Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 10 updated on page 138)

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Zehra Fatima Chohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: Sam_15

U were lucky 😉

aww 😳

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#692

I seriously thought you were not going to update today. oh well sorry for the mess we created and that song. yeah its a song i used to listen when i didnt even know the meaning of its lyrics. Heartless by Kanye West. i sing that aloud whenever someone is ignoring me. you know its just not fair to ignore such a crazy person. i mean its just not fair to ignore Suri😆😆 yeah yeah i know you agree.

should i say something about the update. no forget it first let me tell you the backgoround, when i was reading this i was literally half dozing😆😆

i had one test today and last might i was so restless i couldnt sleep for my good 6 hours and then i was so excited after the exam that i came here and started you know...spamming... meanwhile...what the hell am i writing... my diary?

sorry about that...

the update yeah... i have half forgotten what all it was about..but the morsels that are still intact in some corner of my short term memory...

Shlok is smart to refuse anyother Shadi ke baad wali parties. Astha gave him a good piece of her that day. and i remember there was something about Shlok being caring about her. i mean good boy any decent man wont want his wife to sleep uncomfortable while he enjoys the luxury of a bed.

i was so reading this phrase again...

He didn't like the idea of putting himself at ease at the cost of her discomfort.

oh well for a start such things are the steps. then i remember i liked the part where he ran into the washroom before her, and she refusing to give him the towel...for a momnt i feared he would walk out naked and at this time of the night Suri losses her sanity.

oh not to forget the tension yeah yeah the S one when he walked out , HALF naked. she was observing his masculine form...naughty naughty.😆

the best part she poking the needle into him, i half expected her to do that. very well Astha... Shlok literally went there to ...you know what he is already seeking, okay trying to seek her attention...boy!

oh look Swati is here...im bittersweet.😈

Even when its swati Shlok actually turned the phone to its speaker and made Astha listen to all his crappy talk. did you ever love Swati Shlok? even at her call all youcare to do is annoy Astha...

wasnt really nice of him to refuse to tell swati the truth...the surprises can go to hell...she might propose him which might end up in rotten eggs but still why to hide somethng that is going to be there always.

I think such reactions might actually help Shlok grow more mature emotionally...well people say succh stuff about Astha but i find them appropriate for Shlok here...

the precap is such a jelly... 😳 i mean you dnt know what i feel like doing to jelly when i see it😆 hulk fudu smash smash...its so cute i mean the jelly and the precap.😳

okay im dead now... eyes drowsy and hands floppy. do not know what i have written.. but i know i had to reply now cuz i wont be getting any time for the next many days...

i know its useless...and i completely understand...but still... UPDATE SOON!

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Suri

@BlackJack.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#693

shi* the length i m sorry i dint realise...phew!

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...Ayesha...

@xayeshax

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#694

Originally posted by: AshesToDust
I seriously thought you were not going to update today. oh well sorry for the mess we created and that song. yeah its a song i used to listen when i didnt even know the meaning of its lyrics. Heartless by Kanye West. i sing that aloud whenever someone is ignoring me. you know its just not fair to ignore such a crazy person. i mean its just not fair to ignore Suri😆😆 yeah yeah i know you agree.

should i say something about the update. no forget it first let me tell you the backgoround, when i was reading this i was literally half dozing😆😆

i had one test today and last might i was so restless i couldnt sleep for my good 6 hours and then i was so excited after the exam that i came here and started you know...spamming... meanwhile...what the hell am i writing... my diary?

sorry about that...

the update yeah... i have half forgotten what all it was about..but the morsels that are still intact in some corner of my short term memory...

Shlok is smart to refuse anyother Shadi ke baad wali parties. Astha gave him a good piece of her that day. and i remember there was something about Shlok being caring about her. i mean good boy any decent man wont want his wife to sleep uncomfortable while he enjoys the luxury of a bed.

i was so reading this phrase again...

He didn't like the idea of putting himself at ease at the cost of her discomfort.

oh well for a start such things are the steps. then i remember i liked the part where he ran into the washroom before her, and she refusing to give him the towel...for a momnt i feared he would walk out naked and at this time of the night Suri losses her sanity.

oh not to forget the tension yeah yeah the S one when he walked out , HALF naked. she was observing his masculine form...naughty naughty.😆

the best part she poking the needle into him, i half expected her to do that. very well Astha... Shlok literally went there to ...you know what he is already seeking, okay trying to seek her attention...boy!

oh look Swati is here...im bittersweet.😈
Even when its swati Shlok actually turned the phone to its speaker and made Astha listen to all his crappy talk. did you ever love Swati Shlok? even at her call all youcare to do is annoy Astha...
wasnt really nice of him to refuse to tell swati the truth...the surprises can go to hell...she might propose him which might end up in rotten eggs but still why to hide somethng that is going to be there always.
I think such reactions might actually help Shlok grow more mature emotionally...well people say succh stuff about Astha but i find them appropriate for Shlok here...

the precap is such a jelly... 😳 i mean you dnt know what i feel like doing to jelly when i see it😆 hulk fudu smash smash...its so cute i mean the jelly and the precap.😳

okay im dead now... eyes drowsy and hands floppy. do not know what i have written.. but i know i had to reply now cuz i wont be getting any time for the next many days...

i know its useless...and i completely understand...but still... UPDATE SOON!

🤗