ASHLOK FF - AT FIRST SIGHT Last Chapter

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: lachii
wow anu...u started a fiction and did not pm me...bad bad...i just saw it on twitter otherwise i would not have known...will read it after some time...and do not forget to pm me when you update plz...

Hey! Sonia, I didn't pm anyone. But should've tagged u in the tweet. Muje maaf Karo!

Next time will. Hope your feeling much better and have made a full recovery. Pls. Do read, cause in want to what you think. Take care!

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ashlok
before starting im warning that this will be a big comment with many nooo with bohoth pyaaar
i read the whole story in one go
the title seeems to be very very goood and quite mysterious tooo
i dont know how but i am attracted by ur writing dear.
ur story is great
many questions r rising in my mind
awesome update yaaar
super duper storyyy
question 1:is aastha is related to shlok in past?
quest 2:is aastha is married to someone elso?
quest3: who shot shlok ? why?
like this many question r there in my mind and one thing dear plz pm me about ur next update
another quest:will u be my frnd forever?(i think it sounds quite filmy but bear it)
dear come to ur story i know there is something fishy and mystry
hope u will update sooon
hilarious update and im sure one day u will be a gr8 writer

Hey! Aishu, they met for the very first time in that emergency room. She's never been married. Shlok was at the wrong time at the wrong place, he was not the target.

Yes! I'll be honoured to be your friend.

Thank you for the wonderful words. Really means a lot.

Will update soon.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sreekailas
sorry u updated 3rd chapter yesterday n im commenting on it today!!
from school days, i am a big fan of poems bcoz dey can hide lots of meanings under its surface..
so..when a poet lyk u write a story, how come it wont hide secrets in it, r8?!..Im feeling lyk ur hiding too much things in between dese lines..n dis poor gal is trying hard to read in between ur lines.. but im really loving dis..
As u said..u r flying high..while reading ur lines even i find myself getting lifted from d ground!!

Anju, I understand, it's ok. I wasn't thinking like that. But I shall reveal asthas side of the story. The reason for her guilt and pain. With it I hope to shed some light into few of the mysteries. But not all of it. I have to keep the readers, intrigued to come back and read the next chapters. Glad your looking the story and giving you a boost. that's a wonderful compliment.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: rbb1
loved both the updates thank you, can't wait to read more, I love the relationship between Shlok and Anjali so nice and loving.

Thank you ray! Mother son have a special bond. Thought I'd put it forward. All the agnis are good in my story. Hope you'd keep reading and will update soon. Hopefully lil later.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: rbb1
awww you are sooo sweet 🤗, but credit you guy all who are brillant writers on this forum, keep rocking guys 👏

Not as much as you! Thank you once again.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: drafsul
Really interesting story and nicely written... just a query y is bame of da ff witness ... um my guess id shlok is witness for aastha ad she was musing something abt her being the culprit for something ... pls continue soon

First of all thank you for reading and commenting. And answer to your question. Witness as in proof of once being. I head it a movie dialogue. As in the movie she says once kids are witnesses of their parents. I have taken the tittle keeping that in mind, but might change it, she has immense guilt and moreover regret. I shall reveal why? Soon. In the next...

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Lily2011
nice dear. do pm mee/

Thank you lily. Sorry not sending pms to anybody as of now. But hope you'd still continue to read.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
awesme updt...

Thank you! Glad you liked it,

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: niki795
ch 3a 3b

awesome updates
loved the bond between shlok and his mom
Astha suffered a lot
shlok calling her angel is nice
continue soon

Thank you so much Niki. Even I like the bonding. Sons are more attached to their mothers. Shlok and Anjali have most of the time been at opposite ends. I decided to keep them both in the same side.