Aaslok : forever mine... 2nd thread part 19 page 139 - Page 18

Originally posted by: emanali

Hmm dear overall i luv ur story

I luv da way u portrayed da characterx of asthu nd shlok

Each nd every scene u written hd logic nd proper background

U hv keep in mind all characters nd nt lost da grip @ any point

As a reader i hv visualized each nd every scene

So thnx a bunch dear 4 entertaing us...

Originally posted by: emanali

Nd u want me 2 pick 1 whereas i luved all da three stories ba forever mine is bestessst

Beinteha ws bessst

3rd 1 which is the opposite ov luv sound gud ...

I always luv da stories where there ix soft melodious romance in start nd at last it changes into passionate 1...
So as a writer i think u got my point...

Luved ur romance ...

Nd 1 request i want u 2 update as soon as possible as ur updates take 2uch time

V hv to wait 4 nxt update 4rm page 24 to 54 so plx update @ weekendx

Originally posted by: sreekailas

but roshani, how do u undrstnd d language? i mean, r u a south indian?

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

superb and excellent update.i loved how aastha has confessed her feelings for shlok .the ending part of part 12 was sweet.up till all the 12 chapters one word i will say "AWESOME" UPDATE.
GREAT STORYLINE.
CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD👏👏

Originally posted by: roshanii

ohhh he is so handsome and i like him in ZGH very much

yaar please tell me about some good dramas except all three man's dramas because i already watched all of their. 😳

Adhoori aurat , parsa , dil-e-muztar ,saath pardoon mein ,dil hai chota sa,uff yeh mohabbat,humsafar,numm,


and dastaan by fawad...it will make u cry...😭

Originally posted by: meerab...

Adhoori aurat , parsa , dil-e-muztar ,saath pardoon mein ,dil hai chota sa,uff yeh mohabbat,humsafar,numm,


and dastaan by fawad...it will make u cry...😭

i love forever mine & beinteha :D

beintiha was my favourite cuz it was diffrent as aastha and and shlok both took revenge from each other but forever mine is great to i loved the confession part but i didnt like the rape part but as a writer u justified the chracter very well

Originally posted by: roshanii

after 12 updates what do you think about the story😊

what it is the most beautiful thing in the story? according to you guys😳

what do you think about my Aaslok❓

give me the reasonable answer😛

please do not say only nice, beautiful or one word😆

please be some more vocal i request 😊

love u and regard your love

and also tell me which one is your favorite pick between my all three stories

1. beintiha

2. forever mine

3. the opposite of love

what I like in this story...
like both shlok and astha
how astha is innocent in the start and now became understanding things

and my fav pick is

the opposite of love

Originally posted by: roshanii

i am trying to learning the language from internet and also sub titles help me very much

even i can understand tamil and telugu well and now i am working on malyalam 😊