MY POEMS for IPKKND-EBP..... Do see! :)

..optimist.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#1

Will keep posting my poems in this thread as and when I write them. The poems will be in sequence as the show progresses.

INDEX

1. Kabhi Na Socha Tha ... Pg 1
2. Shlok Vs Shlok ... Pg 2
3. Kora Panna ... Pg 2
4. Broken Heart ... Pg 3
5. Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon ... Pg 3
6. Magar... ...Pg 4
7. Nakaab ...Pg 4

From the Point of view of ASTHA...

KABHI NA SOCHA THA...
Pehele kabhi na socha na jaana tha,
Iss khadoos ke seene mein pyaara sa dil hoga;
Anjaan thi ki meri khushiyon mein,
Kabhi aap ka pyaar samil hoga...!!
Karti thi aapse nafrat main,
Aap ke paas aane se lagta tha darr;
Ab aap ke gusse ki bhi aadat ho gayi hai,
Uss ke peechhe chhupa pyaar jo aaye nazar...!!
Ab har mushkil lagti hai aasaan,
Jo mila hai aap ka saath;
Humaare rishte ki iss mazboot dor ko
Kabhi na tod paaye haalaat...!!
Na jaane zindagi kya rukh mod legi,
Darta hai dil, kal kya ho kya pata;
Yehi dua hai, hum sadaa saath rahein,
Kabhi na toote yeh pyaar aur vishwaas ka naata...!!
Hope you all like it...
Edited by ..optimist.. - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

22

Views

3.4k

Users

9

Likes

40

Frequent Posters

VindhyaMounika thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Really awesome... Aastha's feelings got words...
Prani08 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Chuppa pyaar ho Jaye Nazareth..wah.wah..wah.
Whilereadinglrics has sung in two seasons and made myself😆

But for your shayaari⭐️
👏
..optimist.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Thank you mayabharathi, vindhyamounika, crazygul, kareena05, Prasai for liking the poem 😊
Edited by neha_dna - 11 years ago
avi_ashi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#5
wow yarr.. its beautiful poem..
thanx alot for sharing ur poem😳
plz do post often here..😊
rani-lucki thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#6
👏very nice n creative
😃
..optimist.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Thank you so much friends for reading and liking it!! 😃
Your feedback means a lot!! 😊
Have something more for you all...
Will post it here soon 😉
..optimist.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#8

SHLOK Vs SHLOK
SHLOK (with a wicked smile) :
Kitni bholi hai yeh ladki,
Jo mere iraade na samajh paayi;
Buss Baba ko hamesha khushi miley,
Usi mein meri khushi hai samayi...!!
SHLOK (trying to make him realise) :
Bhale hi ho woh nasamajh,
Uske pyaar ko na karo nazarandaaz;
Zara jhanko apne dil ke andar,
Zara khulne do apne dil ke raaz...!!
SHLOK (in anger) :
Na behekaao mujhe in baaton se,
Bhoola nahi main apmaan mera;
Yeh jo galti ki hai usne,
Uski saza toh bhugatne do zara...!!
SHLOK (continuing to make him realise) :
Socho, usay saza dekar
Kya tum khush reh paaoge?
Tumhaara maksad bhale hi poora ho,
Tum jeet kar bhi haar jaaoge...!!
SHLOK (irritated, confused) :
Sab kuchh jaan-boojhkar kiya hai maine,
Phir bhi na jaane kyun dil khota hai;
Jab bhi woh takleef mein ho,
Na jaane kyun mujhe dard hota hai...!!
SHLOK (smiling) :
Pyaar pighla dega nafrat ki yeh deewar,
Chahe tum chalaao apne khaandaan ki reet;
Tum chaahe kitni bhi koshish kar lo,
Aakhir meri hi hogi jeet...!!
Hope you all like it. Do comment.
Edited by ..optimist.. - 11 years ago
crazygul thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Lovely !! appreciate ur poetic skills
..optimist.. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Thank you so much!!
Writing poems is one of my hobbies... 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".