Ashlok os - A night in the party part 3 updated page 4

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crazygul

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Posted: 11 years ago

Its saturday night.. its 6 o clock in the evening. there is great hustle and bustle in agnihotri house. Every member is busy in getting ready for the party. they are the hosts so they have to reach first in the party... Anjali is getting ready.. she wears beautiful saree, jewellery and gazra.. she is constantly calling aastha.. she is still in parlour.. Anjali herself sent her to parlour.. .. the reason behind is simple.. she wants aastha should look happy , fit not distressed.. shlok too getting ready. he knows why baba is throwing this party.. he knows he has to pretend that everything is fine between him and aastha.. he is smartly dressed up now.. he looks himself in mirror and is happy.. sojal and varad are getting ready too. sojal is dressing kavya.. kavya is very happy.. she is wearing a beautiful dark pink frock and hair band and all.. she goes to see her chachi and goes to shlok's room.. chachu.. she runs and hug her chachu immediately... shlok is very happy to see her.. meri gudiya toh princess lag rahi hai.. nahi chachu asli princess toh chachi hai.. voh bahut khoobsurat hai.. par voh khaa hai.. khaa hai matlub se kya. asks shlok.. he immediately goes to aastha's room.. but she is nowhere.. Anjali comes ther e and says aastha parlour guyi hai.. aati hi hogi.. shlok tum chalo.. sojal aur aastha baad mai aayengi.. Niranjan too joins anjali.. he says chalo beta.. humare mehmaan aatein hi hongey.. shlok gives a look to anjali and leaves from there.. before leaving anjali asks sojal to lock the house properly. aastha ko lekar hi aana. ji aayi. says sojal.. All leave except sojal and kavya.. aastha comes hurriedly and looks for everyone.. sojal comes and asks aastha khaa itni dair lgaa di.. jaldi se taiyaar ho jaayo.. mehmaano k aane se pehle pahuchna hai.. sojal gives her dress. yeh pehana hai tumhe.

Edited by crazygul - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

choti bhn u stopped mid way
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superbly written chalo next part jldi update karo

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Posted: 11 years ago

sounds interesting!! luking forward to ur next update! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice start vishu👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago

great update ...next next next

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved the starting.
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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome start
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crazygul

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Posted: 11 years ago

part 2

kya ? asks shocked aastha after seeing the gown. haa aastha aai ne yehi bola hai pehane ko. chalo muh matt bnao. aur pehen lo. mai bahaar intezaar kar rahi hu. aastha takes the dress in her hands. she is still shocked. jaldo tyaair ho na chachi. says kavya . haa baba haa. main 5 min mai aayi. nahi main nahi jayungi. kavya says in stubborn tone. accha. aastha immediately starts gettng ready. she wears the gown. does party make up . she has done her eyes well. finally she wears high heels. now they are off to the party. on the way sojal is smiling constantly. she has twisted smile. kavya is very happy. she says chachi aap aur main sisters lag rahi hain. hum dono ne ek jaisi dress peheni hain. aastha smiles and caresses her head. aastha is not comfortable since she came out of her room. in inner mind she is not convinced that her sasubai told her to wear this. she has doubts. finally they reach there destination. sojal comes out of car , then kavya. chalo na chachi. finally aastha too gets out. kavya hurriedly runs away. kavya kavya, says sojal and is happily following her, making aastha alone. aastha is looking here and there. party atmosphere is there. dim lights, instrumental music and noise of people. she stops. but she cannot stuck here for long. she has to enter the hall. At the end , she collects the courage and enters hall. the moment she enters, whole agnihotri family is shocked. sojal and her mother have twisted smile on their faces. niranjan looks at anjali. anjali is in shock but realises that saheb is very upset. varad and chachu have different expressions from rest of the family. they are happy as aastha went against family rule. shlok is in aww. aastha is invoking desire. he is totally lost. the gown seems to celebrate her curves. her bosoms and curves have been nicely craved out in this blue gown. her eyes are smoking hot. she is looking ravishing.. dim lights and instrumental music are adding to more mystery. aastha has lowered her eyes due to the attenton she is getting. she is just standing like a rock. she is gorgeous, yeah she is ! stunning ! guest are commenting continuously and guest are seeing her.. whole family is listening. no body is comfortable. comments and gaze of guests takes out shlok from his zone. he is very angry. in heat of moment, he grabs aastha. like he wants to declare that aastha is only his. only he has the right to see her like this. the anchor declares that its time for dance as we have some young couples here. music starts. music is intense.

kabhi jo badal barse, main dekhu tujhe aakhen bhar k
tu mujhe lagey pehli baarish ki dua
tere pehlu mai reh lu, khud ko pagal keh lu
tu gum de khushiyan sehlu saathiyan.

tu jaane na tu, chahat meri kitni betaab hain
ho jo barson meri palkon main tha
tu vohi khwaab hain.

yeh jhukti nzar jaane jigar hosh mera le jaati hain.
main kaise kahu, ek ajnabi dard dejati hain

teri addaon se dilkash khtaaon se, in lamho mai zindagi si hain.
haya ko zraa bhul jao, meri hi trah pesh aao.
kho bhi do khud ko tum, raaton mein .

music is intense, so as the dance. shlok is twisting, turning, pulling, pushing and lifting aastha. shlok is dancing intensly. he ia active and aastha is just responding him. all are watching them and commenting. like how close they are dancing. pyaar ho toh aisa. kahi bhi nahi chupate yeh pyaar. Niranjan is happy , listening to all this. on the other hand. when ever aastha goes away from shlok while dancing. he feels pain in heart. so with double intensity he pulls her. he gets raahat. aastha and shlok are lost in each other . aastha hands are around shlok's neck and shlok's hands are around aastha's waist. shlok looking passionately and aastha eyes are questioning shlok. the dance has to end. and it ended. all clapped. Niranjan gives a look to anjali and she understands the mute order. she goes to aastha and takes her from there politely.

sorry guys for any mistake.

Edited by crazygul - 11 years ago