Ashlok SS-Still In My Heart....(Last Part-pg82)

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.furrii.

@.furrii.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Astha... Say YES TO SUCH A DARLING!!!!omg Shlok is just awesome in your story! So caring!!!!! I could cry. 😭

Meerab, don't kill her .. Pls? Do some bone marrow transplant.. They are rich people na! 😛

Ooh, I know what's coming next.. Pls update soon! 😳

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priya

@Priya_ShrAvi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#562

Originally posted by: meerab...
Awww...🤗...i can understand dear...All u said is absolutely true...😭
And yeah my heart whispers ...the ff...its my most favorite ff written by my sweetheart jeeni...it was truly magical...jeeni is just beyond perfection...she is a brilliant writer...
I still remember the time when the ff ended we all were so sad...and it took a long time to overcome that sadness😊

oh yeah...I read it before 3months...absolutely loved it...is she writing anything else after that...Teri meri...also hers na...she stopped writing?????

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sathuraj

@sathuraj

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Lovely update Meerab...Its so Sad... Poor Ashlok... both of the love each other a lot... Hope some miracle happen...I know u already told its a sad story... so waiting for the next part...

Thanks for the PM dear...

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

Very very very well writtened
Thanks for pm
Awesome
Loved it

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Neelum.drashti

@Neelum.drashti

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#565

So thoughtful and heart touching❤️...love it meerab :)

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guesss what ???????...i am basically so cool......

@ashlok

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Awesome updateee

love it very much

hats offf meerab

i am crying dear

each an every words r touching my heart

heart touching story meerab

i am still wondering how i am gonna digest the sad ending

no precape😭

why why meerab😃

and the last update😭

ohhh nooo plz😭 finish the story with little sadnesss

waiting meerabbb

aastha and shloks love will live long forever

and its a real fact dear

we cant see our beloved one dying infront of our eyes

goddd plz save all of us from that tragedy

and i am feeling sooo saad for shlok

i cant stop crying 😭😭😭

but meerab u have well written it

i can see the sadness in ur writings

ur writings r having feelings in it

i loved that very much

keeep writing more ss

and plz update the last part sooon

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Sahrish Pirzada

@SahriShrAvi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#567

Aahh so pain full situation man !!!... 😭😭
But really happy 4 their marriage😛😛😛... but how aastha will go through ths marriage as she is so weak nd sick 😭😭😭
well em waiting 4 the happy ending wala last update 😆😆😆
Meerab wt to say ur writing way boss👏👏👏
just splendid
thnks 4 Pm

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#568

OK so shlok wants to marry her

Wat will be her answer

Do update soon

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Riddhima

@Khushi_Dillse

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#569

Sorry for late reply. ..

Superb updet...but no precap...

Ab to tumhe jaldi update karna padega...

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Zehra Fatima Chohan

@Zehra.

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#570

I dont know what to say coz throughout the whole update i was going through a roller coaster of emotions !!!
i was feeling sad for astha but at the same time happy that shlok is by her side ...
i was on the verge of crying when u mentioned about astha's health deteriorating and especially when u mentioned this
In all those days for the first time shlok realized that her hands were no longer soft... the bones in her hands were starting to show through her skin..
Shlok and NA talk was so emotional !!! he too needed someone to share his worries and pain with, pain of losing someone very special and close to him.
u have written it amazingly ... kudos to u for writing an awesome story !!! it is very close to my heart and one of my favourites ...
waiting for the last part .. update soon

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