INTEZAAR SS updtd pt 10 pg 44 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
"Intezaar" kar rahi hoon dear...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome chapter dear👏⭐️...

please update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
INTEZAAR...😳😳😳

PART 8

It was 9 at night they had their dinner and sat around the bonfire playing games...suddenly someone suggested to play truth and dare...they started playing and the bottle stopped at Aastha first...it was Jyoti who was to ask for truth or dare...Aastha chose truth...Jyoti grinned at it and asked her "whether she had a secret which she had not yet shared with her best friend?"...Aastha was startled at the sudden question she didn't expect this from Jyoti...ofcourse she had hidden the secret that she loved Shlok...she took a deep breath and said "YES"...Shlok understood what was the secret he winked at her...Jyoti felt dejected hearing this but Aastha was quick enough to tell her...

"Jyoti...I never said that u r my only bestest friend in this world"...she could see Jyoti brightening in happiness...she flashed her dazzling smile at her and Shlok could swear he would die thousand deaths to keep the smile safe on her lips...

He signalled her as if he was dead and she blushed looking at him...

The bottle was spun again and this time it stopped at Shlok..his friends knew he could complete any kind of dare but it would be a rare moment to hear truth from THE SHLOK AGNIHOTRI...so his friends instigated him to chose truth...

Girl - So Shlok..u r the hottest guy of the college...we all girls have a serious crush on u including me but u r the one who never gives a damn to any girl...

Shlok smirked at this...the girl further said that we all would know as to which girl has the ability to make way into your heart...I want you to describe the qualities u would like to have in your life partner...Shlok was kind of shocked at this but he was not the one to get nervous...so he started

"well first let me tell u it is a very commendable question...ok when it comes to girls...if I am unique as u all say I too want my girl to be a special one...his eyes transfixed on Aastha...he continued...I want a simple girl who loves me from the bottom of her heart...not a typical Indian girl but a one who is modern in her thoughts as well..but the shyness of being a desi girl is the most attracting for me...even if she is not of my height...I don't mind but she should be at the same level as I am when it comes to love, passion, strength, trustworthiness, loyalty...I have dreams to give whole of myself to her...she would be the one for whom I will live as well as die...and last and important thing whoever that girl is she will be the first and last girl of my life..."

Aastha and Shlok were lost in each other's eyes both of their eyes reflected true love and gave assurance that they were made for each other and no one can separate them...


They were disturbed by the thunderous applause by all who were present there...the girl who asked him the question was in tears hearing this...she wiped them and teasingly asked him whether he had found that girl...Aastha's head shot up at this...he gave her a wicked smile indicating whether he should tell them she mouthed a no...he ensured that he wouldn't..he very smartly ignored the question and told all of them to head towards the bed...Aastha was going to enter the hotel when he caught her hand and took her with him...she told him that Jyoti would be waiting for her but he had already handled her...her jaw dropped at this...everytime he convinces everyone with his charm...she sighed at this...

He blind folded her eyes and took her with him...she was scared of dark and being blind folded just added up her fear...she stammered and said Shlok but he shushed her saying "when I am with u don't need to fear..." she smiled at his assurance...he brought her near a lake and opened it...she was mesmerized looking at the sight...he made her stand under the moonlight and stars...a MILLS & BOONS one she thought...he went on his knees and told her...

"u already know what I am going to say but it has to be THE SHLOK AGNIHOTRI style u know...so I had a liking for u since I was 12 which came out as me irritating u and kissing u on ur cheeks...this went on till I was 14..then we were separated due to my studies for 6 long years...in those 6 years my liking turned to crush which turned to me desiring u and yearning for u and then meeting u after 6 years turned those emotions into a much deeper feeling called as love...yess I SHLOK AGNIHOTRI is madly and crazily in love with AASTHA KIRLOSKAR"

She was awestruck at his proposal...her eyes turned wet hearing this...she finally spoke up "I LOVE U TOO SHLOK"...he quickly took out the rose and jewellery box which contained a ring...he took out the diamond solitaire and put it in her ring finger and kissed her hand...he stood up and she embraced him in a bone crushing hug...she just wanted to live in that warmth forever at that moment...the safest place on earth and heaven for her...she kissed his chest in satisfaction making Shlok groan with need...he pulled out of the hug and cupped her face

"did u like it or u want it to be more special" but she was lost in him...lost in his love...his words...he shook her to bring her out of her reverie...she just placed a finger on his lips and told him

"u have made me feel the luckiest girl of the world...in return I just want a promise from u...that u will never leave me ever again..in these 6 years the pain and yearning I have gone through I don't want it to feel again...I cant live without u even for a second and further more separation will just kill me" she sobbed hard like a child...

Shlok made her look towards him and promised her..

" I promise u my love this was the last time we were separated...even in future if such situation arises I will never break my promise...coz I cant imagine my life without u"

With that he pulled her in a soul searing kiss😳😳😳

so here is the update hope u all liked it

plz hit like and comment

loads of love

Nazia😊😊😊



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Posted: 11 years ago
Awe...such a sweet update. Shlok the eternal romantic. Loved the convo between them, professing their undying love for each other, do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was so beautiful update👏👏👏👏...just loved it ❤️...

Please update soon...😛

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww that ws such a cute n hearty proposal😳 nw shlok hs promisd hr he wlnt leave evr..does that mean a separatn twist is cmg❓🥺continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
i was wondring as the name suggests, so will shlok be able to kep tht promise
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks eagerly waiting for next chapter ... Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful proposal shlok...
Amazing update dear...
Nazia you are too good...

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