ISHQ UNLIMITED--FINAL PART 21 AND EPILOGUE UPDATE IN PAGE 89

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sreekailas
Sorry 4 not commenting naina..
Us new ff is amazing.. Loved every characters n their background.. Awesome job

Thanks a looot my dear..
Plzzz keep reading😃

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@ashlok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

awesome story line dear

loved it

the fight between bro and sis is reminding

my bro and sis

that fight was sooo cute

naina sorry 4 d late

comment and dear

awesome amazing

update plz cont sooon

update sooon

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: ashlok
awesome story line dear
loved it
the fight between bro and sis is reminding
my bro and sis
that fight was sooo cute
naina sorry 4 d late
comment and dear
awesome amazing
update plz cont sooon
update sooon

I am sooo happy to know that u loved the fights between them..😊
Thank youuu sooo much for commenting..😃
Even if it is late I don't mind..I am happy...😃
Plzzz keep reading..
I am just now going to update..

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

PART 4

{{RECAP:Kirloskars reach India...Sojal, Siddharth and Shlok plan for a one week trip to Goa and they decide to go after one day..Next day night, Avdhoot meets with his school friend Ram Agnihotri and his brother Niranjan Agnihotri at the marriage hall...Niranjan and Ram asks Avdhoot and family to come and stay at their home and not in any hotel...Priya comes and tells Sojal that they cannot go on their next day trip to Goa...}}

Sojal, Shlok and Siddharth were all packing their bags to go to Goa..
Sojal was humming some songs as she was doing her packing...Just then Priya came to her room...

So:Aayi..Please help me to do my packing..
Pr:Sojal beta..I have come to tell you something else..
So:(concentrating in her packing) Tell na...
Pr: I am sorry beta..You all will not be able to go for this trip..
So:(turns to face her mother) What?!!
Pr: Yes, beta..Your Baba just called up now..His best Friend and his family are coming here to stay with us..They will be staying here for some days..So he told me to cancel your trip..It won't be nice if you all go away when they are here..

Sojal was so shocked hearing all this and she was feeling really bad since her great plan had flopped...

So:(frowns)But Aayi...

Priya knew that a tantrum was coming up and so she decided to cut it down...

Pr:(with a serious face)Listen Sojal...Now don't try to argue with me..You all go for your trip after wards...Just wait for some more days...
So:(whines)Aayi...This is not fair..You had promised us...(tears fill up her eyes)
Pr:(in a soft tone)Sojal...Try to understand...They are our guests..Your Baba's best friend and his family..
So:(half mindedly)Alright aayi..
Pr: That's like a good girl..(kisses her forehead)I am going downstairs now..I have to do the necessary preparations..You go and inform Shlok and Siddharth that you are not going for this trip OK..?
So:Hmmm...Ok aayi..
Priya left the room and Sojal was feeling like an atom bomb which was going to explode...
So:(fuming with anger) Damn these guests..!!
She went off towards Siddharth's room fuming with frustration..He was packing his bags with enthusiasm...
Si:Soju..Finished your packing ..?(smiles)
So:Siddharth..Come with me now..!! Let's go to Shlok's room...
Si: But, Soju..Let me do my packing yaar..
So: Packing..My foot!!(pulls his hand and walks out of the room)
Si: What is your problem..? Leave me..
Sojal pulled him along and reached Shlok's room...He was just closing the zipper of his travel bag after packing everything...
So:(loudly)SHLOKKK...
Sh: (shocked)Now what is it yaar..? Why are you shouting..?
So:(whines)Shlok...Our plan flopped ..!(left Siddharth and slumped on Shlok's bed)
Sh& Si: What..?!!
So:(weeps childishly)We are not going to Goa..(looks down)
Sh & Si: But, Whyyy...??
So:(looks at them)Because some stupid guests are coming to stay here for some days..Baba's friend and his family...(looks down and sniffs)
Sh: So what yaar..?How does that affect our trip..?
So:(whines)Because Baba doesn't want us to go when they are staying here ..(looks up at Shlok miserably)
Sh: Oh no!! Kaaka.. Why are you doing this to us yaar..?
Si: What.?Baba said so..?I can't believe it
So: YES..!!He said so, Sid...!! (continues her weeping)
Sh: Now, you don't cry Soju..We can go for our trip after some days, yaar.. Ok..?(sits near her)
Si: Yeah..He is right Sojal..(sits on her other side)
So:Aayi was also telling like that..(wipes her tears and sniffs)
Sh: Oh!!Then what is the problem yaar..?
So:(feels relieved)Hmmm..You are right...
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Meanwhile at the wedding hall, the wedding was going on...It was for the first time that Varad, Jyoti and Aastha were watching a real Indian wedding...They were standing together and were watching as the couple took the 'saat pheres' around the sacred fire..

