Aapki...AasthaFF(Part 15 update in Pg 78)

Bobbie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow. Very nicely written romantic suhaagraat. Can't wait for their honeymoon.

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome blossom update naina...

I have seen writers skipping the rituals part in ffs..but u wrote it very detailed and its always pleasure to witness or read about weddings...
And thier sr...it was streaming hot...its sizzling...loved reading...
Thanks for the update and pm dear...
Now waiting to read hm update...but its sad that its gonna be last update of this beautiful ff...so am already started reading ur another ff...

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Nirmala

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Naina I just loved it. 😃

You have done a fabulous job.👏👏

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guesss what ???????...i am basically so cool......

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Posted: 11 years ago

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sorry for late comment

i am on tab so its a short comment

i read last 3 part in a go

i loved it dear

hot romance of ashlok

love their suhaaag raat

so everything is finally goood around them

u r an amazing writer

gr8 work dear

keeep writing more n more

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seeheeryou

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Kya baat hai?
Its awesome buddy!
Well written 👏
Sweet and cute start of NA-Shlok-Aastha talk..
And then wedding rituals with each and every minute details, got crystal clear images!
And at last the passionate, romatic SR..
Altogether amazing..
Waiting for their HM, its last part expecting yet another superb update..

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logambika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#516

awesome update yaar... next is the final????

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mayabharathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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it is a superb update too hot I must say

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: priya_avi
Hi naina..read last 2updates...
They were really awesome...
Niru deserves this but anji hav to look after bedridden niru...hope unlike in the show agnis hav more servants here.

And the last part was really hottt...love bite.naughty shlokie...
Naina I hav to tell u, u were too gud in pulling romantic stuffs...each one is different and novel...
Nothing repitative...
Loved it 😃
Thanks for the pm dear...

Thanks a looot for sharing your views my dear...😃
I am sooo glad to know that you liked those parts..😳

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: NatashaRia
Nainaaa!!!
The marriage was very beautifully described... You described a Marathi wedding perfectly, using the right words... It was soo good to read... Aastha as a blushing bride...😊😃

The SR update was so hot... My cheeks are red☺️ They entwined... Awesome update Naina... Again..

You deserve a huggieee🤗
This is getting over😭 Will miss 'Aapki Astha'!