Chap 61, 62 update on Pg 53 Entrapment : An Extremely Dark Advni FF

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Elly2207

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

Hi Gamini my lovely how are you.

Thanks love thansk for all ur kind words of appreciation as always .😳😳😳, it really touches me to read ur heartening comments as awalsys.

Yes as of Advay he is a true master at the end of the day, yes a master may mean owner but a master also means teacher, and a teacher has to be patient, escpecially if he has a student who is clueless to his world. So he being patient with her goes as a part of who he is, yet him not being able to watch her cry that is truly an irony one he is going to have to deal with😆😆
What else will i include, that you will have to wait and what😉

thanks again my love, so glad do know i can paint a pic with my words becaseu that is what is important as a writer for me, taht i am able to show u what i am able to see in my head, so thanks a lot for ur kind words again ... Yes it is the biggest compliment for me asa writer and I am truly humbled with ur wonderful words.

Yes keep reading, I am working on the next updates, lets see how the story spans out and lets hope u like it😳

Thank you a lot for reverting back. You always answer my queries and in return, you manage to make my mood as well. Just update soon, that's what I would ask from you.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Yash and Niru had totally opposite reactions

Yash had already known it so was unperturbed

But Niru was shocked and horrified as it was a natural reaction

He was worried about Chandni being married to Advay now

But it is so good to see Yash so cool about it

I bet Advay too was enjoying Niru reaction

I hope Advay Niru have a talk on the accounts soon

How sweetly Yash blesses Advay for this new journey and life

It is said a Guru is higher than parents and he got his blessings today

So she is embarrassed of Sid and Praveen now as they decorated the room

I think he had changed everything as he wanted to make a new start

He wanted to leave the past behind for the time being ?

I just loved how the room is decorated here

Poor Chandni she is so scared and asks for time

But she is prolonging the inevitable here

I love how Kajal reassured her saying Advay is good

He has really won over everyone here so well

Tonight is such a night that any one will be a bit apprehensive

I think she is more scared as she does not know this Advay

He is so totally unpredictable and no one can say what he will do next

I also think that video is affecting her a lot

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Shikha and her antics are really so cute

And more sweet is how Advay indulges her too

Sid again reminds me he has a great sense of humor

Poor Sid and Murli are really tired it is so evident

Shikha really can tell him anything and get away with it

As he has earned that trust from her I think by now

I just love their banter here both are so alike each other

Poor Kajal felt bad for Advay but Shikha is not one to budge

Advay is giving them so many tempting offers it is just so adorable

Shikha already feels he is her own so does not hesitate to take all the money too

Oh wow even Niru asked him to not pamper the sisters so much

Shikha is always the curious one here na ? She has to know everything

Even Shikha has so much of trust on Advay it is amazing

I really feel so bad for Murli the poor guy really needs a good sleep

Shikha really is a great smooth talker she knows how to speak in serious matters

She knew this is a big demand that she is making but I knew Advay will let them meet Chandni

Advay too plays the emotional angle so well her both are perfect as brother sister

This act of Advay shows that he really has a big heart and this is his difference with Indu

Good that Advay asked them to give them privacy as a couple

Else they would have come any time they wished to

Wow I just loved how every one kissed him

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Kajal had really wanted to do it for a long time

That is really interesting

She has so much of love in her

Even Niru pitied Advay at his state now

Kajal wants Chandni to kiss him on the lips

I must say she is quite a romantic

I just love how he totally changed himself now

He became the Master before entering the room

Chandni is more nervous as soon as he entered

He is purposely prolonging the time to come to her

He is enjoying her sight and her state of mind now

I am sure he is drinking her beauty with pleasure

They were strangers and yet they were not

He is already finding it difficult to control himself

The master of control is finding his control slipping

After all he is Dev and she is his Chandni

Some one he had loved from such a long time

Of course he too is nervous now and that is showing too

Such a strange start to their new life by marking the date

He is emphasizing a lot on that date now

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

But she chose to focus on the present and not the future now

What a total transformation he had undergone so quickly

Just now he was talking to Shikha so lovingly and now he is so changed

She will have problem in accepting herself to be his slave I can see it

Are his words already arousing her by any chance ?

I think she is already expressing her hesitancy in small steps

Hmm now I want why Advay had made that standing sitting rule

He demands respect as her husband

She was scared as she did not know this Advay

Advay understood it so well that she was scared because of this

He really has a great uncanny ability to read minds and know people

I think he is trying to replace her memory of that night with this night

Tonight everything is so different and they have changed a lot too

So I like the current arrangement and what he demanded now too

So now she is already showing her defiance and I think he is enjoying it secretly

If you can't make her obey with harshness beat her with softness and it works

He is emotionally manipulating her now and he is a master at this I am sure

Him telling My Lizzy struck her and had the intended effect

She felt that she has competition so now she will do anything to prove herself better

