Ashlok SS-True love(Part8...pg84 & Last part...pg88)) - Page 67

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashlok

awww I was much awaited to read this post sweeety

as always I lost my words to noble u dear
lovely lovely lovely
fabulous fabulous fabulous
fantastic fantastic fantastic
awesome awesome awesome
amazing amazing amazing
that's alll no words left to praise ur work sweety
mere cutie pie
when I opened the box my eyes were searching for ur lovely
update
I'm sorry today morning I'm had my school classes so yesterday I have slept early for my classes
its okay now I'm reallly happpy
thank u so much for the happiness u gave me through ur story
plz keeep writing and pm me first of alll understand?
I love the way u portrayed each an every emotions through ur writing a good story have to change readers mind
ur story is keeeping me happy so u r a great writer
I love u soo much
plz comeback with another story
last part was awesome dear
ur ending was supppeeerb
I love the way u have written AFTER 2YEARS
suppperb update dear
no words
love u honey

love u tooo sweetheart
Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Farah.

The last two parts were SUPPPEEERRRBBB! Loved them very very much!

And OMG the last part ☺️ Awesome!
At first I seriously thought that they met with an accident.. Phew they didn't.. Or else how would we get a Nirma update? Eh eh 😉

BAHAHAHA.. Shlok was impatient for baby Astha.. He is our real shlokie, on tv, in stories 😳

And the other couples proposal was so beautifully written! Lovely! 👏

Great work meerab! Love all your stories... Keep them coming! 🤗😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: athmi

Hey meerab
Just got up. The very first thing I got my phone and checked for updates; i'm speechless dear the update is really really awesome. 👏
The way you portrayed the characters is really amazing. Even after 2 years they get turned on when a line of romance come 😆
Last lines about love is really true. I'm very much impressed.
I started off my day with this beautiful update so I guess my entire day will be superb. 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
after 2 years leap very well written
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vivirti_Suvian2

after 2 years leap very well written

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi meera 😊read both chapters in one go,super happy ending for superb story 👏so it was all engin's plan..thank god he protests n saved the life of all four..engin elena confession & marriage was so sweet n romantic.ashlok confession &marr was hatke n nirma...😉..n i always luv to read happy ending stories n how they lived happily there after... 2 year leap n both couples r bf now n expecting baby gal,was cho sweet..had a nice time reading ur ss sweety.. Hope u come with another story with a bang... 😳 tfd pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for the late reply.
Nice update.
Thanks fr the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haye si beautiful proposal by engin...
Now aastha know shlok love her...
Superb updet dear...
I love it...

Tumhari misaal namumkin hai jaana,
Tumhara to aksa bhi tum sa nahi...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u meerab for your wonderful ss, thanks for the pm too, enjoyed every bit :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww meerab, the last part is just amazing baby
the first ashlok scene was so funny.. pata hi nai chala yeh scene kab romance mein badal gaya😆
ashlok are so fast yaar.. ek hi raat mein sab kuch hogaya😛😉
btw naughty astha, shlok ko sone bhi ni deti🤪
astha and shlok were far beyond the label of sweet and cute
lol.. loved this sentence
lol astha becoming demanding n elena worrying for their daughter
u never leave a chance to make us laugh, whether it is nirma moment or something else❤️
last statement is just amazing
thanks for the lovely story meerab🤗



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