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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
kya prepare di! Last week hi complete kiya tha. We also had exams. Is sab ke sath project kaise padu.

its ok dear... Bare it till 29th

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
Di neha so gayi?

haan so gayi
ab mai bhi jaa rahi hoon

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

ok bye meera
its very late
I'm going to sleep
will catch up latter

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: niki795
all the best for your viva

thank you di

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
ab mera net mera band baja raha tha. Isse zyada fast toh snail bhi chalta he

WO tu already dead hogaya...now time for new... 😆

And missing u all...

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naina..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

meerab 👏...u are weaving the emotions magically in words, added on the pics make it so alive ... u made me laugh out loud in the other story n made me cry with this one.😭... very well written...

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meerab

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Originally posted by: naina..
meerab 👏...u are weaving the emotions magically in words, added on the pics make it so alive ... u made me laugh out loud in the other story n made me cry with this one.😭... very well written...

awww.it was most beautiful compliment sweety... 🤗love u dear... 😳

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#228

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev
mene toh tumse pehle hi kaha tha ki apne net ko mar dalo. Tab toh tum naya le sakti thi. Ab dekha usne kya kar diya? 😲

Apart from the jokes! Its okay sweety. We will be waiting for you!

thanks sweety 😛

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thank u everyone for liking this story....

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Ashlok OS-Teri Kaun Hoon Main

Part-5

Soon they were taken to the hospital...

After astha gained consciousness ...without caring that what karan's family will think about her... she spent her every single second with shlok as he was operated...

Kalindi was worried for astha but even she was helpless to stop her as she knew that how much astha loves shlok...and forcefully keeping her away from shlok could trouble her health as she was pregnant...

Shlok was in coma for whole month and for next half month...he was unable to speak and move...but astha was always there for him...karan proved to be a great support for her always...they became good friends in this course of time...and his family was also extra sweet with her...

Shlok was not able to talk ,but he still tried at times to convey her ,what was in his heart through gestures...but his weakness was another hurdle in their union...

Two complete months passed...when karan's family pressurized kalindi and avdhoot for karan and astha's marriage as according to them shlok was much better now...

This time astha was not ready at any cost ...she preferred to spend her life alone but not with anyone other than shlok...but kalindi blackmailed her in the name of their family honour and her child's future and begged her to compromise with situation...somehow astha agreed seeing her mother's pain once again but she was totally broken inside...

Kalindi took her home one week before shlok's discharge date...astha was not ready to leave but this time she was left with no other option...

But in that one week shlok slowly started speaking again and by the day he was going to get discahrge he was perfectly normal...and he was determined that first thing he will do on getting discharge from here will be his confession to astha...

Before leaving shlok's family received a notification from court that shlok and astha's divorce for which they applied sometime back was not registered and approved by court yet as their previous record room catched fire ...

Shlok was happy that destiny gave him another clue that they both are just made for each other...

On leaving the hospital ,he just rushed to the place where she was getting married...but this time he was on time before any rituals started...

And infront of everyone he confessed his love for her...and asked her parents to stop this wedding...

But kalindi was not ready...

Kalindi:shlokkk...meri beti tumhara khilona nahi hai ...jis se jab chaha khela aur jab chaha ussey thor diya... tum se koi kya umeed karey tumey tu apney bachey ki bhi koi parwa nahi hai...

Astha:aayi bus kar...shlok ko iss bachey ke barey main kuch nahi pata...main ne inhein iss bachey ke barey main kuch nahi bataya tha...

Shlok:kash astha tum ne mujh se yeh chupaya nahi hota...tu aaj hamari zindagi aisey mor par na hoti...aur aunty aap mujhe ghalat samajh rahi hain...main yahan astha ko aur takleef deney nahi bulkey uss ki har takleef door karney aaya hoon...

Astha was happy that shlok is alright now and he is here for her...but her aayi's izzat was also important for her...she acted to be angry on him...but to some extent her anger was justified as only it was due to shlok that she got into such a tough situation now...

Astha:shlok ab kyun aaye hain aap yahan ...ab bohat dher ho chukki hai???...chaley jayiye aap yahan se...

Shlok:astha aik baar meri baat tu sun lo...

Astha with heavyheart said:ab kisi baat ka koi faida nahi shlok...aap ki koi baat hamari taqdeer nahi badal sakti...aur sach yehi hai ke ab na main aap ki patni hoon aur na hi aap merey pati...

Shlok:Arey taqdeer tu humey khud mila rahi hai astha...aur rahi baat pati patni honey ki...tu hum aaj bhi pati patni hain...hamara divorce kabhi registered hua hi nahi...aur jin papers par hum ne sign kiye they woh tu ussi din record room main aag lagney ke kaaran jal gaye they...

Everyone got shocked at this news...

Astha was crying on her fate that destiny also wants to bring them closer once again...

Shlok:astha please meri zindagi main wapis aa jao...merey liye ...hamarey bachey ke liye...

