Updated ashlok ss:Family matters Ch6(pg17) - Page 7

Great update

Lovely update. Nice to see Shlok making such a big effort to make her happy. So cute. Thanks for the PM. Do update soon.

Loved da update
Continue soon

awesome update
shlok asked help from aditi
now what will she do
continue soon
thanks for the pm

A very fab update!! and u had me at Aditi having a boyfriend & she has no ulterior motives on Shlok - the cvs really need to take some great pointers from you :) loved what u made astha's important wish - a great intangible one, on shlok dealing with her parents over the tangible stuff such as shopping ... i presume there will be a good point in the future, where astha can have it all, both the intangible & tangible ;) u ask how we want to shape the story, but i think u have a good take on it giving nice depth to the characters and what they do to each other - so look forward to how u shape it 👍🏼

Originally posted by: desikahani

A very fab update!! and u had me at Aditi having a boyfriend & she has no ulterior motives on Shlok - the cvs really need to take some great pointers from you :) loved what u made astha's important wish - a great intangible one, on shlok dealing with her parents over the tangible stuff such as shopping ... i presume there will be a good point in the future, where astha can have it all, both the intangible & tangible ;) u ask how we want to shape the story, but i think u have a good take on it giving nice depth to the characters and what they do to each other - so look forward to how u shape it 👍🏼

Thank you for your kind words. They made my day.
😳 I'm glad yo think II'm doing something right. It's been a long time since I wrote real fanfiction. :)

nice update, so aditi has a bf...cool, so the wicked witch is going to be cupid...yay...i like how hard shlock is trying...its cute

Read all the chapters in one go...very nice story dear...
I liked it a lot...waiting for next chapter

Originally posted by: meerab...

Read all the chapters in one go...very nice story dear...
I liked it a lot...waiting for next chapter

Thanks for liking it Di!😳

Originally posted by: latha_555

nice update, so aditi has a bf...cool, so the wicked witch is going to be cupid...yay...i like how hard shlock is trying...its cute

Shlok's gotta repent. He made poor Astha cry so many times. He will pay for it!