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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#701

Originally posted by: meerab...
Read all the chapters i missed😊😊😊...
And I am touched by the way the story has progressed😳...
I am really out of words to appreciate you...👏👏👏
You are truly an amazing and a perfect writer dear⭐️... God bless u🤗...

Thank you so much Meerab! You're too generous. I'm on. Cloud nine. Coming from you I'm flattered. Thank you once again for the love and encouragement. Means so much to me.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: srilanka123
wowww superb
update soon dear...

Bohoma isthuthi! Will try and update tomorrow.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#703

Originally posted by: .Natasha.
At last, I finished the chaps... Sry Anu, this may not be a long comment, bcuz my fingers are aching1
Rashmi, roshni n Shlok's scene ws so cute..
Aastha ws hesitate to be intimate with Shlok, understandable...
Shlok's confession of guilt... He's so gentle...
They did it in her house, but sometimes writers need to do that so no probs...
I have my exams nxt month, so will not be around, do keep sending pms...

Hi! Natasha! Sorry for not replying to any of your previous comments. Thank you for your wonderful comments. I'm truly touched. Answering to one of your previous doubts of existence of such men in reality I'm married to one such endangered specimen. Had I been in Asthas situ, he would've reacted the exact same way I have no doubts about that. This Shlok is my way paying homage to my own knight in shinning armour. Enough of my sappy ramblings.

Good luck with your exams. Will keep on sending you the pms. Read whenever you get the time. It's ok if you don't have the time to comment, studies comes first, thank you once again for the encouragement.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#704

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.
Great story

Thank you! Glad you like the story!

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: bm11

Oh, yes. We are hungry and thirsty😭 without her

I'm back girls. But don't know if I'd be able to help with your hunger and thirst. But I missed you too so much. I feel so very loved by all of you. Just like my Astha by her Shlok.

Thank you for the love. For holding the fort even with me being away. Means much to me. Thank you for giving me the absolute authority with my fiction. For standing by my decision. You girls are the best.

Jane compliments from you about my writing skills is too much. I'm flattered. I'm not brave nor do I have the vocabulary to write steamy lovemaking scenes. I'm a wuss when it comes it. Glad you have your own way of looking at it, still giving me credit. You r too good my dear friend. And thank you once again for the love and encouragement.

Edited by Anunilmini - 11 years ago

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#706

Originally posted by: rbb1
Really nice update Anu aww the kids are so sweet and them calling Shlok dad was so sweet and cute, I think Astha and Shlok becoming one wasn't a wrong decision she was right in showing him how much she loved her specially after they kind of god married, I wonder what will happen when he goes back to India

Thank you Ray! You're such a boost to us writers. Always there. I mean it. Glad you liked the updates.

I wanted their consummation to meaning and for it be just and right even in the eyes of god. Twist is coming up. But assure you this has a happy ending. So it's all good.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#707

Originally posted by: latha_555
last two chapters were really good...im wondering if its the lull before the storm...you have made it clear that shlock will choose aastha over his family...but maybe some other circumstance? looking forward to more updates

Thank you so much Latha. It is the lull before the storm. Feel good before the heartbreak, you have got my point of view. Shlok is gonna be rock solid in his decision. Then Who's the culprit? Thank you for the encouragement. Means much to me,

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#708

Originally posted by: ruhakhan
ok so shlok is going back
and they married
waiting to knw wat happens in india
do update soon

Yes! They're married in the eyes of god and in their heart. But not by law. Anything can happen. But Shlok is not the culprit. He's sure as night and day going to come back for them. Thank you for the interest.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#709

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
Wow i had tears in my eyes!
That was so emotional and heart warming@
The moment he put the mangalsurtra around her neck and the sindoor moment were to sweet to handle
Their love is so pure and innocent
Just like their love making was
I think it was a good choice choosing her bed because that was a territory noone ever entered
The place she finally gave herself to him
To a man on her own will
Wonderful written

Thank you Amel for that wonderful comment. I'm truly speechless. Thank you for accepting my choices. Means do much to me. Do keep reading and sharing your precious thoughts. I eagerly wait to read them.

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Anupama

@Anunilmini

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: deepavasudev
Hi Anu, I think all are in a mood to make me cry today..
I was reading one more OS and cried.. Now reading yours...

im in full of tears..

very emotional and touched my heart buddy ... thanks for this chapter.. I will write in detail later..

bye ..

Hey! My dear deeps! Sorry for making you emotional. Thank you my dear, For the wonderful compliment. I'm truly blessed to call you my friend. Gals you liked it, my efforts made worthwhile.

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