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My lovely readers...Tomorrow I will update last part of this os...thanks for loving it

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meerab

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Ashlok OS-Teri Kaun Hoon Main

Last part

Thank u sooo much everyone for loving this filmy story...Here is the last part...hope u will enjoy this...

Astha was standing near the french window thinking about all what happened in last two months...when the sudden sound of door interrupted his queue of thoughts...

Jyoti pushed him inside the room ...

Jyoti:Jao bhai vahini tumhara intezaar kar rahi hai...ussey phir se pareshan mat karna...she giggled...

Shlok locked the door and slowly moved towards astha...today his eyes were reflecting his inner feelings and love for her...

It was after a long time she was seeing that much love and concern in his eyes for herself... tears started flowing from her beautiful eyes...thinking that finally her destiny united her with shlok once again...

She tried to say something but the knot formed in her throat didn't let her speak a single word...only pace of her falling tears increased...

He came closer to her and wiped her tears with his thumb...''bus ab aur nahi astha''...

She hugged him tightly and cried loudly...till the time all her inner pain escaped in the form of her tears...

Kalindi:aap ko kya lagta hai iss baar shlok astha ko kush tu rakhega na..????

Avdhoot:kalindi tu ne unki aankhon main aik doosrey ke liye bepana pyaar nahi dekha kya...mujhe pura yaqeen hai wo aik doosrey ke saath bohat kush rahein gey...

Astha:kyun nahi honey di aap ne meri doosri shaadi...kyun bhaagey chaley aaye they meri shaadi rokhney ke liye ???...she asked still hugging him...

Shlok looked into her eyes and said:kyun ke main bohat selfish hoon astha...jo mera hai woh main kisi ke saath share nahi kar sakta...aur tum sirf meri ho..sirf meri..aur tum kisi aur ki ho jati..yeh main kabhi bardhast nahi kar sakta tha...

Astha:kyun nahi bardhast kar saktey they aap shlok???...tears were rolling down her face...

Shlok:kyun ke main tum se bohat pyaar karta hoon astha...he again wiped her tears...and hugged her...

Astha:Main bhi aap se bohat pyaar karti hoon shlok...she said while crying bitterly...

Shlok:Tu kyun gayi thi mujhe chor ke???...now his eyes were wet tooo...he tightened his grip on her...

Astha:mujhe laga ke aik doosrey ko saath reh kar dukh deney se behtar hai ke hum alag hojayen shlok...

Shlok:Aur tum ne aik baar bhi nahi socha ke tumharey janey ke baad main kitna akela ho jaon ga...

Astha:tu aap ne bola kyun nahi...

Tears were flowing through his eyes...but still he managed a painful smile on his face...''tum tu janti ho main shlok agnihotri hoon ...main kabhi kisi ko explanations nahi deta...tumhein khud rukhna chahiye tha...sochna chahiye tha key agar tum chali jao gi tu main ghussa kis par karoon ga''...

Astha:tu aap ne sirf mujh par khussa karney ke liye shaadi ki shlok???

Shlok:Aur nahi tu kya...

Astha hit gently on his chest...''akdu ...khadoos kahin key''...

Both of them were crying and smiling at the same time...hugging each other more tightly...

Shlok:I promise u astha... aaj ke baad mera past hamarey future ke beech kabhi nahi aaye ga...aaj se hum apni zindagi ki aik nayi shuruwat karein gey... he kissed her on forehead...''mujhey bohat dher se ehsaas huya ke main tumharey bina nahi ji sakta...mujhe tumhari aadat hogayi hai astha...bohat buri aadat...aur buri aadat tu chorney se bhi nahi chutati...i m sorry main ne bohat dher laga di na yeh samajhney me ke tumhari meri zindagi main kya jagah hai ...main tum se bohat bohat ziada pyaar karta hoon astha...main tum se ab kabhi door nahi hona chahta..tears were flowing from his eyes continuously...

Seeing the love in his eyes which she desired for a long time...she couldn't control her emotions and she kissed his cheeks one at a time and then his eyes and then his forehead...

