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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Very nice...hot but not sleazy. Good work. Do update soon and pm please
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
great start look like promising ss is on the way... and thanks for the pm buddy

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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
good start, Sent me PM on update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
nice start

waiting for next part
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Freaking can't wait! Pls cont soon and pm me when u update the next part!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
NOTE.. 😊

Heyyy guyzzz thnks for the likes and comments...it has encouraged me a lot...i couldn't update yesterday coz i was havng a talk wth the mods...our tlk is complete and now i can update my SS wthout any difficulty...i will update the frst part at around 9

Loads of love
Nazia
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
so guyzzz here is the frst part of INTEZAAR...my ff LOVE AND REVENGE is currently on hold i will start it after my exams...til then enjoy this..

INTEZAAR...😳😳😳

PART 1

"U r coming tomorrow...and u r informing us today...ok fine...give us a call before ur flight takes off...ya love u too...and yes I will tell baba don't worry...bye..." an excited Anjali kept the phone and turned to see her family who were eager either to know the reason for happiness...

Niranjan - what happened Anjali y r u smiling?? And who was over the phone.

Anjali - Ek minute...She prayed to God for Shlok's safe journey...haa so it was Shlok who called up...

Varad - ohhh!!! What did he tell?

Niranjan - haa kya kaha usne Anjali...

Anjali - hez coming back...our Shlok is coming back...mera bacha aa rha hai..after 2 whole years...she said wth tears in her eyes...pata nahi kaisa ho gaya hoga waha par theek se khaata toh hoga na..agar nahi toh no tension hez coming back now na I will take proper care of him...

Niranjan went towards Anjali nd side hugged her and said "finally hamara bacha wapas aa raha ab toh tum khush ho na as u were not happy coz I had sent him away for higher higher studies...Anjali nodded through her tears...

Jyoti who heard this headed towards her room delightedly...and shouted loudly AASTHA...Aastha who deeply engrossed in her book was startled by Jyoti's sudden voice...

Jyoti - wow bhai aa rahe hai... tumne suna Aastha bhai wapas a rahe hai...Aastha who was lost in the news...suddenly looked at her...

Aastha was jyoti's best friend...and she had come to stay here as her parents were out of town and more on Anjali's insistence...she was always fond of Aastha and alwys wnted to c Shlok and Aastha together...She had even thought to get them engaged after Shlok comes back...

Jyoti - kaha kho gayi thi.. tu...

Aastha - jyoti bohot raat ho gayi hai I think I shld head towards bed...bye good nte..

Jyoti - good nite dear...

Aastha almost ran towards her room closed the room nd wth a thud landed on the bed...she took out a photo frame from the drawer and ran a hand on it...

Aastha - u r cumng back...I cant believe it...2 saal...ka mera intezaar ab jaakar khatam hoga...Shlok...

She closed her eyes and remembered her love story

Flashback...

It all started 3 years back during her first year of MBA...she had been in girls school and hence she was an extreme introvert and a shy and reserved person...her only and best friend was Jyoti Agnihotri they were in same school and their family too were related as their parents were business partners cum best friends...jyoti's had two elder brothers who studied in boarding school her eldest brother Varad was back from the boarding school from past 3 years...she shared a good relation wth him...she had no siblings and hence she alwys saw jyoti as her sister and Varad as her elder bother...

She knew his another brother's name...his name was... Shlok...Shlok Agnihotri...she remembered him... ofcourse she remembered him...as wheneva she used to visit their home he would make her life hell...she had curly hair during her childhood nd hence he used to call her maggy...she used to be afraid of him , sometimeshe had also made her cry by scaring by showing artificial lizards and cockroaches and she always tried to avoid him...but that person...ohh how to tell..wheneva she used to cry after his doings...he would come near her...pinch her nose.. and used to kiss her cheeks...she used to blush when he did tht.. and over a period of time she somewhere started to like his teasings...when he was around 14 years he was sent to boarding school in Mumbai...she was really sad at tht tym she didn't know y but yes she was...before leaving he had come to me and said MISS ME and had winked at her...from past 6 yrs he was in Mumbai doing his schooling, university and MBA but now his Baba had requested him to do his final year from Pune...its been 2 months since he had arrived at Pune and she hadn't faced him yet but now since her college had also started she has to face him today...

She wondered would he even remember her...Though he had come here only 2 months before she could already hear from Jyoti as to how famous her brother had bcum within a short span of tym...she sighed as she placed her dupatta properly and was straightening her hair when there was a loud noise of horn... She bobbed her head out of the window and told Jyoti that she was coming...

She took her bag, took blessings from her parents and moved out of the house...there she saw a sleek black Mercedes waiting to pick her up...though she had her own BMW she preferred to accompany...she was about to open the door when Jyoti rushed out like a storm making Aastha startle...

Aastha - where are u going!!!

Jyoti - Maa ne aunty k liye kuch bheja hai...wohi dekar aati hu...tab tak tu sit in the car...

Aastha sighed and was about to sit when...suddenly she came across a husky deep male voice ...saying...''Hey..beautiful"...the voice gave her shivers down the spine...no this can't be the same voice...her mind was telling her that this voice is someone else's but her heart...her heart refused to accept that...she slowly turned to look at the source of voice...😳😳
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so here is the frst part plzz tell me how it is
plzz hit like and comment
socho socho kiski voice hai
Loads of love
Nazia😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
It is obvious shlok 's voice.lovely and awesome update. Yipee I am first. Please update next part .
Edited by anjipankaj - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Nice. Please post the next update soon. Don't keep us waiting for long. Since it's the weekend. No ashlok in the tele. So really need this to get through the weekend. Great going.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome update ...pls update the second part as soon as possible

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