Chap 61, 62 update on Pg 53 Entrapment : An Extremely Dark Advni FF - Page 42

Want to see Advay on his meditation session once again

Both the updates are so emotional

Tastefully written, I am still getting my head round with this master slave dynamics. All this is alien to Chandni being thought one thing and been asked to do another is conflicting, it is new to her so I think is understandable to be skeptical. Nobody want to be told what to do and what not, if you do something by your wish, you do it wholeheartedly, you happy to do it or it makes you feel good. It's one thing when you are being asked to do it, anyone will feel inferior. It will take some time for her to get use to this dynamics and accept it that it's her life now for next couple of months. This training will be hard on both of them, Chandni misgivings and Advay demanding her full submission. Thanks Chitra👏⭐️👏

I just love all the changes he made

Hey Chitra I don't know if you come to IF anymore but if you are reading this then lots of hugs and kisses to you for the latest chapters I don't know how you do it but I believe the way you bring out these whole submission perspective I don't think anyone would...
Coming back to the chapters I loved loved and loved how you explained Chandni's dilemma regarding submitting to Advay and the differences she made between her maa and Advay well both are of course manipulating her but as Advay said he would never harm her but Chandni doesn't know that her maa can go to any extent to do that perhaps Advay broke her trust too that's why she doesn't trust him blindly anymore...
I loved how this cheeky girl penned down her thoughts and likes about Advay can't wait for him to read them
Haven't been commenting a lot lately but the chapters before these ones were amazing too however didn't want to bore you with my repetitive praises hehe
But but but these chapters left me awestruck so couldn't bear not to comment...lots of love and keep writing I literally crave for them

the idea of the lights was so good

Beautifully written, indrani the master manipulator, the 2 witches I can believed they played Chandni like that, and she fell hook line and sinker. The mind games that both are playing ,indrani wins hands down. Sometimes we are caught in this games that we forget to think even whilst the truth is staring in our face. What will be Advay's reply to Indrani,shakun and chandni.Can't wait.

sadly there are too many people like Indrani in today world