Astha cupped his face...Main bhi ab kabhi aap se door nahi hona chahti shlok...

The moment he just wanted to make her his once again in true sense...not for any revenge this time but only for his love...

She could feel the deep desire in his eyes , he was having for her at the moment...

He came extremely closer to her and kissed her eyes... her cheeks... and then his lips moved to her lips... gently kissing her...astha responded equally to his kiss...her hands snaked around his neck pulling him more closer... soon their kiss turned more and more passionate...as his tongue explored every corner of her mouth...

He lifted her in his arms while still kissing her passionately...and moved towards their bed...

"I love you, not for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you."

He gently placed her on the bed and came on top of her gently ...balancing himself on his arms ...as he was concerned about his baby...

He softly placed kisses on her cheeks...then her cute nose...then his lips moved to her earlobe...and he slightly sucked and bite her earlobe...making her to moan...then his lips traveled to her jawline and then to her throat and lower...

As he reached her belly he stopped ...and with so many dreams in his eyes he asked looking straight into her eyes...hamara baby???...

Astha nodded lovingly...

He caressed and kissed her belly...and once again he looked into her eyes ...astha main papa ban jayun ga aur tum aayi...a tear drop fall from his eyes...

Astha cupped his face and gently pulled his face upwards closer to hers...and kissed his eyes to remove his tears...

Shlok hugged her tightly like a small child... and astha hugged him back with equal passion...

Astha:I love u shlok...i love u sooo much...

Shlok:i love u tooo astha...he placed a wet kiss on her neck and gently turn so that now astha was on his top ...he untied her blouse dori...and slowly removed it kissing her shoulders...and every inch of her milky arms...

After he undid her blouse her hands moved to her sari and soon they both were under the duvets making love to eachother...

It was a beautiful night of their life ...night of their union ...

''When you are in Love you can't fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams.

Next day Astha opened her eyes to a beautiful morning...and found herself in his lovely husband's arms...she was feeling this much happy after days ...she looked towards shlok who was peacefully sleeping with innocence of a child on his face...

She kissed on his cheek and then his chest wishing him good morning...and he slightly opened his eyes rubbing them...

With a naughty smile on his face..he pulled the duvet to his side making her to blush ...

Astha almost shouted...''shlokkk''

Shlok:Oh madam...tum merey bed par kya kar rahi ho...jao na apni side par ja kar sooo na...mujhe disturb kyun kar rahi ho...

Astha:shlok aap ka mood phir se badal gaya kya...???...she questioned him with a little bit of surprise ...while covering her...

Shlok laughed loudly...mrs. astha shlok agnihotri...tumhara top floor waqai bilkul khali hai...

Astha:haan waqai mera top floor khali hai...kyun ke main ne aap jaisey insaan se itna pyaar jo karliya...

Shlok smiled at her wife's sweet confession and kissed her forehead and took her into his arms...i love u tooo astha...

Shlok:astha...he called her name still hugging her...

Astha:hmmm...she spoke against his chest...while kissing their...

Shlok:main aik acha father tu ban paon ga na????...

Astha looked up into his eyes...and took his hand and placed on her belly and said...mujhe pura vishwas hai shlok ke aap bohat hi achey pita sabit hoon gey...

Shlok :thank u ..thank u sooo much astha..he said with teary eyes...meri zindagi mein phir se ujala karney ke liye...meri zindagi ko jeeney ka aik naya maqsad deney ke liye...main hamarey bachey ko duniya ki har khushi dena chahta hoon...

Astha :i love u shlok...she lovingly kissed on his lips..and then hide her face in his chest...

People think a soul mate is your perfect fit, and that's what everyone wants.
But a true soul mate is a mirror, the person who shows you everything that is holding you back, the person who brings you to your own attention so you can change your life,who tear down your walls and smack you awake,who tear apart your ego a little bit, show you your obstacles and addictions,
break your heart open so new light can get in...

TWO MONTHS LATER...

Astha was setting their cupboard when shlok came from office...

Shlok:how many times I have told u not to touch any work...u need to take rest only...he scold her while lifting her in his arms...