Jo: Daada..What is the need for all of us to go and stay at the house of this Ram uncle..We had come to India for sightseeing na..
Va: It's alright Jo..We will stay there only for two-three days..
As:(smiling)Taii..Look at all those rituals they are performing...
Jo: Yeah..But it's all too boring to watch yaar..I can't understand how they can bear the heat of the burning fire..
As:Taiii...(laughs)
Va: (laughs)Jo...even you will have to get married like this..
Jo:(sighs)Yeah..True..(smiles)
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As Shlok, Sojal and Siddharth were sitting on Shlok's bed and talking, Anjali came into their room..

Sh: Aayi...Did you do all the necessary arrangements for our guests..?
An:Yes, beta..We just decided where everyone will be sleeping...
Si:(smiles)Well..what about that..?

Sojal wasn't interested in knowing about all these since she was already upset with the arrival of this family..So she just sat there sulking...

An: Ram bhauji's friend and his wife will be sleeping in the guest bedroom, downstairs..His son will sleep in this bedroom with Shlok..
Sh: He has only one son...?
An: Let me complete, Shlok..His two daughters will be sleeping in Sojal's room..
So:(shocked)What?? There where will I sleep, Kaaki..?
An: With them, obviously..!
So:(scowling)No way..I need a full bed to sleep in...
Just then Priya came in hearing all this..

Pr:(seriously)What is your problem, Sojal..?

So:(stands up scowling)Aayi..This is not fair..Those two girls are not going to sleep with me..Only one boy with Shlok..Why should I sleep with two of them...?!
Pr: Why..? You want only one of them..?
So:(angrily)Nooo...I don't want any of those girls..And by the way, Aayi..Siddharth's room is all free to himself..!!What about that, huh..?
Pr:(equally angry)Sojal..Don't mess up things now..Just obey whatever we said...
So:(whines)Aaayi..
An: (strictly)Sojal beta..It's only for some days..You will have to adjust..
So:(pouts her lips)O.k Kaaki..
An: All of you come downstairs now...Dinner is ready..Kanya and Ranbir are waiting for you three...
Sojal just scowled at Priya again and went away with Anjali...Priya looked at the boys and sighed..
Pr: What am I going to do with this Sojal...?!!
Sh:(smiles)Kaaki..She is a little upset about the cancellation of our Goa trip..
Pr: I know, Shlok..
Si: But, thank god she agreed at last...!!
Pr:Come on now..We shall all have our dinner before they all come after attending the wedding function..
Sh & Si: Ok..Let's go..
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After having their dinner, Shlok, Siddharth and Sojal went to their own rooms...

After some time, two cars came to a halt in front of the Agnihotri Mansion..Ram, Avdhoot and Kalindi came out of the first car..Niranjan, Varad, Jyoti and Aastha came out of the second car...The two drivers helped to take the luggage out and they carried them inside the house...Aastha, Varad and Jyoti followed the elders as they walked towards the house...Anjali came and opened the door...

An: (smiles)Namaste...Come in...