Something like the carrot and stick approach

He really knows what ticks her and what does not

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

She is already comparing herself with Lizzy

She has already created an image of her in her mind

And now she will do anything to keep up to it

She is really giving a lot importance to the video

He already had known her from childhood

So it was definitely an advantage for him now

It is also adorable to see her so possessive of him

At the first sign of her tears he softens

Wow a love her tears are really his undoing

Now he is doing what normally a husband does

Slowly taking off her ornaments so lovingly

She helped him to take off her nose ring

This was just like the show where she helped him

To make her wear the khandani kangan that Naani gave

Now finally this has a domino effect and she breaks down

She shatters in his arms and lets out all her pent up emotions

How tragic that she wanted to go back to the perfect night

Time cannot be turned back and they too wont go back there

Definitely not so easily at least

Now that her dam broke his stance too changed

He became Dev from Advay and a husband from a master

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saxena_hgt

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

pranam chitraji... pankha, vatanukulak, sheetal pay padarth sabki avashykta pad gayi bhai.. uff kya drishay tha.. sirf mehsoos aur prastoot varnan ko shabdo ke anukool chitrit karne ke liye.. koi swaal nahi aaj, kyunki aapke lekhan ne aaavak aur alpbhashi bana diya.. aur ab toh dard sehne ke adat ho gayi hai.. matlab had hai chitraji suhaagraat main bhi aapne aason tapakwa hi diye.. waise toh aap bhavishay ke bare main bolengi nahi kintu bas itna bata dijiye dono ant main marne wale hai ya koi ek marega ya dono hi nahi.. mujhe teeno main se kisi bhi ant se koi aapatti nahi hai kyunki aap phele se sab kuch ispasht kar chuki hai.. main ant tak hoon kintu bas dil zara aur majboot bana lungi..

bas kuch baatein hai jo baatna chahti hoon.. chandani sada suhagan maregi ye uske Bhagya main hai.. toh ab jab advay mahashay apne marne ka samay nirdharit kar chuke hai toh swabhavik roop se chandani unse phele maregi.. toh kya ye khatra hai chandani par? doosri baat aapne UP ki ladkiyo ki soch bahut sahi pakdi hai.. yaha baat dharam aur sirf rishta nibhane ki nahi hai.. kuch baatein hume bachpan se sikhayi jati hai jo phir jeevan ka ahem hissa hote hai.. humare liye who pyaar aur samaan hota hai.. jaise yaha par nanad ko didi aur devar ko bhaiyya kehte hai aur unke charan sparash karte hai phir nanad aur devar umar main kitna chhota ho.. meri saheli ka prem vivah hua hai.. who apne premi aur uski chhoti behen ko naam se bulati thi.. kintu jaise hi premi bana pati who ho gaya aap aur chhoti behen ho gayi didi.. aur main jo ek adhunik parivaar main aayi hoon jaha iske bilkul ulta hai, aaj 4 saal baad bhi lagta hai shayad kuch adhura hai... toh chandani ki kashmakash main samajh saki hoon.

agle adhyaay ki pratiksha main pranam...

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

He could not see her cry so much on their wedding night

So he changed his stance and decided to take it slow

Now he can just do anything to get back her smile

He tried to offer her solutions as he felt but she denied them all

But I loved his eagerness to calm her down at the earliest

He must have felt so bad seeing her break down that way

He made her sit on his lap that was such a sweet gesture

Just like a little boy he is trying to make her happy in all ways

He is thinking of all the possibilities to make her smile

He even thought to let her sleep for that night for which he had waited so long

This clearly shows he is keeping her needs before him here

But she made it so clear that she does not want to sleep

He is so very perceptive and intuitive to understand her unspoken words

She had changed a lot from when he had known her at childhood

Poor girl is really so worried about the rules here

I just cried at the idea of having the golden butterflies on the file

He really wants her butterflies to come back and is ready to do anything

I think he also wants her to have the butterflies when he wont be there as per his plan

He is giving this to her as his memento

What a situation he wants to bring back the butteflies

But now they are bound by a contract marriage in a way

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

He actually means that he can't put up his act of a master

If he sees her break down in tears in front of him

He is almost wanting her to keep doing his bidding here

Does kneeling symbolize the master slave relation ?

Then I will know why it is so important for him

Hmm so kneeling is a deal breaker for him

So strange Advay is touching his mom's necklace

She is touching the golden butterflies

Both are touching things that give them some peace and happiness

And also something that they both want but is a distant dream for them

OF course it was Janaki's so it will look good on her

She is still so guilty for wearing that necklace

Little does she know that she is the rightful owner now

Really he has been her savior from quite a ling time

So now she is really missing his kisses

She now remembers what she had said in her anger

Time really plays strange tricks and makes us want to undo some things

Now she realizes how wrong she was and what she had lost

I understand he is really confusing her a lot with his answers

She totally misunderstand the word play here

For her it has a completely different meaning

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Wow so Dev had taught her chess and he attacked and she defended

Wow that is so interesting now I really want a game of chess between them

She is quite proud of her ability but he too is a master at his game

I love the way he asked her if she wants to play now

Again he is taking her consent and giving her the choice

She too is so frank that she does not want to disappoint him

I am sure now he will take it slow as he knows she is totally new here

I love the way he is slowly explaining her all the rules

Now this is a real good way to get to know each other

To know about each other and ask simple questions

Sid will always be there for Chandni even if Advay dies

So even if she denied tonight he will stay with her

As it was their wedding night and he will make it special for her

I think that was the assurance she needed now to relax

She knew that her answer wont make him leave her side tonight

Now she is relaxed and comfortable in his arms

She really feels he bought her ? that is a fully wrong idea

Finally he explained her what she needed to know

now she has to decide as the ball is in her court

Of course he will always give her a choice to tell what she does not like

But now that he is so clear open and honest she wants to try it for him

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