Astha:arey shlok...mujhe apna kaam complete tu karney dijiye...

Shlok:nahi koi kaam nahi ...sirf aram...samjhi...

Astha:agar sara waqt bistar par aram karoon gi tu phool kar gol gappa ban jaon gi...samjhey...she tapped on his forehead...

Shlok made her to sit on bed and himself sit on his knees on the floor and hold her both hands in his...

Shlok:waisey tum ab bhi kuch kam nahi hu astha...

Astha :shlokkk...she made a twisted face...theek hai tu koi doosri dhoondh lijiye
...

Shlok:soch lo...shlok agnihotri ko lardhkiyon ki koi kami nahi hai...

Astha:khabardar ju kabhi aap ne asia socha bhi tu...I was just joking shlok
...

Shlok:jealous...

Astha:Mrs astha shlok agnihotri bhi Mr. shlok agnihotri ki tarah na bohat ziada selfish hai...apne akdu ko kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakti ...samjhey...

Shlok smiled seeing her possessiveness for him...

Astha:baby aap sun rahey ho na aap ke papa kitney bardhey flirt hain...

Shlok: mera baby apney papa ko dekh kar proud feel kar raga hoga ...ke uss ke papa bohat talented hain...

He kissed and slightly caressed her tummy when suddenly he feel a blow on his hand...

Shlok:hey our baby kicked me...I just feel it...he kicked na...he asked her in excitement...

Astha :cupped his face lovingly and with a big smile on her face said...hain shlok our baby kicked...our baby kicked for the first time...she just hugged him in happiness...

Both were super happy on their child's first kick ...

A new baby is like the beginning of all things - wonder,hope, a dream of possibilities.

3 MONTHS LATER...

After sooo many years he was once again writing his diary...writing his happiness in words...

You are beautiful and brilliant and bold and so very passionate about life and love and those things that you believe in.
And you taught me that everything I believed, everything I thought I wanted, everything I had spent my life espousing--all of it...it is wrong.
I want your version of life...vivid and emotional and messy and wonderful and filled with happiness. But I cannot have it without you.

''Love knows no brim. It can fill an empty
heart, or flood one that's already spilling
over. When love is being passed around,
there's no need to say when.''

"Love is what makes two people sit in the
middle of a bench when there is plenty of
room at both ends."

He was so busy in writing his new memories that even he didn't feel her presence around him...but he at once closed his diary when she hugged him from behind...

Astha:mr. akdu itni raat ho gayi hai aur aap ab tak jaag rahey hain...

Shlok pulled her in his lap...

Shlok:aur ye swaal tu main tum se bhi kar sakta hoon...mrs. astha shlok agnihotri...

Astha:shlok wo na... hamarey baby ko bohat bhook lag rahi hai...ussey ice-cream khani hai..iss liye woh mujhe sooney hi nahi de raha...bilkul akdu hai aap ki tarah...she pinched his nose naughtily...

Shlok:raat ke 3:00 bajey ice-cream...oh no...aisa karo kuch aur khalo astha...

Astha:nahi bola na ice-cream tu matlab bus ice-cream...baby ko bus ice-cream hi chahiye...

Shlok:Hamara baby na akdu nahi ziddi hai bilkul tumhari tarah...

Astha:nahi akdu

Shlok:nahi ziddi

The way they were fighting like kids...made them laugh themselves...

''We're all a little weird. And life is a little weird. And when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall into mutually satisfying weirdness"and call it love"true love.''

Astha:waisey shlok aap ko kya lagta hai...hamara baby boy ho ga ya baby girl???...

Shlok smirked : well mujhe tu aik choti si princess chahiye...but twins also not bad...he winked...

Astha:aur agar twins na huye tu...

Shlok:tu we will keep on trying...he said rubbing his nose against hers...

Her cheeks got cherry red at his akdu's words...

Astha:Shlok ab bus chaliye na mujhe ice-cream khani hai...bohat bhook lag rahi hai...

Shlok:aisey nahi...aik shart hai meri...

Astha:kya...she looked straight into his eyes...