Astha was getting weak in her decision...she just wanted to hug him...as after his horrible accident it was first time astha was seeing him perfectly normal...

Kalindi:dekho shlok beta...meri astha ko agar tum kush dekhna chahtey ho tu yahan se chaley jao...main nahi chahti ke tumhari wajah se iss haal main woh pareshan ho...

Shlok:aap samajh kyun nahi rahi aunty... main yahan kisi ko pareshan karney nahi aaya...main sirf apni patni ko wapis le janey aaya hoon aur aisa kiye baghair main yahan se kahin nahi jaon ga...kyun ke main janta hoon ke astha sirf merey saath kush rahey gi...

Karan's mom:Bus kariye aap log...merey aur merey parivaar ki bhi koi izzat hai...jab chaha shaadi ka faisla kar liya aur jab chaha tor diya...merey betey ko lardhkiyon ki koi kami nahi hai...humein nahi karni yeh shaadi...ajeeb tamasha bana kar rakh diya hai hamarey parivaar ka...socha tha ke aaj nahi tu kal ye shaadi hojaye gi aur astha ko jo shares agnihotri parivaar se miley hain woh hamarey karan ke kaam aayen gey...par aap logon ne tu hamari izzat khak main mila di hai...chaliye ji yahan se..humein nahi karni aisey khandhan main apney karan ki shaadi... karan beta chal tu bhi yahan se...

Before leaving Karan said:Astha ji ..i m sorry ...main janta hoon ke meri family ne jo kaha wo ghalat hai...par yaqeen janiye mera aap ko dukh deney ka koi irada nahi tha...main kisi ki khushiyon ke beech nahi aana chahta...iss liye mera yeh shadi na karna hi behtar hai ...he left with his family while kalindi and avdhoot...go after them to convince them...but it was useless...

Shlok:ab tu sab problem khatam hogayi hai...ab tu chalo merey saath...

But still astha was angry on him ...may be with her ownself for deeply loving a person like shlok...

Kalindi was now more angry on him:kyun jaye yeh tumharey saath haan...itney ansoo diye hain tum ne meri astha ko...ke main tumhein iss ke liye kabhi maaf nahi karoon gi...

Meanwhile agnihotri family also reached there ...and after knowing about the situation they tried to convince astha's parents...but kalindi was so adamant because of her daughter's past experience that she was not ready to accept the marriage at any cost...

Shlok's tolerance was ending...he took a pinch of sindoor in his hand and filled astha's mang ...

Shlok:Astha meri patni thi aur hamesha rahey gi...chahey koi maney ya na maney...mujhe koi farq nahi pardhta...

Astha was crying more badly now...

She just slapped him...''but mujhe farq pardhta hai shlok aap ke past se mujhe farq pardhta...meri aayi ki khushi se mujhe farq pardhta hai...aur jo meri aayi ka faisala hoga...wohi mera faisala hoga''...

But her eyes were pleading to kalindi...not to separate her from shlok ...

Shlok went to his car and came back with few pictures of swati ...he held astha's hand and moved towards the mandap...where he threw swati's pictures in the fire and said...aaj main apney past ko hamesha hamesha ke liye bhulaaa kar tumharey saath aik nayi zindagi start karna chahta hoon astha...

Astha was silent and sobbing at all this ... today shlok himself wanted to move on in life with her but still she wanted her aayi's approval ...

Shlok tried her best to convince kalindi...

Avdhoot :maan ja kalindi apni beti ki khushi ki khatir haan kar de...sirf aik akhri baar...

After a lot of convincing finally somehow she agreed...

Kalindi:Theek hai ...par yeh sirf aakhri baar hai...

Astha hugged her aayi in happiness...

Astha:thank u aayi...thank u sooo much...

Shlok took avdhoot and kalindi's blessings...

NA:Ab jab sab theek hogaya hai tu pandit ji aap mantar shuru kijiye...main apni bahu ku poori izzat ke saath ghar wapis le jana chahta hoon...
Kalindi:rukhiye pandit ji...yeh shaadi aisey nahi hogi ...bulkey purey reeti rivaj ke saath dobara hogi...
Everyone was shocked and happy on kalindi's decision...
Kalindi:main ne apna faisla sirf apni beti ki khatir badla hai shlok...agar iss baar tum ne iss ka dil todha tu mujh se bura koi nahi hoga...

Shlok assured her that he will not repeat his mistakes...

NA:tu bus teh raha ke aaney waley kuch dinno main astha aur shlok ki shaadi purey reeti rivaj ke saath hogi...

Anjali: aur aik baat ka khaas khayal rahey...jab tak tum dono ki shaadi nahi ho jati ...tum dono aik doosrey se baat nahi karo gey...samajh gaye...

They nodded in yes...but it was most difficult time for them...but somehow it passed and within few days astha and shlok got married again...and finally it was their first night...for which they both were waiting since long as there was sooo much that they wanted to share with each other...sooo much they wanted to fight for...and another big reason there baby...their coming little soul and their love...for which they want to live together...

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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