Ashlok ss shaza ek sweet torture part-5 09 -06-2014)

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Ashlok ss :shazha ek sweet torture

A huge ,large masculine figure standing in a dim light room facing out side from the window. His eyes were glowing like a radiant with the love,desire in his eyes clearly shows what was in his mind.

Its is none other than the great shlok agnihothri .After facing lot of mental stresses, today he is truely feels very light.Because he exposed his love to his lady love.which love he never consider that exists in his heart.He always try to fool himself that their Is nothing in his heart .Finally she break the wall in his heart and his so called ego with her pure love.

He is very happy today.He never taught that this day will come in his life .He did broke her heart in pieces .He crushed her self respect too.But she always fought alone in this battle and finally won his heart.After recalling those days shlok murmured seeing the full moon which is resembles her fairy face

Shlok :Aastha I did made U cry.But aab oh din gayi.I dont want to see a single drop of water in ur eyes.I sweared I will make ur life living heaven.
saying shlok become restlessly waiting in his room for her arrival


The room doors were slightly open he saw her face which glowing In moon light .she slowly come before him his heart beats like that is going to burst in any moment.He is on cloulds thinking he is going to give all her rights as a wife.Tonight I will make U mine in all ways mrs.Aastha shlok agnihothri he murmured as a light whisper.


Aastha : Shlok are U not sleeping.I thought U were sleeping.
She is directly reached the dressing table and remove her jewels one by one .He just mesmerized seeing her beauty.He slowly move towards her and try to hug her from behind but she noticed it too .After seeing her husbands craving for her.she have a mischievous smile on her lips.she just move from there so shlok just hug himself in air.

Aastha :Shlok because of this swikirthi pooja I really tired .I just want to sleep and wake up early in the morning for further rituals.please shlok light band kar thegiye muje bahuth neend aarahi he

Shlok just stood like a numb and nodded she bides thanks to him

Aastha (in mind) : what R U think about me mr shlok agnihothri.Aap zidth Hein tho mein aap se zyadha zidthi hoon .I will not give in that easily.Aap ki lips se wo 3 words sunne keliye mein itni kosish ki.Aap ko bhi utna kosish karna padega muje pane keliye.
She come to the bed then laid besides him tightly holding his hand and starts cuddle in to his arms .

He just inhale her smell from her hair.with in a second he turned on.He wanted her badly.He slowly leaned towards her face .Their face come very closer only very few inches between their lips.Aastha come too close than their last position theirs breathes mingled ,with the anticipation shlok just close his eyes and parted his lips.when his lips about to touch hers aastha just turn his face and give a peck on his cheeks and said "GOOD NIGHT SHLOK".Then she just move closer to shlok and rub her face in to the crook of his neck and starts snuggling in his chest.Shlok can't take this torture any more .He think she is very tired , he did care for her so he taught he will remain silent untill she sleeps.But his desire for her proves him wrong, every passing moment became torture for him.He turn on very hard like a iron rod.He feels his blood boiling inside his heart.His breath became Ubnormal.

Aastha became very proud on herself seeing her effect on her husband she assure herself that she will not give in that much easily.But she feels sorry for him so she loosened her grib and pretend like she fell in sleep.
Shlok : oh thank U my god,she is a tiny dynamate .Please save me from this time bomb if this torture cotinued further I will die in any moment thanks for saving me said shlok hurriedly move towards bathroom for take a well needed cold shower.

Aastha : After hearing shloks words aastha smirks and start gigled said oh my impatient husband I really love U but yeh aap ki galthi ka shaza Hein aap apni pyaar ko kehne ki dheri ki tho apko apki pyaar pane mein bhi dher hi lagegi then she fell a real sound sleep .There is remain silent except that continues sound of water from shower.so tell me friends shall I continue this or not
INDEX:
PART1:
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PART2:

PART 3:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105926369

PART 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/105989477
PART 5:

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it..
its something lyk dat i wanted to see in our show..
plz,plz continue.. Looking fwd to it..
😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow really nice start, go Astha she needs to make him feel what she felt when she wanted to hear him say he loves her, hope you post the next part soon I can't wait to read what happens next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Surely you must continue.. I just loved it!! Hope you will..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: avi_ashi

loved it..

its something lyk dat i wanted to see in our show..
plz,plz continue.. Looking fwd to it..
😳

Thank u dear i will continue this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

wow really nice start, go Astha she needs to make him feel what she felt when she wanted to hear him say he loves her, hope you post the next part soon I can't wait to read what happens next

Thank U so much dear I will surely continue this I will try to post next update today or tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu123.

Surely you must continue.. I just loved it!! Hope you will..

Thank u all i will surely continue this thank u so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome dude
I was expecting these scenes in our show
But I don't think that will happen so soon
Happy to read my expectations in your SS
Please continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: srilotus

loving it...plz plz continue

😊 sure dear .Thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meilliures

It's awesome dude

I was expecting these scenes in our show
But I don't think that will happen so soon
Happy to read my expectations in your SS
Please continue

😳 mee too dear am also egarly waiting for these type of scence in CVs too😉
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