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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey ippknd fans, im planning to write a fan fiction about astha and shlok
It might from hatred but eventually like all stories they will fall in love, if you guys want a pm of the story just pm me😃


Chapter one- page 1
Chapter 2- page 3
Chapter 3- page 5
Edited by CrazyAmzy - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting for it dear..pls PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Add me too your pm list cant wait :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

in kiloskar residence

Astha- papa i'm going to be late for my interview
papa- okay go
ma- one minute, have some prasad
astha- maa
ma- astha you know how i am
astha- okay byeee

astha kisses her mom goodbyeee, and leaves. Today was astha's first job interview, she had full confident that she will get the job.

astha-Auto, Auto, what is wrong with these autos today

It starts to rain
astha- you got to be kidding me

astha was all wet, couldn't get a taxi and she was late for her interview

Shloks company

shlok asks the secretary
shlok- did all the people come for their interview

secre-yes sir except for one
sh
lok- who?
secre- ms Astha kiloskar

shlok- just start the interview, and when ms. astha comes tell her to come in to my cabin
secr- of course sir

20 minutes later

astha- sorry i'm late i'm astha kiloskar, i'm here for a interview for personal secretary
secre- ohh soo you are ms. astha, please go to the fifth floor, first door to your right
astha- okay, thank you, and sorry once again
secre- hurry go

astha left
secretary called shlok

secre- sir she's here
shlok- okay thank you

astha reaches the floor

astha tright away opens the door
astha- sorry i'm late
shlok was angry

shlok- don't you know how to knock, can't you see i'm doing some interviews
asth- i..i...i'n sorry sir, i'm actually here for the interview

shlok- ohh mms. astha, please sit down
astha slowly walk to the chair and sits
shlok- ms. astha do you what the meaning of this job is.
astha she sat their quiet
shlok- let me tell you, the person who is worthy of this job is never late
astha- sir...
shlok- Don't interrupt me when i'm talking
asth- but..
shlok- R U DEAF??

astha started to form tears, everyone else started to laugh a little

shlok- just sit down quietly and answer my questions, why were you late?
astha-there... was...
shlok- what, i can't hear you
astha- i couldn't get a taxi
shlok- what you don't have a car
everyone start to laugh

shlok- why do you want this job
astha- i believe i'm a hard working person, and a responsible employee, i believe you guys can't find anyone better.
shlok- you didn't get the job
astha- what! why, i know i'm good for this job, better than anyone here, maybe even you
shlok- you know what, EVERYONE LEAVE, you guys didn't get the job, leave
shlok- congrats ms. astha you got the job, but if you make one mistake, your fired
astha- i won't get fired because i won't do anything wrong
shlok- this is business not a game of dolls
astha- exactly mr. shlok, it's not a game of dolls, so don't mess with me
astha turns to leave but shlok grabs her hand
shlok- welcome to hell ms astha



OKAY what did you guys think. PLZZZ COMMENT



Edited by CrazyAmzy - 11 years ago
MereMahiyaa. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesomeee yaaar Keeep it up
cant wait fooor Next paaart :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you siham, your the first to like it, your special
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
waiting to read more
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start dear.
Didn't like d way shlok insulted aastha.
Plz edit in ur topic abt d updt.
Thanks for d pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start, I wonder how things will go from here
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice dear. do pm me?



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