AShlok OS - Alternate universe in the Agnihotri Planet

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Dee James

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Anusha16
very good di... really enjoyed reading this...
astha could not have had a better way to take revenge at shlokie baby...

haha... poor him...😆

Thank you hon 😊 n yeah Astha was on a roll LOL!😆

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Dee James

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: shruthi2010
nice OS. if only this really happens on the show. at least the frustration of shlok i would be happy

Hehe...poor Shlokie he is being targeted today left right centre 😆

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Dee James

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: pt311288
i read it in mrng itself
but sm technical prob occured

well all i would say is wnderul os
loved it
guache wanna see similar astha in show as well
poor niranjan just hate him

Thanks sweetie 😊. Lets see what happens in the show!

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wow fab story thank you for the update

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Prani08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Once again I must say what a lovely OS close to show..

Loved each and every part..how Aastha is back firing to all..

Indeed in show Aastha has used her brain to slove jyohti issue why not hers now.

Aastha has to see shlok now and his intentions both in show and your OS.

A guess.

Carried over by your story must say way impressed.👏⭐️

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

awesome
superb
loved astha here
want her to be the same in serial also

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desikahani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

A wow of an OS!! - loved the no holds barred approach taken by Astha - refreshing to read and laughed🤣 out aloud.

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Dee James

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: niki795
awesome
superb
loved astha here
want her to be the same in serial also

Ah! That's the general reaction of every reader I must say 😊

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Dee James

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: desikahani
A wow of an OS!! - loved the no holds barred approach taken by Astha - refreshing to read and laughed🤣 out aloud.

Thanks so much 😊. So glad you got my point when you laughed out loud 😆

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Dee James

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Prasai
Once again I must say what a lovely OS close to show..
Loved each and every part..how Aastha is back firing to all..
Indeed in show Aastha has used her brain to slove jyohti issue why not hers now.
Aastha has to see shlok now and his intentions both in show and your OS.
A guess.
Carried over by your story must say way impressed.👏⭐️

Hmm that's right. By nature she is a bold person. Hopefully she should do something in the show . Thank you for your comment dear!