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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update..but im feeling heavy hearted coz i read d synopsis of d novel a walk to remember.. 😭😭
so..im reguesting u plss dont kill aastha..
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Part 7


Hi friends ...thank you sooo much everyone for the wonderful response ...

And after thinking a lot i have reached a conclusion that i want to continue the story further like the original novel...as its very close to my heart so i don't want to change storyline...but for those who need a happy ending...i have decided to give two endings for this story...a happy one and a sad one...



She was busy giving final touches to her new painting when shlok silently peeped inside her room...

Her hair were tied into a bun ...one of the paint brush tucked behind her ear while the other one was in her hand...her dupatta was lying on the bed...and she was totally lost in her work...

She was looking damn cute in this way...

Shlok quietly went near her taking small steps and slowly took her in a warm hug...and kissed her earlobe softly...

Astha slightly turned...shlok... is this u?????...but the paint brush penetrated sharply near his eye...

Shlok:ooouuuccchhh...he almost screamed in pain...

Astha panicked ...sorry sorry sorry...she said removing the paint brush from behind her ear and placing all her stuff on the nearby table...and then she instantly examined his eye...

Astha:is it hurting too much...she said softly caressing his eye with her soft hand...

Shlok:Not tooo much...just a little...he said making a innocent face...

She lead him to bed...sit here shlok...he did as she said...

She sat next to him ...placed her lips on his eye and slowly started blowing air ...

Astha:Are you feeling better now...she asked with worry...

Shlok:yeah nowww...its ok...he smiled...

She smiled back lovingly caressing his face...

Shlok took her hands in his...and placed soft kisses on them...

Shlok:Your hands feel so soft and warm...he said before taking her into a soft side hug...

She let her head rest on his chest...while her hands snaked around his waist...

Astha:you didn't tell ...why u came so early today????...

Shlok:When you gave me the chance sweetheart????...i wanted to wish u a lovely goodmorning but you poked that brush directly into my eye...

Astha:hawww...tooo bad it was accidental and i apologized for that na...she made a twisted face...

Shlok:You know ..u r the cutest person i have ever come across in my life...sometimes i regret that why i wasted my time with those stupid girls when my life was so close to me...before i was just living...but now i have started enjoying my life in the true sense...sometimes it gets hard to believe that i am the same rude and arrogant shlok...but its true you have changed me completely...

Astha tightened her grip on him and slightly lifted her head to place a soft kiss on his chin...

For few moments they both were silent...feeling and enjoying the warmth of their love...

But then shlok suddenly said ...slightly pushing her away a little...don't you think we are getting extra emotional now...

She smiled and nodded in yes...

And both of them started laughing...

Astha:ok now tell me why you are here...

Shlok:actually today i want to take you out on a date...and that tooo for the whole day...so start getting ready...by the way... i have something for u...just give me a second...he walked towards the door...

Astha thought for a second..and stopped him...shlok..i cann't go without baba's permission...

Shlok turned...stare her silently for a minute...and finally spoke...and where is uncle????...

Astha:baba has gone for his morning walk with sharma uncle...

Shlok:and when he will be back???? ...

Astha:in one hour...

Shlok:ok then i will be here in one hour...and listen...start getting ready...because i know uncle is not gonna refuse me...

Astha:Yeah looks like he is your father not mine...

Shlok quickly placed a soft kiss on her hair...yeah all because of you sweetheart ...now come i have to give u something...

They came to the living room where shlok gave her a shopping bag...

Astha:ahaaan got some new dress for me????

Shlok nodded in yes...come on open it and check ...ans tell me whether you like it or not...

She took it out...it was a very pretty dress in red and light green colour with some nice embroidary on it...

Shlok:so you like it???...

Astha:its soo beautiful shlok...i love red...

Shlok:Thank God you liked it...otherwise i was not sure about my choice...by the way one more thing...he slowly removed the pin from her hair..please keep your hair open...i love them that way...

Astha hugged him...i love you shlok...

Shlok hugged her back...and i love u tooo sweetheart...


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And after one hour he came back in dark black three piece suit...perfectly dressed like a gentleman...





Avdhoot was surprised to see the change...

He came and take avdhoot's blessings...

Avdhoot:Shlok beta ...anything special..i mean u r looking so handsome today...

Shlok:yes I am taking ur girl on a date for whole day...he winked and inform him about his plan...