Shlok tapped his lips...icecream chahiye tu aik kiss tu dena pardhey ga...

Astha again blushed but then shyly she placed her one hand on his eyes and gently kissed his lips...

Shlok kissed her lips again and whispered in her ear...bohat din se aik baat nahi boli tumse???

Astha:kya???

Shlok:that i love u ...i love u sooo much...

Astha hugged her ..and said:''i love u tooo...my akdu''...

Shlok thought to himself:kitna ghalat kiya tha maine astha tumhein itna dukh de kar...agar tum meri zindagi main wapis na aati tu khushi kya hoti hai iss ka matlab main kabhi samaj hi na pata...meri zindagi tumharey beghair adhoorey hai...

She may not be thinking about you every second of the day, but she will give you a part of her that she knows you can break"her heart.

1MONTH LATER...

Finally the day came when he first took his little princess in his arms...she was sooo tiny that he was confused that how to handle her...thats why every now and then she was glancing astha...to get her assurance that he is rightly holding their little daughter...

When nurse took their little soul ...he sat next to astha on her bed...

She was sooo weak after giving birth but the sight of shlok taking their daughter in his arms was so beautiful and blessing that all her weakness subsided and a new energy washed her whole existence...

Shlok kissed her forehead ...his eyes were flooded with tears of happiness...

Shlok:thank u itney khoobsurat gift ke liye...hamari beti bohat cute hai...bilkul tumharey jaisi and thori si merey jaisi..aik pal ke liye mujhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ke main ussey kaisey sambhaloon...wo hai hi itni choti si...bilkul pari key jaisi...he paused for a second...held her hands and kissed her knuckles...''astha mujhe yaqeen nahi ho raha ke main papa ban gaya hoon...wo meri beti hai...he kissed her forehead again...''thank u ..thank u sooo much meri zindagi main itni khushiyan laney ke liye...meri life ko..meri family ko complete karney ke liye...i love u...i really really love u''...

Astha just spread her arms for him and he instantly hugged her...hiding his face into her arms...

Astha:i love u tooo shlok...

"Only once in your life, I truly believe, you find someone who can completely turn your world around. You tell them things that you've never shared with another soul and they absorb everything you say and actually want to hear more. You share hopes for the future, dreams that will never come true, goals that were never achieved and the many disappointments life has thrown at you. When something wonderful happens, you can't wait to tell them about it, knowing they will share in your excitement. They are not embarrassed to cry with you when you are hurting or laugh with you when you make a fool of yourself. Never do they hurt your feelings or make you feel like you are not good enough, but rather they build you up and show you the things about yourself that make you special and even beautiful. There is never any pressure, jealousy or competition but only a quiet calmness when they are around. You can be yourself and not worry about what they will think of you because they love you for what you are. You find strength in knowing you have a true friend and possibly a soul mate who will remain loyal to the end. Life seems completely different, exciting and worthwhile. Your only hope and security is in knowing that they are a part of your life."

Sorry for mistakes...

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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seeheeryou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Perfect end 👏 thank you so much for such a nice os. Expect more like this... Plz do continue writing. Love reading your os..

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: anu123.
Perfect end 👏 thank you so much for such a nice os. Expect more like this... Plz do continue writing. Love reading your os..

Thanks a lot sweety...and surely i will write more for lovely readers like u😛

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Neelum.drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Loved it meerab, aww shloki was worried that will he be a good dad, so sweet!. beautiful ending, love the way you passed time...do write more stories in future.

for such beautiful story

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Neelum.drashti

Loved it meerab, aww shloki was worried that will he be a good dad, so sweet!. beautiful ending, love the way you passed time...do write more stories in future.

for such beautiful story

Awww...thank u sooo much buddy for liking it...love u🤗

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Ashlesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Beautiful ending. The pictures ands mesh well together like a seamless melody. Truly beautiful and now i am in Ashlok land.. You are truly amazing Di!

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: infernofyre
Beautiful ending. The pictures ands mesh well together like a seamless melody. Truly beautiful and now i am in Ashlok land.. You are truly amazing Di!