Ashlok SS (Not Nammed) part 4 @ pg 7 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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if i get a time then i will update today...
Edited by k.taddy123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: k.taddy123

Sorry guys but i feel that my story is not good... so i have to think that should i continoue it or stop...!!

Hey don't stop. Continue with what ever you initially had in mind. Ur amongst fellow aslokians. So we will read what u post.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here my next part read, like and comment its really avery valuable for me... and thanx for all ur love and support😃😃

Part 3

I told myself that to remember,'' now Aastha u become a wife... U become a Mrs Agnihotri... U become a Mrs Aastha Varad Agnihotri ...''

Now the biggest moment come where i have to leave my parents, my home, my friends every thing... I hugged my Aai, Baba and Ajju and cried badley and said,'' i dont want to go... plz aai baba i want to live with... plz dont let me go plz...''

Kalandi said,''But it is bitter truth of girls life Aasthu, that after marriage we have to leave our home and then completely become a parts of other family... Follow their traditions, stay with them till death.. Dont worry beta u will find all happiness in ur new world i will pray for this for u... Now go and live in ur new world and always be happy beta..'' saying this Aai hugged me and cried...!!

After my Bidaai I reach my new house.. ''THE AGNIHOTRI house'' and i do all ritual which is done by all new bride..And in front of Bappa I pray,''Hey Bappa plz give me a straight to forget Shlok and accpet Varad as my Husband... I know that this is become a very difficult to forget Shlok becoz now im being a part of his family and now he is fornt of my eyes most of the time and its become very difficult for me to avoid him... Plz Bappa help me, plz help.''

''Shlok come beta and join us beta... And being a part of ur brother happiness'' NA said due to this my pray is distracted

Shlok looked towards me and said,'' congratulations Bhai and u too also congratulations.''

''Shlok what kind of behaviour this She is ur Bhabhi atleast talk properly with her and give respect to her'' Anjali said angerily

Shlok looked at me angerily and then goes to his room... After watching his anger im really scared with him

Anjali said,'' sorry beta from shlok sides he is always like this''

'' No no its okay aunty dont say sorry i dont like it that being a elder u said sorry to me plz'' I said

'' She pulled my ear and scold me lightly dont call me aunty... Now ownards u called me saasubai okay'' Anjali said I nodded my head like a obident chlid

'' now u must be tierd just take a rest okay, lets go...'' Anjali said

whlie walking she talk to me that today is ur first night now u and varad is started new life... So today u looked beautiful for ur husband and in room Anjali helped Aastha to get ready for her special night... But for me its really a scary night...!!

At night im sitting in my room and wait for Varad... Suddenly door opened and i heard footprint come close to me and i become scared...

''Where is Varad Bhai'',shlok asked to me

Im standup from my bed and getting annoyed with his behaviour that how can he enter in room without knock and permission

''Do u have any manners that how can u enter someone room without permission'' I angerily asked him...

'' listen this is my house, im living here since childhood and i dont need anybody permission... So mind it okay, now go and bring varad bhai i have a urgent talk with them'' Shlok said rudley

'' What... I will bring him'' I said in shocked and confused voice

'' No no im talking to this wall, Mr wall plz go and bring Varad bhai'' he said in fake sweet voice

i looked him angerily and said,'' very funny''

'' Shlok what are u doing here at this time'' varad come asked in confused manner

''Actually bhai i have a urgent work with u plz come with me'' shlok said

''now its very late shlok, we can talk tomorro'' varad said

''plz bhai its urgent let go plz'' shlok said

''okay lets go, aastha i will be come back shortly'' varad said and leave the room

while leaving room shlok look at me and then go

'' what kind of person is shlok'' i said in my mind

In hall'' Now tell me what urgent work do u have at this time... Do u know shlok today im get maaried and do u remember ur work'' varad said in a irritated tone

'' bhai tomorro u have a meeting for a project in which we both work and its very imp becoz after 2 weeks mom and dad aniversary we gave this project as a gift... So u know how much this is imp'' shlok said in a calm manner

'' i know i know... How much this is imp dont worry im attend that meeting and we disscuss it tommoro plz im tierd now let me go'' varad said

'' dada ur milk'' rani come and said to varad

varad take glass and drink milk then go to his room, after this shlok smile and goes to his room

Im standing and see the moon through window... Suddlenly door open varad come and lock the door seeing this im getting scared...!!