Avdhoot:Ok...good but then suddenly he paused and stare him when he understand what he just said...

Avdhoot:What a surprise...you are taking my daughter on a date and that tooo without my permission...hearing their voices astha also came out of the kitchen...she was in her normal dress...

Shlok:uncle I was not informing u rather i was asking permission from u...

Avdhoot:laughed...shlok this was really a unique way beta...

Shlok made a innocent face...you know na this is my style...so tell me...can we go on a ?????...he paused...

Avdhoot:well when u have made the plan then who i am to spoil it...just go and enjoy your life...his words made both of them happy...

Avdhoot and shlok were talking when astha came dressed up in red and green suit..shlok bought for her...




She was looking extremely stunning in that dress..just like a perfect cute doll...

Shlok was completely mesmerized by her look...

She came and stand next to avdhoot...i have already prepared ur meal...and don't forget to take ur medicines on time...and a long list of do's and dont's for her baba...

Avdhoot:just stop now beta...i am not a kid...i can take care of myself...he smiled...

Astha hugged avdhoot...I know that you can take care of yourself...

Shlok:You know uncle she cares a lot for everyone without demand of anything in return...thats why i love her sooo much...

Avdhoot placed his hand on his head to bless him...

Avdhoot:now go ...shlok had already waited sooo much for you...

Astha:okay...

Shlok extended his hand towards her and she shyly placed her hand in his...the similar feeling of her soft and warm hands ..he thought smiling to himself...

They just walked up to the lawn when he excused from her and ran inside ...hugged avdhoot and kissed his face...thank you... thank you... thank you sooo much for making my day...i love you avdhoot uncle...he was getting super excited that moment ...

And when they both left ...tears slowly flowed from avdhoot's eyes...and a silent prayer from his heart...that the two of them always remain happy this way...



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On the way shlok turned on the music...astha changed it...

Shlok:didn't like it???...

Astha nodded in no...

Shlok:sorry i asked one of my friend...and he said his girlfriend likes the song..so i thought you will like it tooo...but... he made a innocent face...

Astha:its ok shlok...you are with me ...thats all i need...

Shlok:well there is one song i have selected for u...

Astha smiled...really...

Shlok played the song and she left surprised as it was one of her favorite song...

Astha:how you know this ????thats my favorite one...

Shlok;by magic...he smiled naughtily...

Shlok took her to few of her favorite places everytime leaving her surprised as she always wished to come to these places with someone special...

Then he took her to the movie...but she was again surprised as the hall was empty and only astha and shlok were there...

After the movie when shlok was taking her to show some place he wanted to buy ...she finally asked him...

Astha:Shlok how you know about all my wishes?????...
Shlok smiled again...by magic...

Astha:now its not funny..i am serious...honestly tell me how did you know that i like red colour...i wanted to go on a date with you...wanted to visit the places u took me today...wanted to watch a romantic movie in a empty hall ...only with the person i love...and now where you are taking me shlok...i mean what nexts on the list...she asked seriously...

And with her last word the car come to a sudden halt...

Astha looked him in confusion...

Shlok:So finally you guessed it..so now when you know...so let me tell you...i read all your wishes from your diary...he took her hands in his...i want to fulfil your every dream and your every single wish...i want to fill your life with happiness the way you have filled mine with your love...

Astha was sooo touched by his words...that she simply kissed his forehead...tears were floating in her beautiful eyes...why you love me sooo much????...she asked looking deeply into his eyes...

Shlok:I think our heart needs no reason to love someone...right????...

A few tears rolled down her eyes and she suddenly hugged him...she was feeling sooo emotional as he was speaking her lines she wrote in her diary for him...

Shlok:enough now...wipe out your tears...i promised uncle that i will not let you cry and you keep on shedding tears...

Astha smiled but these are tears of happiness ...he smiled tooo at her answer...


Then they reached a place...all strange and different to call it a house...whats this shlok????...astha questioned...

Shlok:come and see yourself...

He held her hand and took her inside...but this ended up in another emotional moment between them...as the board was mentioning...Astha's paint gallery...

Shlok:this is what you wished from a long time...now its yours ...you can use it in any way you want...

Astha:but i cann't take this place...it must be very expensive..i mean with all the decors and arrangements...

Shlok:please ..its my love for you...don't refuse to take it...as now what belonged to me is also yours...so please...she was reluctant but shlok covinced her and made her sign the official papers...

