AsHlok OS - Crossing Paths - Page 4

Originally posted by: LuvStrk-001

Lovely Os dear...pls do continue soon...Thanks
for sharing it...

Originally posted by: Soulmate_Sana

Really niceee!! :)

Originally posted by: jyothi-m

Awesome OS.

U r a g8 writer.Loved it.

Originally posted by: prc_fan1

WOW! This is good.

I was totally picturing Shlok & Aastha when I was reading this. It's so well-written & I like how it stayed true to the characters at the same time. Your OS kinda depicts somewhat Aastha's feelings in today's episode. Fearful, yet attracted as he calls out her name, as he comes close to her. She is yet to know what it really is.

I wouldn't mind this happening in the show since revenge is definitely coming our way.

Please write more :)

I am officially in your fan list!

Originally posted by: sparikh

I really liked it...U captured both of their inner thoughts perfectly. hope u continue; it has a lot of story to tell...

-Sona

Originally posted by: FeistySoul

AsHlok's relation now has subtle undercurrents of romance. Both have to go a long way to acknowledge that. Dislike (In Shlok's case hate probably) rules them now. I am glad I could portray this as such. It's a difficult thing to do when you want to show this kind of mild attraction with a potential to turn into full blown love. If Astha was someone Shlok straight out hated he wouldn't have bothered wasting words on her or going close to her. There is something in him as well. But he is a tougher nut to crack than Astha. I find it easier to explain female psyche *being a girl* hence I portrayed Astha better I think.

Let's see what the show has to offer us.

Thanks for the appreciation😊 . Your posts are fabulous btw.