Ashlok ss shaza ek sweet torture part-5 09 -06-2014) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
that is so beautiful.shlok desires 4 her,but aastha is making him wait.so sweet.pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...

thanks sweety😛...love u

I love you...u...tooo ...dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
This is really awesome...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ashlok ss:shaza ek sweet torture

Part 2 :
Next day morning...
Shlok is still in his sleep but his lips have a cute smile.He felt her smell in pillows he search her in room but she is not there .He get up from the bed and went to the bathroom .First he splash the water in to his face .slowly starts unbuttoned his shirt then he noticed her hair which is stuck in his button it drive him crazy he think about aasthas cuddling in night .
Shlok : Aastha very bad kal raath meri neendh karab karke ache se soyi thi na dekna aaj mein kya kar raha hoon.
When he came from his room he watch aastha and anjalis speech
Anjali :Aastha sitha se kehe kar pooja keliya jo flowers aiyethe na usse leke aaoo
Aastha : Ji saasu bhai...
Aastha returned to the hall with flowers.suddenly shlok pulled her from behind he trace her skin until reach her elbows aasthas hand were trumbling she loosened her grip from the thali which she hold in her hands.
Aastha : please leave me.Some one will see
Shlok : let them see I dont care . U are my wife then shlok place his jaw on her sholuder and drip his face into her hair and inhale her smell a chill waves run throw her spine .Aastha slowly lose her sence shlok place his hands on her waist and pull her more closer to his body he place a kiss on her crimson cheeks. He caresses her waist with his thumb she let out a gasp shlok turned her from her hip amused to see her shy
Shlok : Itna qu sharma rahi hoon.pehele tho hamesa I love U love kethe rathi par jab se mein pyaar ki confess kiya thab se ignore kar rahi ho.
Shloks words made her sense comeback she place her hands on his shoulders and leaned on towards his face
Aastha : Oh aisa bath Hein tho aap muje miss kar rahethe
Shlok : Nahi tho bhil kul Nahin tume nahi tumari yeh pyaari se muskurat ko miss kya then he trace corner of her lower lips and lean to kiss her.Aastha push him forcely and start run from there shlok to run after her
When shlok try to pull her wrist she drop that thali to the floor. She escape from his hold and hide behind the pillar .
Shlok search her every where suddenly a he see a shadow behind the pillar.He immediately pull that person and hug from behind with out realising who is that.
shlok : Aastha...
person : Shlok wat is this?
Shlok : Baba aap ! Shlok became very nervous and his face became pale due to see his baba there he lowered his head with embrassement with out say any word he ran towards his room and close the doors with loud "dhud".Seeing shloks action niranjan became very shock.
Nirangan (in mind ) : patni ki peeche baagna tumareliye acha nahin hein meri Bache.
After seeing this aastha place her hands on her tummy and starts laughing without knowing the waiting strom.So how was it?
So friends I know its too short but I don't have time because of my exams .I typed it in hurry
Hope U enjoy it if not then pls forgive me sorry for disappointing u
Edited by raji_ashloksfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I can honestly say I enjoyed it very much .baba definitely not appreciate shlok mad after astha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update... First tym in my life I'm the secondt to comment...
Edited by NatashaRia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayabharathi

I can honestly say I enjoyed it very much .baba definitely not appreciate shlok mad after astha

Thank U dear if something like that really happens then NA ka face dekne layak hoga.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NatashaRia

Nice update... First tym in my life I'm the secondt to comment...

Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sireesha76

wow...nice update

i enjoyed it

Thank U dear happy to hear U enjoy it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awsum update.. shlok hugged NA🤣🤣 waiting for the storm

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