They all greeted her and walked into the sitting room...Priya, Kanya and Ranbir came and greeted the guests...Ram and Niranjan introduced their family and Avdhoot's family to each other...Ram turned to his wife

Rm: Priyaa..Where are they..Siddharth, Shlok and Sojal..?
Pr: They have already gone up to their rooms..
Rb: I will go and call them Kaaki..
Ni: No..It's ok Ranbir beta...Let these people freshen up first..Anjali ,show all of them their rooms..
An: Jee Saheb...
She turned to Priya..
An: Priya, You take Aastha, Jyoti and Varad to their rooms..
Pr: Jee Zaubaai...(smiles)

Ram and Niranjan went to their own rooms (which were downstairs) to freshen up and change their formal wears...Anjali took Avdhoot and Kalindi to the guest room which had been all set for them..Varad, Aastha and Jyoti followed Priya upstairs...At first they reached Sojal's room which was the nearest...Priya opened the room and saw that Sojal was not in the room...

Pr: Aastha Jyoti, this is your room..Actually this is my daughter Sojal's room..But you can share the room with her..It's ok na..?(smiles sweetly)
As: No problem Aunty...The bed is really big and the three of us will have enough space..(smiles)
Jo: But where is your daughter, Aunty..?
Pr:(looks around the room)I think that she will be in Shlok or Siddharth's room..You both freshen up..I will go and call her...
As: Okay Aunty..
Pr: Come on Varad..I will show you your room...
Va: Okay..(smiles)
She passed the door of Siddharth's room and took Varad to Shlok's room which was farthest from the staircase...The door was already open and Shlok was unpacking his travel bag when they came in...
Pr: Shlok..
Sh:(turns)Yes Kaaki...?(sees Varad and smiles)
Pr: Shlok, This is Varad..Avdhoot uncle's son...
Sh: Hii Varad..(offers his hand)
Va: Hello Shlok..(shakes his hand)Nice to meet you..
Sh:S ame here...(smiles)
Pr: Where is Sojal, Shlok..?
Sh: She is in Sid's room..
Pr: Ok..Let me go and see..Varad, ok then..freshen up..
Va: Jee Aunty..(smiles)
Priya went out and opened Siddharth's door and saw Sojal sitting there and talking with Siddharth...
Pr:(smiles)Sojal beta..Come with me..
So: What is it Aayi..?
Pr: You come with me..I will tell you..
So: (turns to Siddharth) I will come now, Sid..
Priya took Sojal towards her room and she was surprised to see the two girls in her room..She understood at once that they were the daughters of her Dad's friend...
Pr: Sojal, this is Aastha and this is Jyoti...
So: Hiii..(smiles)
As & Jo: Hiii Sojal...(smiles)
Pr: Ok..You girls talk with each other..(and went out of the room)
Sojal didn't know what to say as she was not at all pleased by their arrival...She just stood there smiling...
Jo:Aasthu, I am going to freshen up..And I want to change this stupid 'lehenga' too..It's so suffocating yaar..
As:No, Tai..It feels really wonderful to wear these traditional outfits...It makes us more beautiful you know...Isn't it Sojal..?
So: Hmm..Yeah..(smiles)
Sojal suddenly felt a liking for Aastha but she didn't quite like Jyoti...Jyoti went into the washroom and Aastha was left alone with Sojal..Sojal watched Aastha as she opened her suitcase to take out her night dress ..Sojal thought that she looked very beautiful in the blue color lehenga she was wearing..

She had beautiful straight hair which was left open...

As: Oh no!!This is Varad Dada's suitcase..!! (looks at Sojal)Sojal, our suitcases look alike...
So: Oh!!So your suitcase is with your brother...?
As: Yeah!!Do you know where his room..is?
So: I think he is staying in Shlok's room...
As: Err..I don't know where it is..(smiles)
So:(smiles)Ok I will show you...

Sojal took Aastha, who was holding Varad's suitcase, out of her room and they reached in front of Siddharth's room...Sojal stopped and showed the next door, which was Shlok's
So: That room...
As: Ok..Thank you..

