...Shlok was surprised...She squeezed her cheek on his...No one noticed this as they were all too immersed in the climax of the film...
Shlok was so surprised and Aastha quickly withdrew from the embrace when she realized what she was doing...
As:(looks down and moves her hair behind her ear )Sorry Shlok..(looks at him nervously)
Sh:(tries to smile, but could not)its ok..(looks down and raises his brows)Its ok...(looks at her and smiles slightly)
Aastha looked away from him and bit her lip awkwardly..
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So Friends..How was this part..?
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Love you,
Naina

Edited by hp_2006 - 11 years ago