Ashlok SS-Still In My Heart....(Last Part-pg82)

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...
resss😳

any mood to unres soon😆

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: raji_ashloksfan

love U dear love the whole story am really happy that the story has happy ending too.when I read first part my eyes welled up but did not fell from my eyes when I saw ur happy ending I felt tears on my phone screen I like the story it was damn good.Thank U dear

Awww 🤗
U r welcome sweetheart 😳

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guesss what ???????...i am basically so cool......

@ashlok

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

first of alll thanks alot and

very big sorry for always

commenting veryyy lateee

and a very big thanks dear

for giving a happy ending

under my requesttt

i love the whole update

very much i love both

sad and happy endings dearrr

awsome and amazing update

while reading the part i cried

alot dear i dont know why but

something is making me restless

''Love is always patient and kind. It is never jealous. Love is never boastful or conceited. It is never rude or selfish. It does not take offense and is not resentful. Love takes no pleasure in other people's sins, but delights in the truth. It is always ready to excuse, to trust, to hope, and to endure whatever comes''..

i love the above line very

much meerab its true

true love will never die

it will live till our last breathe

but i pray god dont test us

with these kind of exams

in the world the most

worst spell is our beloved

one dying infront of usss

GOD SAVE ALL OF US FROM THAT

the emotions r very well written

dearrr i completly lost

myself while reading the part

sooo poor shlokie

the pain is very deep one

no one can heal ittt

Shlok:Astha please open your eyes...please...I know you joking with me...but stop it now...remember you promised to give me everything I will ask from you...now I am begging you please come back...please...he was almost sobbing...holding her lifeless body to him...when she didn't responded ...he screamed out in pain...you cann't do this to me...what I will do without you...and hugged her tightly while crying bitterly...

again i cried alot after reading

above lines dear. the true

feelings of shlok is very

clearly written that was fabbb

i feel sooo bad for aastha

as she is very helpless but she

need death as the suffering she

is suffering from this disease

is un measurable she need relief

sometime the truths r very

bitter one but we have to

accept the bitter things as life

is a mixture of both sweetness

and bitternesss

we need to thank god for the sweetness

and we need to pray god to

save us from the bitternesss

but all the happenings will

be happen under the destineyyy

Four years passed...he worked day and night and became a successful businessman like astha always wanted him to see...

its true dear. we need to fulfill our

beloved ones dream that will give

us the healing powerrr

He selected astha's room to live where he always felt her presence...her love...even though she was no more but she left the love of two fathers for him...
She was with him all the time..their love was like the wind ...he couldn't see it but he can feel it.

i love the old one veryyy much

its true. true love will never die

it will remain foreverrr

and thanks alot for ur happy ending

honey. after reading the sad ending

i cried alot but the happy ending

healed the pain in my hearttt

hats offf meerab

i hope u will post many other

ss tooo

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

Lovely Update Meerab...

So touching and emotional one...

I loved the way u ended the both part either it sad or Happy u made justices to it...

Just awesome and mindblowing work dear...

Thanks for the PM...

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Saumya

@tinkylove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Meerab u r amazing!!!!

I dont have words to say yaar!!!!!

Although I have read the story but u took it into a new and unimaginable turn!!!

everything was just perfect!!!

More than perfect I must say!!!!

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

AUSOME SAD, LOVELY , ROMANCE, ACTION , DRAMA, HAPPY ENDING , SAD ENDING, CLIMAX !!!!!!!!!

EVERYthing was their!!!!!!!!

I cant imagine someone can love omeone soo deeply!!!!!!!

Itna pyaar koi kissi se kaise kar sakta hai!!!!!!!

I cant imagine!!!!

WONDERFUL .

HATTSS OFF.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE U DEAREST!!!

SAUMYA...

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Natasha

@.Natasha.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

My eyes were moistened reading that she's no more...

But thank goodness u gave a happy ending...

Beautifully written Meerab

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: srilotus
👏👏👏IT WAS SO EMOTIONAL AT FIRST BUT UR CONTINUATION MADE ME HAPPY
AWESOME PART...LOVE IT TOO MUCH
👏

thanks dear

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meerab

@TomNJerry...

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: .Natasha.
My eyes were moistened reading that she's no more...
But thank goodness u gave a happy ending...
Beautifully written Meerab

thanks dear 😳