Then Sojal walked into Siddharth's room... Aastha took Varad's suitcase and walked towards Shlok's room...When she reached in front of it, she knocked at the door ...Shlok came and opened the door and his eyes fell upon Aastha who was looking stunningly beautiful...Shlok just stood there itself completely mesmerized by her beauty...

Aastha was wondering why he was staring at her like that...His gaze travelled from her from head to toe..

As:(annoyed) You are Shlok..?
Shlok came to his sense...He didn't want her to know that he was enjoying her beauty...
Sh:(seriously)Of course..who are you..?
As:(haughtily)Is Varad daada inside..?
Shlok thought "Varad daada?..Oh!!So this is his sister..."
Sh:(seriously)Yes...But he is in the washroom right now..
As: Is it..?Can I come inside...?His suitcase is with me and mine is with him..
Sh: O.k..Come in..(and he stepped aside)His luggage is over there..(indicates a corner)

Aastha walked towards that corner..

He thought "Shlok..Why did you stare at her like that..? But she is pretty yaar..!!"...

But then he thought " Stop it Shlok..She just came all of a sudden and I was just surprised..That is why I looked at her like that..."

But still he didn't take his eyes off her, as she swapped the suitcases and walked back towards him..She noticed that he was still staring at her and so she stared back fiercely...But then she suddenly stepped on a skateboard which was on the floor...It rolled off towards him carrying her and she dropped the suitcase due to shock..Before she even realized what was happening, she was on top of Shlok and they were lying on the floor...His hands were holding the sides her bare waist and her hands were on his shoulders...She felt as if she was in a trance as she stared into his awesome black eyes...

He looked into her beautiful brown eyes and was lost in them...He felt something in his heart which he had never felt before...
Aastha felt his hands on her bare waist...She suddenly came into her senses...

As: Leave me...(glaring at him )
Sh:(comes to his senses)WHAT?? !! First of all you came and fell upon me..And now you are saying "Leave me"..I just can't believe this..!!( but didn't take his hands away)
As:(annoyed)I said LEAVE ME...
Sh:(angrily takes his hands off her waist)Alright..Miss.Drama Queen..Even I am not interested haan..!!Now, will you please get up..?
As: FINE!!..Wait...(gets up)

Aastha walked back towards her fallen suitcase and lifted it up..Then she glared at Shlok and walked towards the door muttering curses under her breath...As she passed him, he blocked her way and looked into her eyes with lot of attitude...She looked back with equal attitude and raised her brows at him...

Sh: What is your problem..? Oh hello..Do you think that you are so beautiful..?
As:(simply glared at him)
Sh:(Angrily)Then you just need to wake up..Stop dreaming, Ok..?! (steps aside)Now you may go...!!
As:(scornfully)As if I would love to stay here...huh!!(walks away shaking her head)

Shlok watched her walking away...He felt annoyed to the core..No girl had ever behaved with him like that..
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This is the end of this Part..
Did you all like it, my friends..?
Plzz let me know through your comments
Love,
Naina😊

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@ashlok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

hi naina

me first yaaay 🥳

and the update was awesome dear

i love that lehenga aastha was wearing

naina superbbb update dear

loved it into crore

so shlok and aasthas first meeting

and falling

he is holding her bare waist

oohh my god superbbb

and i think in next update

varad and sojal and sid and jo will meet

i hope love will blossom in air

between our lovable couples

shlok is staring at her

soo their first step was hatred

superb dear hatred tooo love

waiting dearrr

fab updateee

Edited by ashlok - 11 years ago

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Bobbie

@bobbiedhillon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

So Sholok and Aastha meet...very nice love it.

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sreekailas

@sreekailas

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Woww!!! Ashlok's first meeting 😳 ..it was hilarious...both started fighting d instant they met!!but shlok got attracted to aastha!!love at first sight ❤️

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

awesome update...
loved ashlok 1st meeting & their fight...😛😆
shlok mesmerized by astha's beauty... 😳
waiting 4 so-v & jo-sid meeting...
sojal likes astha but doesnt like jyoti...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...