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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hai its a very nice os.loved it.continue writing..

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sonia871

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wow it s great...
The first OS and it s the great one...
Want more...

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Myra.nelly
Veeerrryy nice! I liked it! I could imagine both avi and shrenu in this! i wouldnt mind if this happens in the show!

Thanks Myra. I am glad I could give you the pleasure of imagining our stunning leads. I don't think this scenario is possible any more as Astha as said in the show is looking for jobs. But yeah would've loved something along these lines😊

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Ishq-Dua

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Wow loved it!

beautifully written

I enjoyed reading it honestly and pictured the scene in my head

awesome work ! 😳

continue soon

cheers >

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sofna
OooH...REALLY GOOOD...I knew it would b😆...Love it...plzzz cont...

Thank you Sofna😊. I wouldn't be continuing this as such. But I would try to write more on them. When I find scenarios fitting enough for them.😃

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Asharkibiwi
Hey nidha ,really very beautiful , i loved it ,pls continue ! :-)

Jazak Allah Mariyam! 😊. There won't be a continuation to this one as this was intended as on OS. But will sure try to write more on them.

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Heavens_Kiss
I love OS's<3 and this one is so good! Written wondefully!👏

OS' s are truly a pleasure to work on. I never used to write them but when I did start it became my favourite. Thanks for the kind words😊

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: lmathew77
Wonderful story and writing. It could be a scene right out of the serial, that's how well I could see it in my head.

Thank you for the appreciation😊. Glad I could give you good time.

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: .Siham.
Loveeed it :D

Thank you Siham😊

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes
loved it totally

Thank you dear😊

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