Then shlok took her for some shopping...
Astha made him to eat simple things from the road and he quite enjoyed the new change...

It was getting dark and they both were feeling hungry again...

Shlok:lets have dinner...

Astha agreed...

Shlok:you will love the place i have selected for our dinner...

Astha:whats sooo special...

Shlok:just a little more wait ...

And after a drive of half hour they reached a beautiful restuarant near a beach ..specially made for couples...away from the noise of city...

The place was not crowded too much...there were few tables around...that was making it more likeable to astha as she was a peace lover...

Instead of bright lights very dim ones were used in the restuarant ...and the tables were illuminated with beautiful scented candle lights...soft music was playing in the background...





The glass windows were giving the couples a perfect view of the tastefully lighted beach and the flowing boats in the water...

Couples around were enjoying themselves...and they were the only youngest couple there...

Everything around them was sooo romantic just like one can only imagine in dreams...

Astha had never been to this place before,so it took her just a few minutes to adjust. She seemed nervously happy...

Shlok extended his arm to her...and she slowly looped her arm around his with shining eyes...and then they walked into the restuarant like a perfect couple...

They selected the corner table right infront of the window...and ordered their dinner...

Astha:its wonderful...thank u for taking me here...
Shlok:My pleasure sweetheart...shlok said seriously...

She looked out of the window and stared at a boat that was passing by the restaurant, its lights blazing. For a moment she seemed lost in wonder...

"Everything is sooo beautiful here" she said.
"So are you," shlok answered and she slightly blushed...

And then slowly shlok held her hand in his and they remain like that waiting for their dinner...

Dinner was delicious...they enjoyed it while talking about the happenings of past few months...

By the time waiter removed their plates...the singer started a slow melody...the lights became more dim...making the place somewhat more romantic...

They were again holding hands and enjoying the dance of the couples...

They stayed there a little after dinner and then went for a walk on the opposite side of restuarant...

The area was in perfect silence except for the sound of the water and cold air...soft music playing in the restuarant was also audible to them from here...

They walked together ...taking hands in hands...talking about their dreams and wishes...

Suddenly it started raining...

And with every falling raindrop their smiles widened...

The soft music was still reaching their ears...slowly they held each other closer...with their eyes closed, they were wondering if anything in their life had ever been this perfect and knowing at the same time that it hadn't...

They were in love, and the feeling was even more wonderful than they ever imagined it could be...

The rain was continuosly falling down and they were still lost in each others eyes...

Even in the darkness of night her eyes were shining with the little drops of tears...

Astha:Such a place and moment feels so unreal... its just like wind...I cann't see it but I can feel it...she smiled with teary eyes...

Shlok smiled kissing her forehead...what do you feel ????...

Astha:Right now I am just feeling beauty, joy and love all around me... she said with a huge smile while tears were trickling down her face...

The moment was sooo intense that made both of them extremely emotional...their eyes were speaking everything which their tongues couldn't...

It was still raining and they were still deeply lost in each other...when shlok took a step closer to her and found himself reaching for her hand...

He took her hand in his and looked right at her, moving just a little more closer...

She didn't exactly step back, but her eyes widened just a little,but the very next second she closed her eyes and slowly tilted her head in a way that their faces moved closer together...

And then slolwy shlok kissed her soft and warm lips..she tooo responded back...

When their lips touched each other for the first time ...the feeling was wonderful for both of them... they knew the memory would last forever...

Shlok whispered on her lips softly...I will always love you astha...

She was totally touched by his every action and word that this time she initiated the kiss gently...telling him that she will also love him till her last breath...

That single moment and her words were holding so much emotional tension that he took her into his embrace...kissing her forehead once again...

It was quite late and he was driving back to astha's home...

Astha was peacefully sleeping placing her head on his shoulder and her arm looped in his...

Though he was driving carefully but his mind was still stuck in her...

Shlok:Why sometimes I feel that she is scared for some reason...why her eyes sometimes reflect sooo much pain...but then he convinced his heart that may be she is scared for me as she loves me sooo much...

He promised to himself that very soon he will end all her fears by marrying her...but before that he will change himself into a responsible person like she wants him to be...

The time they reached her home she was still sleeping...

Shlok lifted her in his arms and took her all the way to her bedroom...he gently made her lie down in bed and removed her shoes and jewelry...covered her with blanket...and planted a soft peck on her cheek when in sleep she squeezed his hand murmuring ...please never leave me alone shlok...