Edited by k.taddy123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
dere must b sleeping pills in dat milk?!i felt lyk shlok is trying 2 delay deir first night!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes... thr z sumtng n d milk..
Shlok won't let go of aastha so easily
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update,totally different and it's hard to digest Aastha as Varad's wife.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2

awesome update
astha married to varad
so she loves shlok
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
y is shlok behaving like that
does he also like her
and did he mix any pills in that milk
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like ur story its totally diff from other story why no update
im waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys here is another update of my story... im happy that u like it. And sorry for the late update.. So read it and plz gave ur like, comment. i hope u like this part


Part 4

Im standing and see the moon through window... Suddenly door open varad come and lock the the door... Seeing this Im geeting scared...!!

He come to me and ask,'' what r u doing here... I thought that u must be sleeping becoz its really a tieredful day for both of us...''

I looked at him and smiled hesitately he hold me from shoulder and said, '' Aastha today we both get married and our new life is started...''

He take me towards bed which is decorated with flowers and make me sit and also sits besides me, he said'' Aastha as we know that its our arrange marriage, and also we dont get time to intract with each other, but i will try to keep u happy and fulfill all ur wishes... As u know we r married and have whloe life to talk... Right now im really tierd and want to sleep... So gud nite and u also sleep u are also get tierd with all these rituals''

After saying this he get up and goes to his side of bed and sleep. I stared him for a long time and then get up from bed go towards my luggage to open it... I bring out my family photograh seeing this im sitting on the sofa and remmember all my happy and sad moments with my family, friend, my mischevious and naughty acts due to which i was always scolded by my mother... Im missing my family and remmember all those moment which we spend togther and how earlier i shared ever small thing to my family but this biggest thing that im in love with shlok didnt tell them...

''why bappa why, why all this happened why'' saying thing this i cried and then remmember whole past thing...

Flashback

It is the day of Puja in agni house where i come with my family... I was seeing the house and leave my family becoz im busy to messmerized the house beauty suddenly i bumped to someone lost my balance and about to fall due to fear i closed my eyes and then i feel that somebody hold my right arm with his hand... Slowly i open my eyes, stand properly and see that in front of my a tall handsome man, with beard that coverd his face, and its dark intense eye looking at me... And im stared him without blinking my eyes he snapped his finger to bring me out reality from my dream world...

''sorry, im really sorry i didnt see u, by the way hi im aastha kirloskar and u'' i smiled said politely

he stared me and goes from there without speaking a word, i also shrugged my shoulder and said,'' weird man !!''

''Actually this weird man is my younger brother Shlok'' i looked him with confused manner

'' oh!! i think i have to introduce myself first, Hi im varad Agnihortri... NA's elder son and that weird man is Shlok Agnihotri my yonger brother'' varad said with smile ''hi myself aastha, aastha kirloskar... Avdhoot kirloskar's daughter'' i replied with smile

''oh !!! So ur aastha kirloskar... Actually dad is always talking about u and ur father... I must say my father is really admire u and ur family and my father is not wrong ur really beautiful '' varad said in happy tone

''i think my mother is looking for me bye, nice to meet u...'' i said hesitatly and goes from there

''same here'' varad replied

im stading with my mother who is busy in talking with some lady... I dont know why but my eyes continously looking for shlok, i want to see him again isnt it weird i meet him first time in my life but want to see him again and again, i must say he has something in his personality due which im attracted to him,i think its his eyes in which im attracted the most becoz his eyes has some kind of depth...

Suddenly he come with his friends and had a chat with them... I dont know why but automaticaly i smiled... And that whole evening im continousaly watching him and admire him...

And at night im thinking about him dont know why but my mind always thinking about him and want to talk him...

''Aastha r u mad, u meet him first time and u want to talk him, u only know his name nothingelse, u r not a teenage girl who have a crush, but u r a mature girl, so behave like that... After all he is shlok agnihotri he must be have many girlfriend, so ur have no chance so go to sleep and stop thinking about him okay gud night Aastha'' i scolded myself and goes to sleep

In morning im busy to watching tv kalandi come and said,'' Aastha ur father called me that he forget file in home so plz u go to his office and give them.. He has a imp meeting plz beta go''

i said,''oky Aayi anything for u and baba.. I will give him oky aayi''

I reached Agnihotri office, in recption i asked about baba and recepsnist said he is in Shlok,s cabin and told me the direction...

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