Chap 43, 44 on Page 119 Entrapment : An Extremely Dark Advni FF

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1011

I am sure this pan denial too is some punishment for her

For having denied him something earlier I think

Sangeet was not done before so it is a good idea to have it now

So neither he nor she can dance ?

So Sid wants him to sing with his guitar how sweet

Murli is already going even before he completed his sentence

So Murli too wants to hear him sing

So Sid wants Advay to start on a new clean slate ?

He wants him to forget everything ? or he just wants to break the ice between AdNi ?

Or he just wants to get back at him for hurting Chandni till now ?

Or he wants to make Chandni happy by making him sing ?

Or may be he is trying to make him pay as Chandni can never do it on herself ?

Yash almost spilled the beans means he was so happy this day

But he corrected himself in time and saved the situation

So Niru too knew about his voice so he too wanted to hear him sing

Sid seems to be just goading him on and now the kids to started to ask him to sing

Did Chandni ever heard Dev sing in childhood ?

Chandni thought he has a bad voice and so is refusing to sing ?

She thought she can tease him about it later ?

Praveen gave her the courage and she requested him to sing

Once she pleaded him how could he deny her ?

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Elly2207

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1012

Seriously Chitra, you should think of publishing this story. It's so amazing. It has every element needed in a story, a powerful plot, superb protagonists and antagonists, amazing supporting characters, detailings, uniqueness, thorough research and many more. This story is turning out extremely well. The dark aspect is simply wow.

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Elly2207

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1013

Originally posted by: Elly2207
Seriously Chitra, you should think of publishing this story. It's so amazing. It has every element needed in a story, a powerful plot, superb protagonists and antagonists, amazing supporting characters, detailings, uniqueness, thorough research and many more. This story is turning out extremely well. The dark aspect is simply wow.

Actually, I can't even say there's supporting characters in this story for you give equal importance to everyone. Each and everyone has their specific roles.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1014

I feel so bad for him he did not want to sing

Nor did he knew many songs and no one helped him with any suggestion too

No one knew the reality of the marriage but he knew it was just a mirage

So he decided to express his feelings that she could understand well

She lowered her gaze as she could not look into his eyes that way

He was trying to hear sad songs when Chandni had rejected him I remember

The minute he started to sing she was impressed bu his voice

She knew she could just listen to him sing all day

I don't think she could ever tease him about his singing now

This song is one of my favorites and so true for him

Praveen stopped him mid way wasn't it a bit rude ?

Advay really did not know many songs

But I think Chandni had understood the meaning hidden in the song

Why does Sid think Advay has a huge stock of good songs ?

Niru some how managed the situation and suggested another attempt

I loved Niru and Raghu's reactions they cracked me up

Chandni is realizing things late when their essence is totally lost

I hope now she knows what her one action has cost her and them

This song too is so apt for him and them

Sid is not understanding that Advay does not want to woo her now

Why should he make any false promise when he does not want any relation with her now

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1015

He was just expressing his deepest feelings in his heart

He can't say this to any one but Chandni well knows what it is

She has lost his trust forever and has no hope to regain it ever

Mishra ji stopped him in between now

Why are they not understanding that he does not know any more songs ?

I know he could not console or cheer Chandni or give her false hopes

When he himself knows this is just for 6 months what can he do ?

But Kajal and Shikha still encouraged him further

I loved how they are supporting him so long

He was so happy even in the morning today

But just one action of her had dashed all his hopes forever

He just didnt want to rather did not dare to hope any more

He did not want to face another heart break by hoping now

This song also fits him so well

Mishra and Praveen understood that he was very sad

Umm Advay was telling Chandni the truth

She never chose him it was always Indu for her

Sid by now understood that Advay can't sing a happy song now

Not when his heart is full of pain and sorrow at least

Yash and Niru finally understood that he was in great pain

Chandni had to go a long way to heal him

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1016

Yash rebuked Advay slightly now and tried to change his mood

He was sad seeing Chandni cry and wanted them both to be happy

But poor Advay doesn't have a good stock of songs too

I love how Yash called him pagle this is the second time

He said it the first time doing her kanyadaan

It is such a cute endearment to him

So Kajal had a bad voice and she began singing with it ?