He lovingly caressed her face...i will never leave you sweetheart...

The moment brought him a realization that how much she was misunderstood her entire life, not only by him, but by everyone.
She was truly a angel..his angel..deserving everyone's love...

Precap:


She was very sad ...was even ignoring her meals...
Shlok took her into a hug and kissed her hair...whats wrong with you astha...tell me...he was worried seeing her like that...


Waiting for ur precious comments...


Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update meera 👏
❤️ loved it ❤️ ...
Life can't be more perfect for these two...
U poured soon much emotions and feelings in one update...
Shlok fulfilling her each and every wish...
Especially their dinner with rain and kiss...
Its soo dreamy

But exactly like astha am also having some fear or tension throughout reading this part...
After reading ur note and everyone asking for happy ending...I kno what's in store 😭 😭

Am holding myself from searching the original story...not want to kill the suspence...but now am confused what to do??

Hmm...I decided to stick with ur updates rather than reading original synopsis...
Am ready with tissues...u carry on dear...
Edited by priya_avi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sreekailas

Lovely update..but im feeling heavy hearted coz i read d synopsis of d novel a walk to remember.. 😭😭

so..im reguesting u plss dont kill aastha..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Res!
Unres!

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG this was just aweeesssooommmeee ☺️
Everything was just very very beautiful! You should've made her wear some western outfit 😉
Shlok would've fainted 😆
Their dance... Oooh ❤️
And I love rains .., that made this perfect 😳

This was just a very beautifully written, perfect pace update... LUUURRRVVVEEEDD IT ❤️
Thank you so much for this and the pm 😳


Edited by .Farah. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sam_15

Chapter 4


That was such a sweet chapter Meerab 😳😳
An angry Astha giving Shlok a tough time and refusing to forgive him is a treat to read 😆😆 Even though I was feeling sympathy towards Shlok, a part of me liked that Astha was not forgiving him easily. After all she was hurt so much by Shlok. But here she is clearly avoiding him. It's not about the insult anymore. I think when he insulted her, it was then she realised the depth of her feelings for him which perhaps scared her. Am I right? 😉
But loved the fact that Shlok was so desperate for Astha's company and to win her friendship back. Honestly speaking, my heart melted reading about his desperation 😳😳
Aww the play part was wow. Even though u left out the most important bit... 😉😆 I still loved it very much. And that's because of their dance. It was so dreamy...how during their dance he recalled his own words and thoughts about her, that how beautiful she is looking just like an angel, that how wrong he was to think otherwise, and ...and ...and made the most important realisation. That he is in love with her. How dreamy and emotional the entire scenario is? I was so ready to cry here.. 😳😳 Hehe...
And then the last part too was awesome. Shlok finally confronted her that why she is avoiding him. I was waiting for something similar since she started avoiding him at the start of the chapter and by the end of the chapter u made it happen 😆 Love u for not making me wait 😉😆 Anyways it was intense. And to make it even better, he confessed, even though indirectly, letting her know of his feelings This just made the chapter perfect for me. May be my favourite chapter of this SS till now 😃

Meeru u r doing such a brilliant job with this SS that I want to give you a tight hug 🤗 Haha...honestly I'm so much in love with this story. Imagining this whole story on Ashlok just makes the whole thing even more emotional. Btw ur story is really making me want to see the movie again

Awww...thank u sooo much sayum for the loveliest comment...well this chapter is mine favorite tooo...i guess because of my imaginations reg ashlok...
You are right the story looked more beautiful to me when i imagined it for our ashlok...

Your beautiful comment always makes my day😛😛😛😛😛
Love you tooo sweetheart...muaaahhh...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sam_15


What a horror!! 😲😲 Ok u win!! Don't think I can find anything more violent than this 😆😆😆

Awww...that fight was for my shlokie...but u know i love u tooo sweetheart😳😳😳😆😆😆😆
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Originally posted by: ruhakhan

OK so finally they confess their love for each other

And avdhoot also accepted him
Do update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pranu_d

oh god meerab! what a lovely update yaar

i dont know where to start, but i loved the way shlok spoke with avdhoot
for a while, i was shocked, at the same time, happieee too😃😃😃
awww shlokkk, love youuu and meerab, those lines😳
precap is so so so so interesting..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pranu_d

lol😆
awww kitna cute hai yeh😳
thank you so much for the love sweety

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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