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Hi Guys... I have a story concpet in my mind i just want to share with u . This is first time ever im try to write a story so im scared becoz in this forum so many great writer i dont know u like it or not...!! Im giving a prolouge and sorry for a grammatical and spelling mistake

Prologue

Today is a very big day of my life and my family becoz im going to enter a new phase of my life. Yes im getting married and become a D-I-L of well known reputed family ''THE AGNIHOTARI'' ... Im Aastha Kirloskar a 24 year old girl and daughter of Avdhoot and Kalandi Kirloskar... My father is working in a Agnihotari Group of Education Institue as personal assitant of Nirajan Agnihotri or u can say my father is right hand of NA.. He is consider my father as a friend and he is a very down to earth person... Im meeting him first time when he come our home to invite us on a Puja im really impressd with his personality. He have a wife Anjali Agnihotri and two son Varad and Shlok Agnihotri where i meet them they all good as a human. At that time i have a bit interaction all Agnihortri people...they all are nice Anjali ji is very nice and soft spoken lady she treated me as a daughter and Varad is also good and soft spoken. In that house every one is good except The Mr. Arogent Shlok Agnihotri. After one week they come our house and talk about a marriage proposle for his son. Intially im not ready but after some time due to sometime im ready for my family... And now today is the day where im getting to married his son.


Index

Part 1 - page 2

part 2 - pg 4

Part 3 - pg 6

Part 4 - Pg 7

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May at nite i will update 1 part...
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Very nice, continue please😛
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It sounds good I like the fact that Anjali is nice can't wait to read your story
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Very nice start. Waiting eagerly for the update.
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please continue.just love the proloude and whenever u update please pm me
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its realy nice , plz continue this
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great start and do continue
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thanx for liking it... if u have any problem, suggestion for my story plz feel free to tell...
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Hi guys my Part 1 is ready plz read and comment

Part 1

And now today is the day where im getting married to his son.. Im thinking all these things suddenly my thought of process interpted by my mother

''Aastha Aastha r u ready or not.'' kalandi said while entering the room.

when she saw me she had a tears in her eyes...''aasthu now u going to married i hope ur husband gave u all happiness in ur life... U look like a princess'' she said and kissed on my forehead & hugged me and then cry

suddenly Gauri come and said, '' Groom is arrived he look so handsome in White and Mahroon coloured Sherwani''

Another girl said,'' but our Aastha is not less than anyone... If jiju see her he is going to be flat'' and they are laughing

Kalandi smile and leave the room and went to downstair and welcome the Groom and his family.. In downsatir They do their riutal and in my room im become nervouse... Im not happy with this marriage i want that this marriage will stop i only accept this proposal beocz of my family they want that i become a D-I-L of Agnihotri family and when this proposal come my whole family happy they dont belive this could be happened so they accpeted...

''Aastha u looking very pretty,u look very nervouse dont worry everything will be okay, now give me a smile'', Gauri said

I smiled hesistately, seeing this Gauri asked me,'' Aastha r u happy with this marriage''

I looked her and said,'' Gauri I.. I... Im not happy with this marriage. I dont want to get married.''

Gauri shocked after listening this,'' If ur not happy then why did u agree for this marriage''

I said,'' becoz of my family they want that im getting married and become a part of Agnihotri family... Nirajan ji is a very nice person and he helped father always... He always treated my father more than a employee or we can say as friend.. They want to give a another name to their freindship so they sent a proposal of marriage''

Gauri said,'' okay but this is the reason that why u agree for marriage... But what is the reason u dont want to get married''

I said nothing

Gauri asked,'' do u love somebody''

I looked her and said,'' i dont know i love him or not... But i definately like him and attracted towards him''

'' who is he and what is his name'' Gauri asked

I said,'' his name is...''

suddenly my mother come Aastha come down Pandit asking for a bride...

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