Her way of explanation was just so funny

Every one preferred Advay torture now to Maasi torture

Wow so Yash taught him his wife's favorite song

This is the first time I heard of this song

It had Chandni name too and all joined it

It must have been a special moment for Chandni

Advay Niru Yash all singing her mother's favorite song

What matching names too Chanda and Chandni

The atmosphere changed completely and was a happy one

I like Praveen's song it is so romantic

Yash had gone in the classic black and white era

Praveen brought back us in the modern colored era

I loved his song for Pramila and Pramila too was pleasantly surprised

Chandni now knew that all men are shameless with their PDA

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1017

Mishra ji and his wife's song is again a classic but in colored era

Most love stories end with the couple having children

But that will not be for AdNi now

Again Chandni realized now what she has lost in life

What a chance she has thrown away with her own hands

She could have had children and a happy life

But she chose to ruin it all just to please Indu

He just can't trust her any more now with her past actions and history

Murli must have been exasperated with Advay choice of songs

So at the earliest opportunity he just rushed to play a peppy song

Before Advay could start with another of his sad songs

He knew Advay very well so knew he would have continued with sad songs

He completely changes the atmosphere now and every one loved it

Now every one joined in the party and they could enjoy fully

I think the kids were the happiest as till now they did not know most of the songs

Murli did a good thing he gave relief to Advay as he did not want to sing

Sid and every one else had forced him to sing against his will

It is so good to see every one join and Murli take the guitar away from Advay

So Sid forced Advay to dance and Shikha the same with Chandni

So every one is enjoying and having full on fun here

They are celebrating to the hilt here

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1018

So Sid got Advay to his knees finally

I am sure he meant to do it for a long time now

Advay is also starting to enjoy now

Chandni too was so happy after a long time

He made her twirl and she was lost in her dreams

He will always be there to help her get back her balance

He wont ever let her fall she should know this

I think he wanted to kiss her but then he remembered his promise

So he just kissed her forehead instead

Both were totally lost in their world for now

I loved how each and every one enjoyed here

I don't think any house member had enjoyed themselves so much ever before

They always had to live in fear and control their emotions

But this one day they just let down their hair and partied hard

Advay had given them this chance and they used it to the full

I am so happy that the kids enjoyed so much too

They don't get to enjoy so much every day

I hope Advay does something permanent for them

Yash was so happy that he could fulfill his responsibility

Murli too was so happy he saw such an occasion after a long time

I loved how even Mishra ji enjoyed himself with his wife

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1019

I feel bad that the party came to an end so early

But all of them must be very tired and exhausted now

No one had to hear any more sad songs from advay

And they all could digest the food now after their dance

Murli had actually done something really good here

The kids had the most fun I think

Finally the guests began to leave

The marriage party was over and it was time to go back

She was so happy that Yash was so normal and enjoyed himself today

I know she could do anything to see him like that again

Wow so everyone will go to the temple and the Ghat now

That will really be so wonderful for Chandni specially

She subtly took Advay's permission to go to the temple

Poor Advay is searching for something and Sid is just busy teasing him

I think Sid loves to make fun of him and his situation now

But yes Advay if he will bow down to any one it will be before Chandni

As he did during the Jaimala ritual in the wedding today

Poor Advay it must be a total strain on his knees now

But why is he walking on his knees ? He can search normally too right ?

Poor Murli is in trouble now as Advay had given him some responsibility

and he could not fulfill it and now something is missing

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1020

Shikha already understood so she went and hid herself

Poor Advay Sid is still in his teasing mode now instead of helping him

I just love the nicknames these guys use for each other asshole moron etc

I just cracked up imagining an ACP trying to find shoes on his knees

Advay brought Sid on his knees this way just like he had made Advay do

He has other pair of shoes right he can wear some other one

He can search later why is he wasting time now ?

Poor Advay even the kids are laughing at him now

Finally he remembered Shikha and found her too

Poor Shikha he threatened her too but Murli saved her

Advay seems to be so tired now with all this exertion

I think some one had removed it in all the dance

Advay suspected Meghna too but she was the last person to do it

I can imagine the confusion and puzzle on her face

when Advay asked her about his shoes

Shikha too doubted her once but Meghna denied vehemently

She was not at all some one to do mischief

Advay too was getting impatient now

Time was running out he had a long day and wanted to rest

Poor Meghna of all the people to have been doubted for stealing shoes

But even this rasam was fulfiiled

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